VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.6.0] [JDOR]

[JJJ84]

Just did a quick search and couldn't find any post about it.

Am i the only one who thinks Ghostraven is Riley?
Same figure and body details. Ghostraven states that she can't babysit MC for obvious reason and the final trigger for me was the look between Lady Steel and Riley when they teleported home and MC is greeted by Parker.

Did i miss something or am i not imagining things. Would love to hear your input about this. Or the debunk

One thing I noticed to debunk this;

In the Profile Page, both Ghostraven & Riley pages are kept entirely separate;

Spoiler: Profile page for each

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While this can possibly be retconned by Jacquesdor later down the line (if he for some reason pursues the Ghostraven = Riley angle ), I'm hoping they're kept separate, because they're just completely separate characters.

 

[JJJ84]

v0.3.1 uploaded.

Just a bug fix to the issue with the emeraldisli variable and certain dialogue not representing whether you've had sex with her.

Something I noticed after checking out the Profile pages for the characters;

With Lady Steel, despite there being a Gallery icon to click, when I clicked it there didn't seem to be any special renders?





Is this supposed to be normal (cause all the other characters who have gallery icon, seem to have at least 1 special render inside their gallery), or did I miss out on clicking something in the past update to obtain the render?

 

[Old Grumpy Wolf]

Somehow I didn't, corrected that today.

Yeah. He's a real pain to deal with.

 

[Lathe29]

Just did a quick search and couldn't find any post about it.

Am i the only one who thinks Ghostraven is Riley?
Same figure and body details. Ghostraven states that she can't babysit MC for obvious reason and the final trigger for me was the look between Lady Steel and Riley when they teleported home and MC is greeted by Parker.

Did i miss something or am i not imagining things. Would love to hear your input about this. Or the debunk

I'm guessing no. Read this and decided to replay a bit of the first chapter and MC says Riley can't have powers because Parker was vaccinated against the gene. Also when Lady Steel first shows up and they're all standing together she's like a foot+ taller than Riley, MC has a poster in his room with Ghostraven posed behind Lady Steel and they're about the same height. They're both wearing huge heels but not enough to make up that difference.

 

[Chimba]

lol some moderator is going to have a good time deleting pages instead of posts , the funniest thing of all is reading comments from people telling others that they are going to block them...

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[TigerWolfe]

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lol some moderator is going to have a good time deleting pages instead of posts , the funniest thing of all is reading comments from people telling others that they are going to block them...

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Personally I announce it so they're not expecting further responses, and I don't check to see if they reply.

 

[Sonny86]

Android version?

 

[TheSalaminizer]

The first page says that in later chapters the MC will be able to make more choices. What chapter is this game on now?

Also, it says MC can decide to be a hero or a villain. How villainous can we be? Because he also says he isn't interested in adding any 'hard' BDSM, so where is the 'bad guy potential' located?

Please. A horse, a horse, my kingdom for a horse.

 

[Sousa69]

I'm a bit confused. Is their new content?

 

[Bobbycanfly]

So......I just found this game tonight. And I was wondering why it had a giant disclaimer and a "safe mode" at the beginning.

Now I know.

The game was a fine time. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.

 

[Reniere]

My only problem with the game doesnt have anything to do with parker being with another man ( even tho its a flashback and she moans the MC's name) im assuming this is because of his age back then but besides the point. my problem is much more simple and i hope it can be fixed.....

The scene Sequence linger to long and sometimes stay stuck until they move on there own. If possible for the next update those scene transitions could be sped up a little so they wouldnt linger to long. its a very stupid complain i know but i thought my pc froze a few times because i was confused till i realized it was just slow transitions.

Thank you

 

[Jericho85]

For my first and likely only post in this thread, I will translate what a lot of people are saying poorly. What's really being said is:

"There is an awful lot of unpleasant shit in this game that is not NTR, but can evoke some of the same feelings or emotions for me."

Also, it is disingenuous to pretend that Parker and Riley are not love interests, since the dev had to change the story so the MC did not grow up with them, to stay on Patreon. If they were not love interests, this would not have been necessary.

The Dev was pretty explicit that their non-family relationships to the MC were for story context purposes regarding the vaccines and events involving the MC's parents. It has nothing to do with placating Patreon as common as that is for other VNs. Parker and Riley undoubtedly will be love interests eventually, but they aren't just yet. If some vocal minority gets offended over LIs being sexually active prior to romancing the MC, then tough shitsky. For the rest of us, that's not "unpleasant shit". It's the 21st century. It's normal for single adult women to hook up from time to time.

The Dev wrote a rather in-depth breakdown posted on the first page explaining a lot of things regarding the content of the game, what to expect, and why certain things are in it. It's definitely worth a read.

Spoiler: Dev Notes

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[Avaron1974]

actively working against the audience that you are trying to sell it to

See, this is the problem.

No dev is going to please everyone so they typically have a target audience in mind.

The problem you and some others seem to have is you seem to think you are that target yet the game is full of content you dislike.

Now lets throw in a little of that not so common sense and that brings us to the oh so not surprising conclusion that you are not the target audience.

 

[Timesucker]

There is a reason even the best novelists have editors, because being too close to the story sometimes gives you horse blinders on what works and what doesn't.

I partly agree with you. However, some of the greatest works of literature were written 100, 500, 2000 years ago.
Did Homer have an editor when he wrote The Odyssey? There's merit to staying with your vision.
Also, an editor has established himself in his past work, which is why writers use them. What do we have here?
A bunch of randos trying to push his personal fetish or, even sadder trying to discourage the dev from creating what the rando hates.

 

[ohhiimfox]

See, this is the problem.

No dev is going to please everyone so they typically have a target audience in mind.

The problem you and some others seem to have is you seem to think you are that target yet the game is full of content you dislike.

Now lets throw in a little of that not so common sense and that brings us to the oh so not surprising conclusion that you are not the target audience.

Ava Ava Ava.... your barking at the wrong tree there... those folks thinks the world circle around them and their opinion... there is no point arguing with them.. if they cant keep quiet about things they dont like so be it let them whine like a toddler in the candy or toy store if they didnt get what they wanted....

 

[Jerk-man]

I think she is either a nymphomaniac or she has some kind of superpower that through sex you can get some information, as happens with Mc, have you thought about that? I wouldn’t even be surprised if @Jacquesdor makes it so that Parker didn’t have sex except that she could only force them to satisfy her in order to get the desired goal or information... in short, I have everything, everything is in the hands of developer!

That's what I was thinking dude! for some reason I thought that Parker had some kind of superpower related to the attraction of sex or to lure someone to him in terms of sexual attraction, and now look what superpower Mc has, he can pick up someone's power for himself while having sex.
but the developer is sure to provide us with an explanation of the story about Parker, otherwise there’s no point in just fucking around

 

[Avaron1974]

Here's the major issue with the line of thinking some of you have. From what i'm seeing some of you think the dev should take your feelings on board and change his game accordingly.

Lets see why that is a dumb fuck thing to do.

I'm a lesbo, don't get off to straight sex but I love the stories which is why I play them. However if a certain group is to get what they want then I want the Mc changed female and all the pussy tongueing to happen.

Pretty sure Joshy will turn up at some point, he's into sharing. That means the dev needs to add more male characters so Joshy can share his women equally.

Lets not forget the incest fans. Dev must rewrite the entire story to make them all related, even the magic wolves should be 2nd cousins twice removed.

BDSM fans will want everyone tied up and whipped.

Scat fans would like everyone to take a shit on each other.

Watersports fans should led the gold river run.

Sleep sex fans need everyone to have severe cases of narcolepsy.


In closing, constructive criticism is great but if you expect the dev to cater to you specifically then off is a direction you can fuck.

 

[JJJ84]

Yeah.
And if a dev gets rattled left and right by people's outcries left and right and tries to cater to all of them, it generally leads to the decline of the game.
Seen it happen with couple of the devs.

 

[Lerd0]

Oh sweet summer child. Its going to be a shit storm every single time this game updates.

 

[JJJ84]

Oh sweet summer child. Its going to be a shit storm every single time this game updates.

Spoiler: There's always the next time.....

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