VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.6.0] [JDOR]

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micojive

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I usually don't like it when different avn has weak Mc and a whiner who never grew in progress throughout the story. but in this game such Mc makes sense, the fact is that in every superhero movie the main characters started from low and rose up, remember every superhero?

for example, Spider-Man, who was a nerd, Batman, who seemed to be a private person with a rich soul and began to find value in superpowers, God can list them and list them, quite a lot of people went through weaknesses. So it's worth giving time to Mc, he grew up among all the superheroes where they were partially envious and of course this is new to him and he has to get used to it
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But in these examples they were weak before gaining powers...not after they get them.

Spiderman instantly starts saving peoples lives and grows a shit ton of confidence almost overnight and Batman becomes a literal billionaire getting over his weakness before starts becoming a hero.
 
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micojive said:
But in these examples they were weak before gaining powers...not after they get them.

Spiderman instantly starts saving peoples lives and grows a shit ton of confidence almost overnight and Batman becomes a literal billionaire getting over his weakness before starts becoming a hero.
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spider-man also doesnt have the justice league(ok xmen or avengers for propriety) up his ass tellin him to hide his powers....
 
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Tyrranus said:
spinless wouldnt have stepped up for lake
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Don't bother with these kind of ppl. Not worth it. I've seen these kind "spineless / beta MC" comments on a hell of a lot of games on this forum and I tell you, those were not spineless MCs at all. These ppl have a skewed perception of reality and it translates to their views on everything. Just ignore them, it's best. ;)
 
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micojive said:
Spiderman instantly starts saving peoples lives and grows a shit ton of confidence almost overnight
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I don't have an especially strong opinion about this topic, but have you ever read a Spider-Man comic book? Peter/Spider-Man is an incurable fuckup, and suffers from more neuroses and self-confidence issues than a 13 year old bullying victim.
 
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Joratox said:
Don't bother with these kind of ppl. Not worth it. I've seen these kind "spineless / beta MC" comments on a hell of a lot of games on this forum and I tell you, those were not spineless MCs at all. These ppl have a skewed perception of reality and it translates to their views on everything. Just ignore them, it's best. ;)
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fair I suppose cause nothing about the MC so far was spineless... sure he didnt go picking fights with super powered humans as a "normie" but who the hell would? and even then you have the option to rat out time stop girl and even tell her off.
 
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Scrolled all the way to the bottom comments incase of spoilers. Just wanted to say I'm still in the first part of the game and fuck does this story hit hard. Without spoilers everyone who has played will no what I'm saying when I say (park scene). Can anyone tell me if there is more stuff like this? This is the story telling that I love so much. One last thing I need to ask, can anyone tell me the name of the music thats playing right after that scene with Parker and Riley trying to comfort the MC?
 
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I definitely like the game, but I do wonder whether the characters being so loose with what they say is on purpose or not. I just find it really weird that MC (and other characters too) so easily said a bunch of things voluntarily like that. "Oh there's this girl in the prison who can make copy so we tried this because I just manifested" ...
 
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sigvar

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One sign of a good AVN for me is that even though in this patch there was only one lewd scene (a BJ), I really enjoyed the story and was irritated as hell when I got the save here screen.
 
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The amazing thing, like in some games, is that any comment criticizing a scene or simply giving an opinion that disagrees with the game is harassed and belittled by the pack of followers of said game while they boast about how open and free those followers are. As a result, the thread becomes their hunting ground and finally the patreons remain in small numbers. You are not defending the Dev, at all
 
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If Amber is always invisible, I do wonder how the doctor at the hospital could treat her without being able to see what's wrong.
 
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The MC and his friends are really plain stupids. They spend their time talking in public places of what they have to keep secrets about the very popular sisterhood. The whole interaction with the moviestar was also absolute stupidity, sharing stories about the secret base of the sisterhood and now saying he is awakened while he is supposed to pretend to not yet have power.
Him not using his powers in the bar was at least consitant with what he's supposed to do however the sisterhood should have told him that in case of danger he could use one power to protect himself.
 
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michelazzo

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excuse me... maybe I am really stupid, but I see no gallery and no "inventory" in the sense of knowing how much money I have for the prostitution scene.. (like the game keeps writing image added, scene added but I do not see anything!
 
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Warphorror said:
The MC and his friends are really plain stupids. They spend their time talking in public places of what they have to keep secrets about the very popular sisterhood. The whole interaction with the moviestar was also absolute stupidity, sharing stories about the secret base of the sisterhood and now saying he is awakened while he is supposed to pretend to not yet have power.
Him not using his powers in the bar was at least consitant with what he's supposed to do however the sisterhood should have told him that in case of danger he could use one power to protect himself.
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Not using the powers was probably the right decision, honestly. He doesn't really know how to use them and it could have gone south in a number of ways. There was paparazzi there because of Lady Steel. I imagine there might be fallout if word got out that some Dude splattered three guys in a bar with Moonsong or Emerald's power while hanging out with Lady Steel. He opted to stall until Lady Steel was done in the bathroom but he didn't account for the fact that she was an evening shitter.

It's a recurring thing that several characters are blabbermouths. I actually think it's a running gag at this point, particularly with Moonsong's sexual proclivities. She told him not to tell anyone, but that apparently excludes literally everyone they interact with :ROFLMAO:. Even Moonsong has told several people at this point, so I guess it's not much of a secret.

As for the convo with Anna, he tells her that his power is that any woman he has sex with falls asleep for hours but they get a mindblowing orgasm from it first. It was apparently a plausible cover because they bought it immediately.
 
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