VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.8.2] [JDOR]

[Deleted member 7769805]

Not only should the game be more feminist, MC should realize he's bisexual and start collecting powers from all genders. Also, we need some trans characters in this game.

did I say all the above to annoy the person I'm replying to? yes. do I also fully belive everything I said? also yes.

How to destroy a game v2.0

 

[DevinHesi]

Origin Story Special Render: Amber is waiting

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

Origin Story Special Render: Amber is waiting

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I said before i will say again, Amber is the best love interest so far. Her story/character development is the most fleshed out between the three current ones, specially after the latest update.
Hell i would easily choose her over the others if we are ever forced to do something like that.

 

[Rehwyn]

I said before i will say again, Amber is the best love interest so far. Her story/character development is the most fleshed out between the three current ones, specially after the latest update.
Hell i would easily choose her over the others if we are ever forced to do something like that.

It's hard for her to overtake Evelyn for me, but she's definitely close. I doubt you'll be forced to pick just one either, since it's a harem game with hints of early polyamory already.

 

[The_Man_With_No_Name]

It's hard for her to overtake Evelyn for me, but she's definitely close. I doubt you'll be forced to pick just one either, since it's a harem game with hints of early polyamory already.

They both seem to get off on watching you being with the other one so there is no need to pick.

In fact they'd probably get mad if you did since then they can't have their fun.

 

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Ghost reference, now that is something you don't see often.

 

[HornyyPussy]

Ghost reference, now that is something you don't see often.

Tell that to Ghostraven........

 

[The_Man_With_No_Name]

Uh oh.
One week with zero posts?
Thread abandoned?
Thread update when?

Jokes aside. By the way , is Coldsnap implied to be the next focus after Lady Steel?

 

[krakos9]

Uh oh.
One week with zero posts?
Thread abandoned?

Don't jinx it, the dev has a good balance of story and smut .

 

[Bommols01]

amazing game, but i find that change in evelyn thinking quite abruptly. It would be nice if there are some scenes she express more on her complex emotion at that time. And when the next update guys, moonsong is lovely and I want to get to know more about parker, ellen and ghostraven.

 

[Rehwyn]

amazing game, but i find that change in evelyn thinking quite abruptly. It would be nice if there are some scenes she express more on her complex emotion at that time. And when the next update guys, moonsong is lovely and I want to get to know more about parker, ellen and ghostraven.

He's on roughly a 3-month schedule and the last update was in early January, so hopefully sometime early April. I don't think he's officially announced dates yet though.

 

[HornyyPussy]

He's on roughly a 3-month schedule and the last update was in early January, so hopefully sometime early April. I don't think he's officially announced dates yet though.

Didn't Jaq say that the updates would take a little longer after the first few or am I mixing my VN's here.......

 

[Jinsoyun]

I'm not really a fan of the pheromone idea.
MC could theoretically kidnap any woman, lock her in the basement and after a few days or weeks she would automatically jump on him? Emerald and Moonsong didn't sleep with him because of their personalities, but rather because it's just unavoidable? Evelyn and Amber might not be in love if this is the case, their attraction is just inevitable after years of being exposed and MC never earned it.

Ruth was given the task of babysitting him and i thought she liked his good side and determination she saw during these days, and saw a man with a rare combination of personality and physical traits to be an honestly good match for her, but it turns out it's just pheromones?
The frosty lady has a personality to match her abilities and i thought we would see how MC melts the hard exterior just enough for them to get to know each other, but whelp, it's just pheromones.

I know that irresistible attraction is a kink that many people like and i'm not here to step on toes.
The writer is also doing a great job at building a compelling story and characters so i'm simply worried how this one detail has the potential to undermine a lot of it (or eventually spark a really nasty drama in the story). I've read the dev notes, i know that there is a long plan, i just wanted to write down my concerns.

Anyway, i'll definitely keep following the story and assume that Riley is Ghostraven.

 

[Rehwyn]

Didn't Jaq say that the updates would take a little longer after the first few or am I mixing my VN's here.......

He did, but the first few were on a 2-month cycle. Moving that to 3 months is the "taking a bit longer".

Though I think he may have mentioned in Discord a week or two ago that Ch 8 was taking a bit longer to pose, and he likes having the next chapter fully posed before releasing the current one.

 

[HornyyPussy]

He did, but the first few were on a 2-month cycle. Moving that to 3 months is the "taking a bit longer".

Though I think he may have mentioned in Discord a week or two ago that Ch 8 was taking a bit longer to pose, and he likes having the next chapter fully posed before releasing the current one.

AH!, That's where I got it from, thanks man!

 

[buttsman69]

I'm also a little wary of the whole pheromones thing but so far MC hasn't come across as super skeezy and I'm willing to trust that freedom of choice will still be significant.

This story is well put together with a lot of interesting and very autonomous characters, and I think their differences in "difficulty" and temperament are one of the greatest strengths this game has. Therefore I have faith

 

[mtrkar]

I mean to give him some credit, Parkers behavior is for sure strange lol

If there was any mature women in my life who gives a waiter a blowjob during my birthday dinner ... i would strongly worry about her mental wellbeing lmao maybe she is a nympho or secretly has a power which makes her horny all the time

I dont care about milfs in avns (if the mc isnt the same age like them) but i could see how it would make a milf lover less interested in her

Whatever, AVN's have multiple LI's, nobody has to discard a avn because he dislikes a single LI

I haven't played so excuse if this is an ignorant question but is the LI avoidable? If so, I completely agree. If not, then they should be likable in the slightest which based on other's reviews, she is not.