VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.8.2] [JDOR]

[Monetka_]

Special Render: Professor Ross Au Naturale

 

[Dr.TSoni]

Special Render: Professor Ross Au Naturale

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[anon9gg]

found a bug in 0.8 about the content options:
those are now moving into persistent vars at the start of each episode from ep3 onward, it looks like this for each var:

    if not persistent.analopt:
        if analopt == True:
            $ persistent.analopt = True
        else:
            $ persistent.analopt = False

there is a misconception with the 'not' keyword which only invert the result of the expression, you cannot check if the var is not initialized like that
so what happens here is at the beginning of each ep (from ep3), every content option sets to False will rollback to the original var from your current save, aka the global store (however its only visible if the original val was True)

the simplest approach to only init a persistent var once, is to rely on the persistent store's permissiveness in the eval -> the persistent's getter is made to always returns None as the default value (cf: when requesting an unknown field):

    if persistent.analopt == None:

or you can hard check if the field does not exist and thus was never sets to None (thats more a safe approach for third party script):

    if not persistent._hasattr("analopt"):

im aware of 4 other way (1renpy/3python) but in the context i recommend the None comparison anyway

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minor bug near the end of 0.8:
not sure why the old vars are still being used tbh (maybe some left over code) but, for the second choice both vars should be set to False here (ch8.rpy, l:8941):

            menu:
                "Go for the ass":
                    $ givenrimminggiveoption = True
                    $ persistent.rimminggiveopt = True
                    ...
                "Not for me":
                    $ givenrimminggiveoption = True
                    $ persistent.rimminggiveopt = False

 

[sudisudimagi]

No NTR in this right?
Bcz im getting NTR vibes when Evelyn talks about helping with the Dean

 

[sudisudimagi]

See, even my bro Fraser gets NTR vibes from Evelyn

 

[Rehwyn]

No NTR in this right?
Bcz im getting NTR vibes when Evelyn talks about helping with the Dean

See, even my bro Fraser gets NTR vibes from Evelyn

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Yes, no NTR. That scene is specifically Fraser being meta and teasing about readers claiming this is an NTR game when it isn't.

 

[anonnyscouse]

No NTR in this right?
Bcz im getting NTR vibes when Evelyn talks about helping with the Dean

The girl lost her virginity within the past few days and has only had sex with one person, her power is that she can touch someone then see the next day through their eyes when she sleeps.

But your immediate thought isn't "She's going to tap the Dean on the shoulder or brush past him to see what he's going to do the next day and tell MC if he does anything incriminating." which for me is the logical implication given what we know.

Instead your thought is "She's going to help with the Dean, that means she's going to do something sexual with the Dean", that just shows your insecurities.

 

[sudisudimagi]

The girl lost her virginity within the past few days and has only had sex with one person, her power is that she can touch someone then see the next day through their eyes when she sleeps.

But your immediate thought isn't "She's going to tap the Dean on the shoulder or brush past him to see what he's going to do the next day and tell MC if he does anything incriminating." which for me is the logical implication given what we know.

Instead your thought is "She's going to help with the Dean, that means she's going to do something sexual with the Dean", that just shows your insecurities.

the MC immediately says she doesn't want her to get into trouble with the Dean
What do you think that signified?
There's obvious chance of her being touched even without her consent
And incase you didn't get it, the picture I gave should have made it clear I was kidding

 

[JJ1960]

The girl lost her virginity within the past few days and has only had sex with one person, her power is that she can touch someone then see the next day through their eyes when she sleeps.

But your immediate thought isn't "She's going to tap the Dean on the shoulder or brush past him to see what he's going to do the next day and tell MC if he does anything incriminating." which for me is the logical implication given what we know.

Instead your thought is "She's going to help with the Dean, that means she's going to do something sexual with the Dean", that just shows your insecurities.

 

[Rehwyn]

the MC immediately says she doesn't want her to get into trouble with the Dean
What do you think that signified?
There's obvious chance of her being touched even without her consent
And incase you didn't get it, the picture I gave should have made it clear I was kidding

To answer the question about the Dean, he's a dangerous person since he seems to be able to send people to the Farm arbitrarily. He knows what Ev's power is, and I'm sure wouldn't want her trying to pry into his secrets if he notices her touch him in passing. The "trouble" MC mentions he doesn't want Ev getting into is in regards to her safety or academics, not something sexual.

 

[Jace_Herondale]

To answer the question about the Dean, he's a dangerous person since he seems to be able to send people to the Farm arbitrarily. He knows what Ev's power is, and I'm sure wouldn't want her trying to pry into his secrets if he notices her touch him in passing. The "trouble" MC mentions he doesn't want Ev getting into is in regards to her safety or academics, not something sexual.

Exactly. She said like 5 hundred times, MC is the only man she wants, and this guy is still insecure.

 

[Adequately Caffeinated]

I made some changes to the WT to move away from handholding for major choices and adding more notes/descriptions so people can make better decisions. The choices that are just better are still highlighted the way they were. This is mainly in response to me finally choosing not to stop Moonsong on that first night and playing through the fallout, bit late to the game there, but it was worth it. There is a lot of good stuff in there, Evelyn background info and such, and you can still get with Evelyn after a bit of drama. There aren't any major changes so if you have already explored your options there is no reason to grab it.

 

[Jace_Herondale]

I made some changes to the WT to move away from handholding for major choices and adding more notes/descriptions so people can make better decisions. The choices that are just better are still highlighted the way they were. This is mainly in response to me finally choosing not to stop Moonsong on that first night and playing through the fallout, bit late to the game there, but it was worth it. There is a lot of good stuff in there, Evelyn background info and such, and you can still get with Evelyn after a bit of drama. There aren't any major changes so if you have already explored your options there is no reason to grab it.

It is a good story, but I just can't do it to my girl.

 

[Lynava]

Exactly. She said like 5 hundred times, MC is the only man she wants, and this guy is still insecure.

I'm sure he even has lesbian mode turned off due to insecurity.

 

[Adequately Caffeinated]

It is a good story, but I just can't do it to my girl.

Wholeheartedly agree, but I didn't want people skipping over the other route completely, it is good story, worth seeing at least once.

 

[Lynava]

Wholeheartedly agree, but I didn't want people skipping over the other route completely, it is good story, worth seeing at least once.

I don't know, she bounces back too quickly, like yesterday she was crying and then bam, the next morning at college she's already hanging around MC neck.
looks too weird

 

[Adhdclassic]

I don't know, she bounces back too quickly, like yesterday she was crying and then bam, the next morning at college she's already hanging around MC neck.
looks too weird

It made sense that she rebounded back. She realized she didn't make it clear she was interested in more than a pact she wanted a relationship. Second women you had a bone for, for years says here want to fuck especially one that was believed worldwide to be a virgin. So I get the switch. What didn't make sense was the explanation she gave. That he believed in his mind she had already had sex by being in all those minds and he was frustrated. That made no sense for me her power in the sexual sense was the equivalent of a wet dream only difference it was real people.

 

[pie18]

Wholeheartedly agree, but I didn't want people skipping over the other route completely, it is good story, worth seeing at least once.

this too, im always being a goodie two shoes of a guy so even if role play as MC i wouldnt do that to eve

but because im trying to unlock all possible scenes and to see new dialogues
man when we beat the shit out of her oldman and then went into her room with her pouring her heart out
it kinda sad

dev knew when they can make people feel characters emotions with their writing skill

very good

 

[doccop63]

Exactly. She said like 5 hundred times, MC is the only man she wants, and this guy is still insecure.

Well, tbh, females Have gone back on their words so, there's that.

 

[idkWHYimHERE52]

Well, tbh, females Have gone back on their words so, there's that.

Bro really called a woman "female"