Mr.OctoPluto So I played the game. Plot looks promising, the visuals have room for improvement, but look great already. Overall, I see huge potential, but only sex scene is interracial with ntr vibe (although it does not occur with main characters). Could you spill the beans about direction of the story (nothing specific), so there won't be disappointment in the future that some content will appear, or vice versa won't?
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Let me think...
1- Regarding interracial being considered by many as NTR is a bummer but looking at most of the NTR games - most of them are based on such scenes. (Nothing wrong with it nor am judging the artistic choices), but as clearly conveyed through texts it was not NTR/NTS.
2- Story will feature all three characters (*others that will be added to the group) have intimate scenes with multiple partners, it won't be NTR/NTS.
3- This season is presently planned for 10+ or more chapters approx.. and will be based on this group, second season will feature different group with new characters. The goal not to rush Season 2, but i do not want to milk the audience with little to no progression for years with same characters and setting.
4- I am confident in the direction am going, but obviously I will take all feedback and try to improve.
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Thanks for the answer, as i said game looks really promising. As for interracial sex scene, overall i don't see anything wrong with that either, but opening scene looks like girl sending pictures of her sex with black guy, to her boyfriend or male friend, and only in the end we understand this all is just a mistake. So its not NTR, but it definitely felt like one till the last message of the scene. Anyway, good to know you have a detailed plan and vision. Wish you great luck!
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Aka: Kinetic Novel"Game is only Linear VN (No Paths/Choices are planned)"
Then it's NOT a game at all, basically a comic book
Like in the tag of the game.
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Probably a good idea to think about this "If it doesn't enhance the game, why is it there?".
That doesn't really enhance the game, if the target audience isn't sharing/swinging or NTR and such...
If your target audience is vanilla/harem then it actively makes the game worse and ruins player experience.
Like if it isn't working for the main audience, it's only ever working against, even if it is as simple as wasting their time. (most won't care too much, as that is more seen as a slight annoyance unless it is extreme time wasting).
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Oooooooo... it is a sharing/swinging game. (you'll want to add that tag btw).
NVM then. I made my comment assuming you were going for more romance and vanilla, which you clearly aren't. (romance ain't open relationships btw, that be lust).
I do suggest making that clear on the main thread to avoid confusion.
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It seems like you got hung up on my use of the term "win folks over," and missed much of the point of my post. What you are saying you are trying to make and what you are presenting are incongruent. And you next post makes it even more clear: (Put it in a spoiler since I can be long winded, read if you like, ignore if you want, you-do-you, there's a TLDR at the bottom)
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TLDR: If your goal really is to make a story that isn't focused on NTR/NTS then it seems like you have taken a big misstep, as that is the only crowed this will attract in its current state. And showing any amount of sex scenes with other character, and from your statement primary characters and even love interests eventually if not already, is either NTR or NTS. I'm not shaming anyone who likes those things, nor you if that is what you really wanted to do, I just encourage honesty and clear minded assessment of what you are making and who it is for. Best of luck in whatever you do, a rough start take off doesn't always equal a rough landing, so I hope everything goes well for you and you find an audience, cheers.
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Can it be sharing/swinging still if the characters are not in a relationship? (This is genuine question, if it is then I won't mind adding the tag)
I also received many requests for paths/choices and NTS/NTR, I am still not sure of it but one way I could do it, is by adding an additional path (Avoidable NTR/NTS/VANILLA paths) to the upcoming characters, while keeping Sofia and Mary on the OG paths.
This might please a lot of people, while not drastically changing my vision.
After all, I am going making this project for myself, I am talking all the feedback.
Love all your opinions, I am reading each and every one of them.
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Also please tell me if I am missing any tag after playing the game, if you guys think Sharing/swinging should be added I will do it.
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I understand, and I don't mind adding the tags NTR/Sharing/Swinging, I don't want to bait or confuse audience with missing/confusing tags either, I think I should just add the tags as all of you mentioned and at the same time explain the game synopsis in a bit detail. Also, the script can be improved for season 1, which I am working on. please continue with all the feedback, love you all so much.
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Quick answer:
1. Friendships are relationships and if two friends share a third party then it is swinging and sharing even if those friends never do anything sexual together.
2. Polycules can be platonic and involve sending pics/videos to each other to get each other off without actually having sex with each other. It seems like this may be what you are going for,
3. I have never seen "just friends" intentionally share pictures or videos of themselves having sex with other unless there was some underlying reason for it that makes the "friendship" idea suspect. Like attempting to make one or more "friends" jealous to get them to desire the sender or otherwise provide sexual gratification to each other which is not a standard friendship either.
Would probably be a good idea. Again, best of luck.
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I am now planning to add choices, after all the requests. I can't promise which chapter or when, since chapter 2 script is almost done, and I am focusing on improving chapter 1 after that. So, chapter 2 will be linear a well, but I will try to add new paths with upcoming characters while working on the OG. Thanks, you for all the feedback.As stated numerous times, kinetic novel = NOT a game
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Additional tags have been added to the game, so as to not bait/confuse. Please tell me if I need to add/remove any other tags, I Will later add planned tags/future tags list to the main page along with improved/more detailed overview.
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You guys asked for it .... I shall AND I WILL DELIVER!!! AN NTR PATH, best way to do it to make two versions of the game. That is right, I am taking a break from IRL work to focus on delivering a new NTR version of Chapter 1, and I will continue to develop two versions of the game simultaneously. NTR version of chapter 1 is now in production guys, With new script and renders. I will release Chapter 1 (NTR VERSION) NEXT week!
Thanks, you all for feedback, much love and have a Gooday guy <3
Thanks, you all for feedback, much love and have a Gooday guy <3
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I love the idea of having two versions. I hope it won't cause delays or a late release of new chapters. I'd rather have a single version with a 1-2 month release window. I still enjoy the current version but am excited for the new path and vision of thegame. I appreciate your honest and fast-paced approach to game development. Good luck, Dev!
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Hey thanks for support mate, yes! there won't be any delays for chapter 2, I still plan to release chapter 2 in FEB. Appreciate the trust, please come back next week and try the NTR version of Chapter 1.