VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Our Fate - A new family [v0.15 SE] [CedSense]

Loved it. Very well done and I cant wait for the next installment. This is more of a virtual Novel than game, but imho that's not a bad thing. Here we have high quality renders, and an equally good story to match, whats not to like? Well done.

The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs...


(12/16/2017 - Original Review - v0.1c)

On a recommendation I decided to give this one a play through... Thus far, even with it being really early in development, it is looking like a really good start... I really like erotic visual novels that place emphasis on good story telling, and not a bunch of erotic visuals thrown at the reader with little in the way of substance...

The visuals of the characters are good so far, and the backdrops are fine... The characters look more like actual real people, rather then a bunch of pumped up guys and super models, which deserves two thumbs up on the realism scale... A few of the backdrops I've already seen in other erotic VN's by other authors, so they are most likely from the same sources... I really like how the choices are presented, as they visually are more creative then other VN's using the same engine... The animations are top notch visually without any flaws that I could see...

The script is really well done thus far, with only a couple spelling/grammar errors... The father-daughter theme is present but there is an option to choose how it plays out (i.e. Real Daughter, Not your Daughter, or Undetermined/You don't want to know) which is a lot different then how other VN's handle that same general theme... Beyond that, the dialogue and monologue is well played out... The whole ex-girlfriend and orphan damsel in distress plot, is a lot different and more creative then other VN's in the same genre, that I've seen/read, which is a big thumbs up... I really like it when author/s are more creative with how they tell a story and present choice options... Being so early into it's development, the current content is short, but still tells a good introduction to the story...

Overall, I think this VN shows a lot of promise... And I can't wait to see how it develops... I'll definitely revisit this one a little further into it's development, since it is so early in it's creation... And I hope it keeps going with a deep story, balanced approach with the erotic scenes, and engaging script...


(01/26/2018 - Review Update - v0.2c)

The new content is pretty good, and you get a better sense of how the game mechanics will work with the protagonist and his daughter... Most choice options have a positive or negative choice... With the story routes looking like they take on a more Friendly/Loving/Caring route or a Cold/Mean/Dominating route with the choices... There are choices for other characters as well, some appear as though they will open and/or close different content in the future, as well as building or tearing down relationships with those same characters...

The new content in this update revolves primarily around the protagonist and his daughter... He doesn't tell her yet that he is her father, so who knows what events that might entail in later content... He helps her out with her financial troubles regardless which route you take, and in both routes he begins the ride back home (the current content ends at that point)... There is a reporter the protagonist meets briefly that he has some possible opportunities with as well in this update...

I still believe this VN/Game shows a lot of promise and I still like the content thus far... I'll definitely follow up on future content for this one...

Dating My Doughter clone or? Yes, or couse so far is not much content. Especially if you are talking about relations of main characters. Dev is trying to maka a story in which it will branch in four directions. That way, a player will have wide enough variety of choices to make and their qonsecuences. So far we have one sex scene with Fathers., fIance/wife/gf. Choice at the start between doughter/unrelated girl and unknown is somewhat novel and refreshing way to make a game about incest. You make a decision if it will be incest or not. Thats a big thumbs up for this position. It has 3D animations of intimate actions. Something which is not seen in Dating My Doughter. It is too early so far to say if it will be a big success or not but I has this something new, a story, plot, characters gamepley which makes it somewhat different from other similar projects. Fun part is that Fathers friend is big ass cop full of muscle, with him this game might be even more fun if you catch my drive, but not in NTR way or sharing.. at the verly least NOT MY DOUGHTER!! Dammit! So far it was a good introduction into the story. Nothing much but it was fun and interesting.

GOOD GAME, short introduction. Nothing beside that.

review Version: 0.1b

Art 8/10: The models are good (even if the dev could have made the daughter hotter tbh. ) A big plus to the characters show emotions during the scenes & as a whole they don't give the feeling of stiffness . a little minus cause the background a little "minimalistic" & cause the character pop out during conversations & are not part of the backgrounds. But as a whole is a pretty good job & there are animations too, that are fluid.

Story 8/10: i have to say that i'm pretty surprised by the story. At first i looked at the genre in the Op and i was like "Oh god no! another shitty 1 dick to rule them all incest harem close environment" but as the game started, i had to change my mind, I was pulled right into the story and hooked into it, it's well written, something really rare these days (and if you have red my other reviews, you know i can be brutal, even to games that i like). The only thing that i want to say is try to explore all the 3 option you have given in the beginning the first one "she is" is the most boring and the third one the best imho.

Sound 7/10: The dev took his time to put sounds into the game and it blends pretty well, even if personally i not a big fan of the background music.

Overall 8/10:Wow.. i was pleasantly surprised by this new game & the dev definitely know what he is doing. I was bitter that it ended so fast but there is a whole introduction to the game & it left me with wanting more and know what the future reserves for the characters. I definitely recommend this game.