This is the most disconcerting thing you can do to a story about long time teacher, especially a female teacher and her long time student - not to mention they lived in the same house and AMELIA WAS A MOTHER IN ALL INTENSES AND OURPOOSES to everyone in that place.
Especially before they would possibly part ways deffinitively - MC did not arrange any room and board and Amelia, as a mother figure and a respectable female guardian should have arranged something - MC is just booted out of the life he ever knew as a human being, living in a place with rules and poeple and guardians who were the people to look up to - MC is given the proverbial boot and he goes for it - no place that hires people would ensure room and board unless they advertise it and for young people, especially their first job, most would take advantage of them and put them in probation perios without pay - so MC is totally delusional.
You take away the humanity that we had to cling to the whole prologue, MC being a total shut in as he kept pining for a girl he did not seee or hear from in ten whole years, despite being in a place with many other people just as needy as him, if not clingier - refusing a hug between a long time motherly Amelie and a totally clueless shut in MC - it just takes us out of it: female teachers love being hugged and cheek kissed by their pupils - MC has grown under her eyes decades - this is disheartening to see the hug being taken out as a choice between such close like family individuals - get your head out of the gutter for a second and make these characters behave as humanly as possible, with emotions and actions accordingly.
By the way, we are just a few hours away from our next monthly release, and it features some warm hugs and a deep contextualization of the main story history.
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