VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

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Chemish

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Has anything changed in the Ch. 11 Prologue Full Version besides the Stan bug fix and additional Holly dialogue?
 
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Chemish said:
Has anything changed in the Ch. 11 Prologue Full Version besides the Stan bug fix and additional Holly dialogue?
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Final version of Ch.11 Prologue is pretty much identical with Beta version -- only a minor tweak: Holly switches to wearing more fashionable summer outfit with holly_change at 4+ instead of maxed out.

edit: incidentally, PilotLara there's some minor bugs remaining in this version of the prologue -- specifically, in Axel's messaging with Lena, the part concerning Cherry, there's a lot of mix-ups with what should be sent texts missing the italics and appearing as spoken dialogue as result. Also, for this bit earlier:
Python: 
                    if v9_axel_kiss != "kiss":
                        "I didn't want him trying to make a move on me again. I should've kept my distance altogether."
                    elif v9_axel_sex:
                        "We had tried, and it didn't work out. It was best if I kept my distance, especially after what happened between us..."
The order of branches would work better if swapped, otherwise Lena who told Axel to stop but ultimately gave in to sex with him won't acknowledge it happened.

For this bit:
Python: 
        if lena_go_holly > 3:
            h "Oh, um, yes..."
            $ fian = "n"
        else:
            i "We're leaving too. Do you want us to walk you to the station?"
there's no need for Ian's line to be behind else. Having it this way results in no offer to walk Lena to the station if go_holly condition is met, which makes Lena's follow-up line come out of the blue.
 
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Byczer said:
I really missed this game, I haven't played in a long time. I'm on ch 9 and it's progressing very well. It's really nice that every move you make has a consequence, I love realistic games.
I ship Ian/Lena, Wade/Cindy, Perry/Emma. But I think I'll try to do it in other relationships, these are my favorites for now.

I don't want this game to ever end lol. It's like a real life game. Love life, family problems, social life, working life, psychological situations etc.
I don't know if the developer is considering adding other things like marriage life, kids. It would be really nice if he added that kind of stuff as well with slow progress.
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not sure man but i don't think kids in a porn game is a good idea, maybe try the sims if that's what you're looking for
 
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ffive said:
Final version of Ch.11 Prologue is pretty much identical with Beta version -- only a minor tweak: Holly switches to wearing more fashionable summer outfit with holly_change at 4+ instead of maxed out.

edit: incidentally, PilotLara there's some minor bugs remaining in this version of the prologue -- specifically, in Axel's messaging with Lena, the part concerning Cherry, there's a lot of mix-ups with what should be sent texts missing the italics and appearing as spoken dialogue as result. Also, for this bit earlier:
Python: 
                    if v9_axel_kiss != "kiss":
                        "I didn't want him trying to make a move on me again. I should've kept my distance altogether."
                    elif v9_axel_sex:
                        "We had tried, and it didn't work out. It was best if I kept my distance, especially after what happened between us..."
The order of branches would work better if swapped, otherwise Lena who told Axel to stop but ultimately gave in to sex with him won't acknowledge it happened.

For this bit:
Python: 
        if lena_go_holly > 3:
            h "Oh, um, yes..."
            $ fian = "n"
        else:
            i "We're leaving too. Do you want us to walk you to the station?"
there's no need for Ian's line to be behind else. Having it this way results in no offer to walk Lena to the station if go_holly condition is met, which makes Lena's follow-up line come out of the blue.
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Thanks, ffive! They are rectified
 
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JoJoPool said:
not sure man but i don't think kids in a porn game is a good idea, maybe try the sims if that's what you're looking for
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I already love the game as it is. Since the game is very realistic, I thought the dev could add it. I hope the game lasts a long time with great content.
 
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ffive

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JoJoPool said:
not sure man but i don't think kids in a porn game is a good idea, maybe try the sims if that's what you're looking for
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For what little it's worth, Opportunity: A Sugar Baby Story has MC who is a mother of two little children and pulls it off very well, in the sense they make the MC much more believable, without making it creepy-weird. So it can be done, but it's also easy to mess up.
 
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Chemish

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ffive said:
Final version of Ch.11 Prologue is pretty much identical with Beta version -- only a minor tweak: Holly switches to wearing more fashionable summer outfit with holly_change at 4+ instead of maxed out.

edit: incidentally, PilotLara there's some minor bugs remaining in this version of the prologue -- specifically, in Axel's messaging with Lena, the part concerning Cherry, there's a lot of mix-ups with what should be sent texts missing the italics and appearing as spoken dialogue as result. Also, for this bit earlier:
Python: 
                    if v9_axel_kiss != "kiss":
                        "I didn't want him trying to make a move on me again. I should've kept my distance altogether."
                    elif v9_axel_sex:
                        "We had tried, and it didn't work out. It was best if I kept my distance, especially after what happened between us..."
The order of branches would work better if swapped, otherwise Lena who told Axel to stop but ultimately gave in to sex with him won't acknowledge it happened.

For this bit:
Python: 
        if lena_go_holly > 3:
            h "Oh, um, yes..."
            $ fian = "n"
        else:
            i "We're leaving too. Do you want us to walk you to the station?"
there's no need for Ian's line to be behind else. Having it this way results in no offer to walk Lena to the station if go_holly condition is met, which makes Lena's follow-up line come out of the blue.
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Thanks.
 
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BloodyMares said:
Which is why I always pick "Switch reviews with Holly" because in my opinion that allows Ian to play along but also try to figure out if Minerva really hates him for his work or if she's full of shit. What follows next is a bit too bold for Ian, calling her out in front of the entire office. Realistically, he'd just be certain that she's full of shit but keep quiet about it, with exception of maybe spreading rumors about her weird bias against him. Plus, in that route Holly knows that she doesn't seem to care about her writing either, only sucking up to her because of her success which pushes them closer. So in my "realistic" playthrough he gets together with Holly while being friends with Lena and trying his best to act professionally in front of Minerva while shitting on her books in his personal blog to vent his frustrations.
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Hey man, can you tell me when will you upload the walkthrough for the latest version?
 
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