Final version of Ch.11 Prologue is pretty much identical with Beta version -- only a minor tweak: Holly switches to wearing more fashionable summer outfit with
holly_change at 4+ instead of maxed out.
edit: incidentally,
PilotLara there's some minor bugs remaining in this version of the prologue -- specifically, in Axel's messaging with Lena, the part concerning Cherry, there's a lot of mix-ups with what should be
sent texts missing the italics and appearing as spoken dialogue as result. Also, for this bit earlier:
Python:
if v9_axel_kiss != "kiss":
"I didn't want him trying to make a move on me again. I should've kept my distance altogether."
elif v9_axel_sex:
"We had tried, and it didn't work out. It was best if I kept my distance, especially after what happened between us..."
The order of branches would work better if swapped, otherwise Lena who told Axel to stop but ultimately gave in to sex with him won't acknowledge it happened.
For this bit:
Python:
if lena_go_holly > 3:
h "Oh, um, yes..."
$ fian = "n"
else:
i "We're leaving too. Do you want us to walk you to the station?"
there's no need for Ian's line to be behind
else. Having it this way results in no offer to walk Lena to the station if
go_holly condition is met, which makes Lena's follow-up line come out of the blue.
