VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 Alpha] [Eva Kiss]

[selberdreher]

Can this thread have a little less doom-posting?

Fully agree with BloodyMares here.
There are clear signs, that EvaKiss is taking action.
Yet it seems that everything they do is met with negative comments by a certain group.
I assume even if Dev eventually posts "Chapter 10 is out tomorrow", this faction will respond with "Took you long enough" instead of "Yay, new update!".
How about returning to more interesting issues, like discussing the characters and their future development again?
I was sorely missing some support from my fellow Cindy fanclub on the Alison vs Cindy debate some days ago.

To reiterate: every character flaw ascribed to Cindy can be applied to an even greater degree to Alison.
Yes, the baseline personality of Cindy may be "Daddys Princess", but i don't see her spoiled beyond remedy. Alot of her more unfortunate characteristics are the results of her current predicament, job and relationship wise.
Whereas Alison shows basically the same characteristics, even more pronounced, without having those issues. And her 'what if' path (if Ian shows no interest in her), paints a way darker picture of her than Cindy.
Ask yourself again, how would Alison behave if she was Wades girlfriend instead of Cindy? She would be probably the least liked character in the whole game.

Of course i can relate to those who overlook Alisons flaws, because they favor her bodytype, her preggo kink (does she really has it, or is it your kink you get fullfilled, because she wants to have babies?), and her rather strange devotion to a committed Ian, if you chose this path. Alison strikes me a bit yandere, or am i completely wrong with this?

Edit:
it was pure coincidence blyzer posted a minute before me, this post is not a personal reaction to them, but indeed a suggestion geared towards the whole audience.

 

[Canto Forte]

Allison is the first reason?Ian gets into the plot of this game: get info+help from Jere
to get a shot at a relationship with Allison. Then the game makes it impossible to make the right points to achieve that goal because this game makes all girls grope Jere and
he grabs Allison while Ian goes alone and miserable the rest of the game until Lena shows any interest. This is a big joke on Ian, the game, for the most part, JEre has it dropped from the sky like a true bull trope stolen right outta most illogical VNs out there.

her rather strange devotion to a committed Ian

Alison strikes me a bit yandere

 

[selberdreher]

Allison is the first reason?Ian gets into the plot of this game: get info+help from Jere
to get a shot at a relationship with Allison. Then the game makes it impossible to make the right points to achieve that goal because this game makes all girls grope Jere and
he grabs Allison while Ian goes alone and miserable the rest of the game until Lena shows any interest. This is a big joke on Ian, the game, for the most part, JEre has it dropped from the sky like a true bull trope stolen right outta most illogical VNs out there.

Forgive me Canto Forte, but your comments are usually very hard to read and comprehend.

IF i understand your post correctly, you are insinuating, that Jeremy gets a go on every female in ORS which is, i believe only true if you play the game that way. I know for sure, that i cockblocked Jeremy at least once in my playthrough (by breaking up Louise x J).
And by doing so, he never got the after party scene with Lena in my playthrough.
My experience with Alison is limited, because i shipped her with Jeremy for personal reasons (i don't like her, so i gladly handed her over to him, and she seems to enjoy it), like i tried to get Perry together with Emma, which was a success so far, because i am not into Emmas model. So there are only like 3 out of 10 females he actually boned, and two of them (Louise and Ivy) are preset from the start. I would assume you can even block Alison from him if you choose to.

So i can't say for sure, but the bigger part of your comment seems to be incorrect.

 

[lipe2410]

this game makes all girls grope Jere

Not the game, but you with your choices. In my playthroughts the only one Jeremy get is Louise only because story starts with them in a relationship, but even her i take away from him so Lena can turn her in her sub

 

[selberdreher]

the only one Jeremy get is Louise

Hasn't he boned Ivy? You could be correct though, because i very faintly recall him (Jeremy) talking about a blowjob from Ivy he either already received or hopes to receive in the near future. It's really misty, i just assumed them to had sex already together, given both their 'sex positive' disposition.

 

[lipe2410]

Hasn't he boned Ivy? You could be correct though, because i very faintly recall him (Jeremy) talking about a blowjob from Ivy he either already received or hopes to receive in the near future. It's really misty, i just assumed them to had sex already together, given both their 'sex positive' disposition.

Was just a blowjob. If he boned her, sure he will right tell to Ian. And he is just a toy to Ivy. He will only fuck her when she think she play with him enough. And depending the plans of Eva, could also be possible screw Jeremy plans and take Ivy away from him too, either as Ian as Lena.

 

[Reaurt]

Hasn't he boned Ivy? You could be correct though, because i very faintly recall him (Jeremy) talking about a blowjob from Ivy he either already received or hopes to receive in the near future. It's really misty, i just assumed them to had sex already together, given both their 'sex positive' disposition.

They haven't hooked up yet, although one of the routes allows for a BJ between the two (if you initially keep Louise and Jeremy together, and do a few other things).

 

[mommysboiii]

lets ask the real questions who you you think has so most potential to peg the shit out our boiii ian??
monkaHmm

 

[Homemade]

dontcarewhateverno, Awesome guide for True Happiness.

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[JohnnyKiss]

dontcarewhateverno, Awesome guide for True Happiness.

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Holly has "Red" Hair? I thought it was Chestnut?

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

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Keep doing what you're doing.

 

[selberdreher]

lets ask the real questions who you you think has so most potential to peg the shit out our boiii ian??
monkaHmm

Are we talking about pure potential?

(...) Holly and Ian fucking Minerva in front of her husband or public in the office.
Holly will make Minerva deepthroat Ians cock until she pukes while double fisting Minervas arse and pussy, telling her what a needy cunt she is.
Holly orders Ian to cum on Minervas puke stained face and tells her how much better she looks now. After that she makes Minerva to knee down and watch Ian and her. While the liquids drop from Minervas face onto her large tits, Ian eats out a standing Hollys pussy and ass thoroughly. Holly will keep eye contact with Minerva to show that she is a Goddess compared to her. She will ask Ian if he likes serving her ass and he will say: "No part of my Mistress is dirty". Golden Shower is optional.

definetly Holly.

 

[Turret]

Fully agree with BloodyMares here.
There are clear signs, that EvaKiss is taking action.
Yet it seems that everything they do is met with negative comments by a certain group.
I assume even if Dev eventually posts "Chapter 10 is out tomorrow", this faction will respond with "Took you long enough" instead of "Yay, new update!".
How about returning to more interesting issues, like discussing the characters and their future development again?
I was sorely missing some support from my fellow Cindy fanclub on the Alison vs Cindy debate some days ago.

To reiterate: every character flaw ascribed to Cindy can be applied to an even greater degree to Alison.
Yes, the baseline personality of Cindy may be "Daddys Princess", but i don't see her spoiled beyond remedy. Alot of her more unfortunate characteristics are the results of her current predicament, job and relationship wise.
Whereas Alison shows basically the same characteristics, even more pronounced, without having those issues. And her 'what if' path (if Ian shows no interest in her), paints a way darker picture of her than Cindy.
Ask yourself again, how would Alison behave if she was Wades girlfriend instead of Cindy? She would be probably the least liked character in the whole game.

Of course i can relate to those who overlook Alisons flaws, because they favor her bodytype, her preggo kink (does she really has it, or is it your kink you get fullfilled, because she wants to have babies?), and her rather strange devotion to a committed Ian, if you chose this path. Alison strikes me a bit yandere, or am i completely wrong with this?

Edit:
it was pure coincidence blyzer posted a minute before me, this post is not a personal reaction to them, but indeed a suggestion geared towards the whole audience.

Forgive me Canto Forte, but your comments are usually very hard to read and comprehend.

IF i understand your post correctly, you are insinuating, that Jeremy gets a go on every female in ORS which is, i believe only true if you play the game that way. I know for sure, that i cockblocked Jeremy at least once in my playthrough (by breaking up Louise x J).
And by doing so, he never got the after party scene with Lena in my playthrough.
My experience with Alison is limited, because i shipped her with Jeremy for personal reasons (i don't like her, so i gladly handed her over to him, and she seems to enjoy it), like i tried to get Perry together with Emma, which was a success so far, because i am not into Emmas model. So there are only like 3 out of 10 females he actually boned, and two of them (Louise and Ivy) are preset from the start. I would assume you can even block Alison from him if you choose to.

So i can't say for sure, but the bigger part of your comment seems to be incorrect.

Hi und Grüße, Selberdreher!

Just a couple points on the Alison vs. Cindy discussion:
-You can keep Jeremy away from Alison even if you do not pursue her! The "full" Alison-Jeremy path has to be specifically targeted by the player, even more so than the "sharing threesome" variant.
- Actually Alison´s issues are far worse than Cindy´s pampered luxury ones. Alison´s Ex was a worse boyfriend than Wade ever was and going by the plot so far, she is targeted and stalled at work without any reason but "good, old-fashioned" mobbing! so it is quite understandable that she wants to have some fun now, preferably with Ian.
Cindy´s issues on the other hand are rather light. Most of her worries are about if she should take the model job, how to better bumming of her friends, if she should stay with Wade (who si not a bad guy, but needs to get his groove back) or jump into bed with Axel... oh the horror!
- I personally find Alison´s directness refreshing compared to some of the female cast who send mixed signals at best and deceiving ones at worst.

I too try to couple up Perry and Emma and gave Wade a metaphorical kick to fight for his relationship with Cindy. And it is then where you see why I do not like Cindy much. With Alison you know where you stand and when she says she will do something or not, with you or without you, then this is so. On the "Wade fights for his relationship" path you see clearly how backhanded Cindy can be in contrast. Using any excuse to run to Axel on the day where Wade has a singular chance to win a really important tournament, "great move".

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

Hi und Grüße, Selberdreher!

Just a couple points on the Alison vs. Cindy discussion:
-You can keep Jeremy away from Alison even if you do not pursue her! The "full" Alison-Jeremy path has to be specifically targeted by the player, even more so than the "sharing threesome" variant.
- Actually Alison´s issues are far worse than Cindy´s pampered luxury ones. Alison´s Ex was a worse boyfriend than Wade ever was and going by the plot so far, she is targeted and stalled at work without any reason but "good, old-fashioned" mobbing! so it is quite understandable that she wants to have some fun now, preferably with Ian.
Cindy´s issues on the other hand are rather light. Most of her worries are about if she should take the model job, how to better bumming of her friends, if she should stay with Wade (who si not a bad guy, but needs to get his groove back) or jump into bed with Axel... oh the horror!
- I personally find Alison´s directness refreshing compared to some of the female cast who send mixed signals at best and deceiving ones at worst.

I too try to couple up Perry and Emma and gave Wade a metaphorical kick to fight for his relationship with Cindy. And it is then where you see why I do not like Cindy much. With Alison you know where you stand and when she says she will do something or not, with you or without you, then this is so. On the "Wade fights for his relationship" path you see clearly how backhanded Cindy can be in contrast. Using any excuse to run to Axel on the day where Wade has a singular chance to win a really important tournament, "great move".

This guy gets it, Alison is nowhere near as bad as Cindy. Saying otherwise means you're a Cindy simp.

 

[RoboticCatDogHybrid]

Kinda wish we had a Cindy with the mind of a Allison. I'm all for impregnation fetishes and wish Cindy thought the same my fellow bros.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

Kinda wish we had a Cindy with the mind of a Allison. I'm all for impregnation fetishes and wish Cindy thought the same my fellow bros.

Nobody stops you from writing a fanfic. Go for it, my man.

 

[slavegal]

I'd like to answer you with a post i made here some time ago.

"I think most people here agree on Robert being a douchebag. Nevertheless Robert has some purpose and relevance in this Game.

Let me explain

1. Game Mechanics wise he provides the opportunity for a couple of Lust Points, which may be needed if you want to start Lenas Corruption early.

2. Robert provides early sex scenes which developers need if they dont want to rely on a) dream sequences or b) flashbacks; and developers need early sex scenes to keep or get the audience interested in their (porn-) game.

3. Exactly because Robert is being a Douche he doesnt railroads Lenas story too early.

4. Robert works as an early counterpart and (weak) antagonist to Ian. Lena can choose Robert one or two times over Ian which is nice for players who either
a) arent into Lena x Ian or
b) like to fight for (and eventually win) their girls (as i do: "Ganbatte (japanese for "Work hard/GoodLuck") Ian!") or
c) like some sharing or NTR vibes in their game (as omg Ian is such a wimp he looses even to a douche!)

5. For dramatic build up developers should not introduce strong antagonists (Axel) or EndBosses (Seymour) too early.
Ian (and Lena) need the chance to level up a bit before they have a fighting chance and can face them on equal grounds.

6. Robert is weak and needy and kinky, this enables us to provide ourLena with some defining traits:
a) does she give in to his demands although he has a weak character? then she may be more submissive than we thought
b) does she play his neediness and weakness against him? using him for her own goals? she may be more dominating or smarter then
c) does she like the roleplaying / cosplaying (i certainly do )? here we go
d) do u think kicking his sad butt out of her bed while she is already fucking him is one of the greatest moments in this game?
i certainly do

so no, i dont wanna miss Robert in this game, i am totally cool with him."

My view of Robert hasn't changed in those past months, i think he was purposefully created this way for above reasons.

I am not saying a decent, honest, hardworking and charming Robert would not have posed an interesting alternative narrative.
Since myLena shot down Mike immediately i am not sure about his role, but from what i gathered here, Mike is a cheater.

Oh my,...it is so hard to play this game because devs mix serious relationships besides annoying Robert. I can't stop when I play GGGB, but I can't engage in this game at all. It is hard to believe they come from the same dev. I believe devs did extra work to mix those relationships and make them counter each other, but I don't get the reason. Those relationships make every intimacy so heavy. I am constantly anxious about hurting someone by having sex with different roles.


Apparently, the devs set Ian and Lena's path the best one by implying they have true feelings for each other; however, this is a porn game in which I like to watch all scenes. Our Red Strings is not like GGGB, whose paths are relatively separated. Its stories are mainly about self-deprivation(meaning hurting myself rather than tangling with others). We just need to find and follow those paths in GGGB; no unnecessary serious relationships would bother us(Eric even "died" in time for our liberty...sorry to put it in this way). We can have as many sexes as we want without worrying about the consequences; some of our friends even fall with us, such as Eva in Gang's path. If we want to, we could seven marry that handsome gym boy even if we mess with many others(as long as we know when to stop) But in this game, when I play Lena, I constantly feel sorry for Ian, Molly, and Lena herself. I would be sorry for more roles when I play Ian if I wanted to see different scenes, such as Lena, Alison, Molly, Cherry, Wade...all are his FRIENDs! The game keeps reminding me that I might be hurting someone; for example, I had to confront Lena in the morning after sleeping with Alison last night(Perry leaked it as the story, I had no choice here). A porn game itself has been condemning me for my immorality all the time!

Porn games are supposed to relax people, not upset them. If I want to make serious selections, I will play Fallout 4, Detroit Become Human, etc...or I can exclude all intimacies except Ian's in this game; But in that case, why would I launch this game again? can not devs just give me the glory marriage ending?

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

Oh my,...it is so hard to play this game because devs mix serious relationships besides annoying Robert. I can't stop when I play GGGB, but I can't engage in this game at all. It is hard to believe they come from the same dev. I believe devs did extra work to mix those relationships and make them counter each other, but I don't get the reason. Those relationships make every intimacy so heavy. I am constantly anxious about hurting someone by having sex with different roles.


Apparently, the devs set Ian and Lena's path the best one by implying they have true feelings for each other; however, this is a porn game in which I like to watch all scenes. Our Red Strings is not like GGGB, whose paths are relatively separated. Its stories are mainly about sex. We just need to find and follow those paths in GGGB; no unnecessary serious relationships would bother us(Eric even "died" in time for our liberty...sorry to put it in this way). We can have as many sexes as we want without worrying about the consequences. For example, if we want to, we could still marry that handsome gym boy even if we mess with many others(as long as we know when to stop) But in this game, when I play Lena, I constantly feel sorry for Ian, Molly, and Lena herself. I would be sorry for more roles when I play Ian if I wanted to see different scenes, such as Lena, Alison, Molly, Cherry, Wade...all are his FRIENDs! The game keeps reminding me that I might be hurting someone; for example, I had to confront Lena in the morning after sleeping with Alison last night(Perry leaked it as the story, I had no choice here). The game itself has been condemning me for my immorality all the time!

Porn games are supposed to relax people, not upset them. If I want to make serious selections, I will play Fallout 4, Detroit Become Human, etc...or I can exclude all intimacies except Ian's in this game; But in that case, why would I launch this game again? can not devs just give me the glory marriage ending?

This game isn't for you then, and that's fine.

This site has smorgasbord of games that cater to your tastes. Try looking for them.

 

[CoalPhelps]

Forgive me Canto Forte, but your comments are usually very hard to read and comprehend.

IF i understand your post correctly, you are insinuating, that Jeremy gets a go on every female in ORS which is, i believe only true if you play the game that way. I know for sure, that i cockblocked Jeremy at least once in my playthrough (by breaking up Louise x J).
And by doing so, he never got the after party scene with Lena in my playthrough.
My experience with Alison is limited, because i shipped her with Jeremy for personal reasons (i don't like her, so i gladly handed her over to him, and she seems to enjoy it), like i tried to get Perry together with Emma, which was a success so far, because i am not into Emmas model. So there are only like 3 out of 10 females he actually boned, and two of them (Louise and Ivy) are preset from the start. I would assume you can even block Alison from him if you choose to.

So i can't say for sure, but the bigger part of your comment seems to be incorrect.

Not the game, but you with your choices. In my playthroughts the only one Jeremy get is Louise only because story starts with them in a relationship, but even her i take away from him so Lena can turn her in her sub

Guys, you better not answer him in all seriousness, it's AI™ that's collecting some data.

 

[CoalPhelps]

Oh my,...it is so hard to play this game because devs mix serious relationships besides annoying Robert. I can't stop when I play GGGB, but I can't engage in this game at all. It is hard to believe they come from the same dev. I believe devs did extra work to mix those relationships and make them counter each other, but I don't get the reason. Those relationships make every intimacy so heavy. I am constantly anxious about hurting someone by having sex with different roles.


Apparently, the devs set Ian and Lena's path the best one by implying they have true feelings for each other; however, this is a porn game in which I like to watch all scenes. Our Red Strings is not like GGGB, whose paths are relatively separated. Its stories are mainly about sex. We just need to find and follow those paths in GGGB; no unnecessary serious relationships would bother us(Eric even "died" in time for our liberty...sorry to put it in this way). We can have as many sexes as we want without worrying about the consequences. For example, if we want to, we could still marry that handsome gym boy even if we mess with many others(as long as we know when to stop) But in this game, when I play Lena, I constantly feel sorry for Ian, Molly, and Lena herself. I would be sorry for more roles when I play Ian if I wanted to see different scenes, such as Lena, Alison, Molly, Cherry, Wade...all are his FRIENDs! The game keeps reminding me that I might be hurting someone; for example, I had to confront Lena in the morning after sleeping with Alison last night(Perry leaked it as the story, I had no choice here). A porn game itself has been condemning me for my immorality all the time!

Porn games are supposed to relax people, not upset them. If I want to make serious selections, I will play Fallout 4, Detroit Become Human, etc...or I can exclude all intimacies except Ian's in this game; But in that case, why would I launch this game again? can not devs just give me the glory marriage ending?

But that's the core idea of ORS. The main characters are connected to each other and to other characters, so their actions have consequences in one way or another and that too must be taken into account when making your choices. It is with this idea that Eva began creating this novell and it defines the relationship between Ian and Lena. In fact, the title is a reference to Chinese mythology, in which there is a Red Thread of Fate, which is a red string around the fingers of those destined by fate to become lovers and get married.

As for the statement about porn games, it's false. The best and most successful AVNs are precisely those that make you feel feelings and emotions and make you think about life. But this site is also full of entertaining games that you're looking for, but they won't be of the same quality as ORS. That's because the core is what makes this game quality.