VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 Alpha] [Eva Kiss]

[Sethmsf]

Ian X Lena for me. I really like both the narrative and the scenes and you can see how little by little they are getting into the D/s; I hope to delve deeper into it, use the collar and leash on her and see how far they can go; Besides, it is the most versatile couple, being able to focus on more vanilla and tender, cuckold or cheat if you prefer.

 

[lorkdubo]

I hope sticking to one discipline will screw Ian in one of his fights.

Imagine Ian stepping into the ring and the only thing in his bag is kickboxing.

BJJ absolutely dominates the amateur MMA scene. It's a given that professional fighters have jujitsu guidance. But, in the amateur world if you are not trained in any kind of jujitsu then you're fucked. If you have no knowledge you are going to be imnari rolled and you are going to tap out.

 

[SerHawkes]

-Waits patiently for Ian-Ivy, knowing full well EK is gonna continually screw it over...-

 

[Sethmsf]

-Waits patiently for Ian-Ivy, knowing full well EK is gonna continually screw it over...-

It could be very interesting, I wonder if Ian could tame Ivy who seems to be used to being the dominant force; If it finally happens, I will explore it in some playthrough.

I wonder if in the future we will see a cuckquean route just like the cuckold exists. Ian X Lena X Ivy seems appropriate

 

[SerHawkes]

It could be very interesting, I wonder if Ian could tame Ivy who seems to be used to being the dominant force; If it finally happens, I will explore it in some playthrough

The IF factor being IF EK can get her head out of her ass and actually make it happen. If it does happen, I will very much be a happy, content man, while at the same time screaming 'IT TOOK LONG E-FUCKING-NOUGH'.

 

[GokutheG]

So what’s everyone favourite path with Lena?
I actually think most of Axel’s scenes are really good

I love her with Holly even tho that path starts so late watching their romance grow has been nice.

Her hottest scenes are the collar/double dildo ones with Louise. Only complaint seems that the relationship might not develop past that.

Holly/Ivy/Lena path is also hot if you're only looking for casual. This last update has me curious if there will be something with Emma in the future.

 

[Andrea9999]

So what’s everyone favourite path with Lena?
I actually think most of Axel’s scenes are really good

Mine is Lena celibate except with Holly, accentuating intelligence and exhibitionist and willingly going for Seymour's proposal and choosing UAE as a travel destination. Axel's use of the word "babygirl" makes my skin crawl (always hated that term) while Seymour's use of the word "doll" (beautiful...and above all...pliable and easily manipulated) is exciting. Nothing about Ian's thread interests me. I want to see the Seymour thread deepen and intensify with use of Agnes and then Dubai.

 

[Tulrek]

So what’s everyone favourite path with Lena?
I actually think most of Axel’s scenes are really good

I have to say that make Lena falling back into Axel hands is pretty sexy.
Holly is so cute and making a Hot Lena make her going wilder is naughty as hell.

 

[tbs9090]

Well perhaps Eva will write a spin-off....one off the Patreon restrictions...but you know as time goes on....and Lena's elegance has melted away....sadly....the Emirs will wind up selling her....*sigh* to the freak Mädchenfleisch market across the Arabian Sea and the Gulf of Aden.

So in this scenario is lena merely whoring herself out to these emirs for money at seymours request or has she actually been trafficked into sexual slavery?

Because the first one isn't so bad since a lot of instathots already do it, the second one however is kinda dark and is one step away from just having lena put inside a red room.

 

[GokutheG]

So in this scenario is lena merely whoring herself out to these emirs for money at seymours request or has she actually been trafficked into sexual slavery?

Because the first one isn't so bad since a lot of instathots already do it, the second one however is kinda dark and is one step away from just having lena put inside a red room.

OK I must have missed something but what in the story has people thinking that Seymour is going to start pimping Lena out in Dubai?! I haven't seen absolutely anything that hints at this.

 

[ffive]

I want to see the Seymour thread deepen and intensify with use of Agnes and then Dubai.

I suspect you're paying way more attention to that throwaway question about travel than EK ever did, or will. It's pretty unrealistic to expect there'd be new backgrounds and characters made for 3 completely different options like that.

 

[I-No]

OK I must have missed something but what in the story has people thinking that Seymour is going to start pimping Lena out in Dubai?! I haven't seen absolutely anything that hints at this.

I wouldn't completely rule that out but I don't expect it to happen.

Even though I was wondering before where Seymour's money might actually come from. Being asked about that from Lena he mentioned something about a long publishing dynasty. This might have made him very rich (there are enough examples of wealthy publishers: Forbes, Hearst, Burda, ...), but a girl delivery service to some dubious sheik in Dubai (or a any other rich weirdo in Singapore or Rome) might also pay quite well...

It might be possible, yes, but it's not very probable. I still think Seymour is just an honest admirer and eccentric art ethusiast with a lot of time and even more money at his disposal. And Lena is the perfect docile object for his unorthodox endeavours. I've seen worse...

 

[tbs9090]

OK I must have missed something but what in the story has people thinking that Seymour is going to start pimping Lena out in Dubai?! I haven't seen absolutely anything that hints at this.

Me neither then again i haven't really played the seymour path though i have seen the gallery and there's nothing that indicates anything of the sort other than a mention of dubai, to me his path seems more like a 50 shades of gray type thing but some people choose to view it differently i guess.

If your curious though you can check out the conversation here https://f95zone.to/threads/our-red-string-ch-11-epilogue-complete-eva-kiss.48813/page-2153

 

[Sethmsf]

I'm with you ffive, I think it's nothing more than a bit of narration showing Seymour trying to seduce Lena into a life of luxury and mechanically just setting a posh level for her depending on the choice. But who knows, EK may surprise us and we all have hope for one thing or another.

 

[SerHawkes]

I suspect you're paying way more attention to that throwaway question about travel than EK ever did, or will. It's pretty unrealistic to expect there'd be new backgrounds and characters made for 3 completely different options like that.

-Sees people wanting Lena to go to Dubai, become a sex slave to some emir, go down the deep end with all the bullshit corruption shit-

Are you people okay? Do I need to bring out a teddy bear and you can point where on the bear did the evil man or woman touch you?

 

[Sethmsf]

-Sees people wanting Lena to go to Dubai, become a sex slave to some emir, go down the deep end with all the bullshit corruption shit-

Are you people okay? Do I need to bring out a teddy bear and you can point where on the bear did the evil man or woman touch you?

Maybe we can reach a middle ground that leaves us all equally satisfied and dissatisfied.

I quote SerHawkes: -Sees people wanting Axel to go to Dubai, become a sex slave to some emir, go down the deep end with all the bullshit corruption shit-

 

[SerHawkes]

Maybe we can reach a middle ground that leaves us all equally satisfied and dissatisfied.

I quote SerHawkes: -Sees people wanting Axel to go to Dubai, become a sex slave to some emir, go down the deep end with all the bullshit corruption shit-

I mean in all likelyhood, Geymour will very likely use Lena to probably help secure or sweeten some deal there. How far that goes however, will likely depend on the player, and likelyhood of Geymour incentivising Lena's money. So, it's likely a probable.

Thing is though, I won't be going down that road since I flip off Geymour and don't deal with him at all, so I probably won't be missing much content or story for that matter, even if in all likelyhood it will be pandering to the cuckheads and small black cock fetishists.

 

[Sethmsf]

I mean in all likelyhood, Geymour will very likely use Lena to probably help secure or sweeten some deal there. How far that goes however, will likely depend on the player, and likelyhood of Geymour incentivising Lena's money. So, it's likely a probable.

Thing is though, I won't be going down that road since I flip off Geymour and don't deal with him at all, so I probably won't be missing much content or story for that matter, even if in all likelyhood it will be pandering to the cuckheads and small black cock fetishists.

Well, if you play the Seymour plot a little and you get along badly with him but you end up giving in to the blackmail, he ends up taking you to dinner and you meet the mayoral candidate who is having dinner with Agnes; He immediately notices Lena and that she is very beautiful, Seymour very kindly tells hom that if he needs it, he can lend Lena for him.

In my main game, Lena does the first two shoots with Seymour and when he calls her for the last proposal and reveals that the suspicions that he has put her on blacklists so that she will not be hired anywhere, Lena sends him to the shit and it's over.

 

[SerHawkes]

Well, if you play the Seymour plot a little and you get along badly with him but you end up giving in to the blackmail, he ends up taking you to dinner and you meet the mayoral candidate who is having dinner with Agnes; He immediately notices Lena and that she is very beautiful, Seymour very kindly tells hom that if he needs it, he can lend Lena for him.

In my main game, Lena does the first two shoots with Seymour and when he calls her for the last proposal and reveals that the suspicions that he has put her on blacklists so that she will not be hired anywhere, Lena sends him to the shit and it's over.

Yeah, I don't touch Geymours path to begin with. Mainly because it's uninteresting, despite EK putting "so much effort" into the guy.

 

[Sethmsf]

Yeah, I don't touch Geymours path to begin with. Mainly because it's uninteresting, despite EK putting "so much effort" into the guy.

I like to try different paths and see how they develop, but I have a clear idea of my main line of play and I hope it ends in a happy ending with both protagonists together, Axel in a ditch and Seymour in jail without any power.