VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 Alpha] [Eva Kiss]

[mommysboiii]

I think the best way for you to get the path you want is for Holly to sleep with Ian on the book trip, but then Ian breaking it off. Then let Holly become a slut with other dudes. Then this update have Ian call her hot, which might lead to them rekindling things. No other way do I see EK making Holly cheat on Ian when she is saying shit like this if they keep their fling going.

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yeah that vanilla path is a snoorfest I have a save for that path too

but the only thing that change is hollys appearance thats it but its pretty vanilla no drama (pretty boring)

 

[lucadiadis]

Not directly, but it deals MASSIVE DAMAGE to the crab guy, which makes it harder for him to get out of the submission.


As you can see in the script, Lena can only make one comment regarding Eli. If she's been cheating on Ian (and didn't commit to stopping it) then her musing over whether this counts as cheating takes precedence over thinking about threesome with Ian.

I'd presume it doesn't exclude possibility the threesome could happen down the road though, so likely no need to worry, as long as you meet the conditions (and Lena/Ian don't break up before it happens)


Not sure what makes you say this. Lena at the very fucking start of the game is a person without any real background and the only thing we learn about her is that she just broke up with her boyfriend Axel, which is one fixed aspect of all provided backstories in Ch.12.

My Lena has not cheated on Ian even once, had the threesome with Louise and him, and flirted with Eli. What am I missing please ???

 

[ffive]

How to make Ivy send more pics? The top option is greyed out. What´s the prerequisite?

You need to have a spar with her at the gym (requires decent level of relationship with her) and win it.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Perry was 6/10 on my sympathy score, but that dumbass's behaviour made it a hard 0 for me. Fuck you Perry, gonna cuck your ass in my every playthrough from this update onwards. The only gf you need is your right hand or a tgirl's dick up your butt . No Emma or Cherry for you.

I don't understand why Eva hates her characters so much. I worked on Perry for 12 updates, for so many years I tried to make him a normal person, but he acted degenerate even by F95 standards. Again.

Now he occupies his niche next to Stan. Really poorly thought out writing here. Yesterday he was more decent after Ian lessons and hang out with Cherry, today back on whiny cunt mode. Or maybe this is intentional - all male characters have some kind of red flag. For example, for Lena there are no normal male options at all. It seems that Baluart is a special city, inhabited by the braindead and retarded.
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[ffive]

My Lena has not cheated on Ian even once, had the threesome with Louise and him, and flirted with Eli. What am I missing please ???

Hmm i have no idea, but did your Lena mention Eli at all in your game? Because this depends on how well their interaction went during Lena's shift at the club, in Ch.11 (v11_bar4 == 3 condition)

If you're not getting this text about her:

           "I had been texting back and forth with Eli, the girl I had met working at Blazer."
            "She had shown interest in meeting me, saying she'd like to come to my next concert."
            l "I have the feeling she'd like to be more than just my friend... I wonder if she's into me?"
            l "I've never had a casual hookup with a girl... It could be a fun new experience."

Then they didn't click enough back then.

edit: also, re-checking the script, that comment about possible threesome depends on whether Lena/Ian have "open relationship" not if they've had a threesome with Louise. Although i don't think it's possible to have one without setting the variable... but would need to double-check to be sure.

 

[Xupuzulla]

For me the update is a 7/10 and the only reason and dont give it a higher rating is because the whole pirate meme update to dunk on us is so cringe and petty.
The update has tons of content for most of the active paths,only missing the girls who got content the last update like Alison,Cindy,etc.
If you only romance Holly thats on you.

 

[fatpussy123]

I don't understand why Eva hates her characters so much. I worked on Perry for 12 updates, for so many years I tried to make him a normal person, but he acted degenerate even by F95 standards. Again.

Now he occupies his niche next to Stan. Really poorly thought out writing here. Yesterday he was more decent after Ian lessons and hang out with Cherry, today back on whiny cunt mode. Or maybe this is intentional - all male characters have some kind of red flag. For example, for Lena there are no normal male options at all. It seems that Baluart is a special city, inhabited by the braindead and retarded.
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[SearingFive]

I don't understand why Eva hates her characters so much. I worked on Perry for 12 updates, for so many years I tried to make him a normal person, but he acted degenerate even by F95 standards. Again.

Now he occupies his niche next to Stan. Really poorly thought out writing here. Yesterday he was more decent after Ian lessons and hang out with Cherry, today back on whiny cunt mode. Or maybe this is intentional - all male characters have some kind of red flag. For example, for Lena there are no normal male options at all. It seems that Baluart is a special city, inhabited by the braindead and retarded.
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Well, Perry went full R, never go full R. You are absolutely right, helping that douche for so many episodes and he repays us with whiny BS. In my playthrough Ian paid him to get stuffs for BBQ and whatnot and Perry behaves as if he did everything. Nah, Geralt there is no helping this loser. Gonna make him miserable from this update onwards. I think Stan is better than him now.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

I don't know, the pirate prank was funny as hell. The dialogues and moments, they are so ridiculous to the absurdity. Ian, who jokes about Holly's mom, hits Perry, and then Wade goes into Leah Acting Lessons mode.
Eva Kiss , do Rick'Roll next time

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Well, Perry went full R, never go full R. You are absolutely right, helping that douche for so many episodes and he repays us with whiny BS. In my playthrough Ian paid him to get stuffs for BBQ and whatnot and Perry behaves as if he did everything. Nah, Geralt there is no helping this loser. Gonna make him miserable from this update onwards. I think Stan is better than him now.

Perry is greedy, rich, spoiled elitist kid. This update behaved the same: arrogant, like everyone should kiss his ass for inviting on his parents beach house.
"I'll take the master bedroom" (c) Perry.

So, another one deserve a trip to Somalia.

 

[SearingFive]

My Lena has not cheated on Ian even once, had the threesome with Louise and him, and flirted with Eli. What am I missing please ???

Try to have the experiment together option on when you commit to Lena at the park.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

Most obvious hint is she doesn't give any real fuck about Perry's opinion on her clothes, but will change her style at the beach house depending on what Ian tells her. Even if they've been just friends up to date.

I think Emma is probably aware of Perry's interest in her. But I don't think she's as interested in him, as he is with her. So if he doesn't make the effort to try and chat her up, she's quite happy for them just to be friends. It's obvious from her conversations with Ian, that she has no shortage of male admirers, so she's not going to make the first move with a guy she's so far, not that interested in ( at least sexually). So it's Perry who needs to make things happen. Because being the kind of person she is, Emma would probably give him a chance.

I also think Emma has always liked Ian a lot. But maybe she thought he'd be the kind of guy, who wouldn't be interested in a girl like her? Because he'd want to have a normal vanilla relationship, whereas Emma prefers to keep things casual. And I think she's quite surprised when he finally expresses an interest in her, but at the same time really glad that he does, which is why they both seem to click so well. So even if nothing happens between them, she still has these feelings for Ian, that just don't get expressed.

 

[lucadiadis]

Try to have the experiment together option on when you commit to Lena at the park.

It is already the case !

 

[ffive]

I suspect EK is more than aware Perry is unlikable character due to his flaws. At the same time, if the game is going to last these 16-20 episodes then it makes some sense not to frontload entire character arc. Perry has potentially made some strides if you get him to work at the cafe, but it's not silver bullet and it'll take more for him to fully shape up. If he ever does.

 

[lucadiadis]

Hmm i have no idea, but did your Lena mention Eli at all in your game? Because this depends on how well their interaction went during Lena's shift at the club, in Ch.11 (v11_bar4 == 3 condition)

If you're not getting this text about her:

           "I had been texting back and forth with Eli, the girl I had met working at Blazer."
            "She had shown interest in meeting me, saying she'd like to come to my next concert."
            l "I have the feeling she'd like to be more than just my friend... I wonder if she's into me?"
            l "I've never had a casual hookup with a girl... It could be a fun new experience."

Then they didn't click enough back then.

edit: also, re-checking the script, that comment about possible threesome depends on whether Lena/Ian have "open relationship" not if they've had a threesome with Louise. Although i don't think it's possible to have one without setting the variable... but would need to double-check to be sure.

I have that one: "I have the feeling she'd like to be more than just my friend... I wonder if she's into me?".
And we are in open relationship. I really don't understand.

 

[SearingFive]

It is already the case !

Do you remember what fetish you picked at Ivy's place? Also, if I remember I made Holly Ivy's pet.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

she already did have sex with him

I haven't played this update yet. Because the saves are bugged beyond Page 100.

 

[lucadiadis]

Do you remember what fetish you picked at Ivy's place? Also, if I remember I made Holly Ivy's pet.

A threesome with two guys. And yes in my playthrough Holly is not Ivy's pet. But in which way could it be related ?

 

[ffive]

I have that one: "I have the feeling she'd like to be more than just my friend... I wonder if she's into me?".
And we are in open relationship. I really don't understand.

Hmm ok, so which of these lines do you get after that?

                l "Would it count as cheating? I don't think it has the same connotations when doing it with a girl..."

                l "I wonder if she'd be open to a threesome with me and Ian... That could be interesting."

                l "But that's not what I'm looking for right now... Not when I have Ian."

                l "But I guess that's not what I'm interested in right now. Not when I have Holly..."

If you can attach a save from your game it'd make it easier to check, kinda hard to work blind like this.

 

[SearingFive]

Hmm ok, so which of these lines do you get after that?

                l "Would it count as cheating? I don't think it has the same connotations when doing it with a girl..."

                l "I wonder if she'd be open to a threesome with me and Ian... That could be interesting."

                l "But that's not what I'm looking for right now... Not when I have Ian."

                l "But I guess that's not what I'm interested in right now. Not when I have Holly..."

If you can attach a save from your game it'd make it easier to check, kinda hard to work blind like this.

2nd line for me. What was the req?