VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[SearingFive]

nah i wanna only focus on holly and play ian like a average guy so maybe I sleep with holly and dont commit to her I will see

but it piss me off that I cant corrupt her if ian/holly are dating because this would fit to lena slutty path and ivy so i guess the (corruptio) on hearth path is only used for the dressing and sex between ian and holly thats it AMAZING corruption arc

For Holly's max corruption; I'd say, wait for her as I pointed out in my previous post. Ian/Holly's dating path makes no sense in corruption because Holly got Ian anyway and she was trying to change for Ian. You can bring Holly back to Ian after she is corrupted enough and Lena/Ian has an open relationship with Lena in love for Holly. This is the only possible path for corrupted Holly to get Ian in the current patch.
Average or chad Ian doesn't matter for committing to Holly.

 

[mommysboiii]

For Holly's max corruption; I'd say, wait for her as I pointed out in my previous post. Ian/Holly's dating path makes no sense in corruption because Holly got Ian anyway and she was trying to change for Ian. You can bring Holly back to Ian after she is corrupted enough and Lena/Ian has an open relationship with Lena in love for Holly. This is the only possible path for corrupted Holly to get Ian in the current patch.
Average or chad Ian doesn't matter for committing to Holly.

nah that sucks I dont want a open relationship with lena thats probably for the people that want a 3 some open relationship both holly and lena as slutty people

but I want more a holly that act like gillian and a average ian so this would not fit that path

 

[SearingFive]

nah that sucks I dont want a open relationship with lena thats probably for the people that want a 3 some open relationship both holly and lena as slutty people

but I want more a holly that act like gillian and a average ian so this would not fit that path

So your endgame for Ian/Holly is corrupted Holly cheating on loser Ian right? I don't think this path exists as of now. Maybe in the future, Holly can cheat on Ian with Clark.

 

[GokutheG]

So your endgame for Ian/Holly is corrupted Holly cheating on loser Ian right? I don't think this path exists as of now. Maybe in the future, Holly can cheat on Ian with Clark.

If Ian and Holly are dating I don't think anything happens between the two. I think Clark's is being set up for a good Holly who's dating no one.

I forgot to mention that I had Holly interested in Lena and it seems that blocks Clark aswell.

 

[ffive]

so why there is even (corruption) to begin with on the ian hearth/love path if corruption is only used to change her cloth

The "corruption" is really just Holly becoming more adventurous and less shy about sex. On the love path it means she's more willing to engage in more kinky stuff and daring about expressing her own desires.

 

[SearingFive]

If Ian and Holly are dating I don't think anything happens between the two. I think Clark's is being set up for a good Holly who's dating no one.

I see, I haven't played her path that much so it slipped from my mind. Thanks.

 

[yuvce]

And then keeps making Ian wear a condom or no sex, yup, real subtle.

Doesn't force him to wear one if she went full bimbo and Ian hasn't fucked her yet.

 

[Blurpee69]

The "corruption" is really just Holly becoming more adventurous and less shy about sex. On the love path it means she's more willing to engage in more kinky stuff and daring about expressing her own desires.

Yep, it's why I hate calling it corruption. Encouraged or influenced is much better description for Holly following after Lena and Ivy.

 

[yuvce]

Lena recruits Stan for her Stalkfap twerk video. Discarded BTW.

You mean Lena twerking, right? Stan's just the cameraman, right? RIGHT?!

 

[mommysboiii]

So your endgame for Ian/Holly is corrupted Holly cheating on loser Ian right? I don't think this path exists as of now. Maybe in the future, Holly can cheat on Ian with Clark.

no my dream path is not a door mat ian just average/normal guy no sucessful book author or kickbox champion just office worker under clark or someone else in a relationshp like a average joe that loves holly (with cuddles and romance) like in good girl gone bad the blond guy forgot his name

and holly as a shy girl that slowly corruptes because of ivy/lenas influance and slowly does things like drugs/cheating /corruption because of there influance and enjoys it like gillian and fallls deeper and deeper and deeper

 

[mommysboiii]

If Ian and Holly are dating I don't think anything happens between the two. I think Clark's is being set up for a good Holly who's dating no one.

yeah that sucks I thought this is FIRSTLY a corruption game but I will wait and see how the alison,cindy and holly path develop nobody knows I mean there is enough vanilla build up and the corruption path/drama should start develioping

not that many chapters left

 

[mommysboiii]

The "corruption" is really just Holly becoming more adventurous and less shy about sex. On the love path it means she's more willing to engage in more kinky stuff and daring about expressing her own desires.

yeah thats not (corruption) and has nothing to do with (holly wants to be like lena/ivy)


but I will wait I mean we talk about eva kiss the good girl gone bad author

Yep, it's why I hate calling it corruption. Encouraged or influenced is much better description for Holly following after Lena and Ivy.

she is not following after lena and ivy at all not at the moment at least

lena and ivy are very different than holly in my playthroughs

this is why I said this is anti player choice and no idea why eva does this because the corruption would easily controlable with lena and 2 main character concept

 

[bonerland]

Doesn't force him to wear one if she went full bimbo and Ian hasn't fucked her yet.

One very specific path that again, only sees her okay with him blowing a load in her in the heat of the moment does not a good argument for baby trapping make.

 

[SearingFive]

no my dream path is not a door mat ian just average/normal guy no sucessful book author or kickbox champion just office worker under clark or someone else in a relationshp like a average joe that loves holly (with cuddles and romance) like in good girl gone bad the blond guy forgot his name

and holly as a shy girl that slowly corruptes because of ivy/lenas influance and slowly does things like drugs/cheating /corruption because of there influance and enjoys it like gillian and fallls deeper and deeper and deeper

This is like a nightmare ending for Ian . No passion or ambition just a nobody going through the rat race. From what I see you want to relive Gillian's life through Holly, talk about Ian's life to come full circle. Also, probably trying to replicate the failed artist Dave/corrupted Eva playthrough.

A hard-working average Ian with lots of love for Holly getting railroaded by cheating and a drug-abusing wife/gf. Yeah, I am clearly seeing Ian taking the easy way out like Ashley's dad in GGGB.

*Blonde guy in GGGB was Dave.

 

[Prince of Depression]

no my dream path is not a door mat ian just average/normal guy no sucessful book author or kickbox champion just office worker under clark or someone else in a relationshp like a average joe that loves holly (with cuddles and romance) like in good girl gone bad the blond guy forgot his name

and holly as a shy girl that slowly corruptes because of ivy/lenas influance and slowly does things like drugs/cheating /corruption because of there influance and enjoys it like gillian and fallls deeper and deeper and deeper

I have mixed feelings about this ending. On one hand it sounds very hot and exciting, but on the other hand like a sad, let's just call it "bad ending". It would have made for an even sadder ending if Ian had been oblivious to what was happening and lived under the illusion that all was well for him. His entire evolution, his path and struggles, his "red string", literally everything would have gone downhill.
And he would be happy with this. With "easy way" of living. A really dark vibe.

 

[| Vee |]

One very specific path that again, only sees her okay with him blowing a load in her in the heat of the moment does not a good argument for baby trapping make.

If Ian was involved with Alison then shifted onto Emma in club scene Alison vs. Emma(In CH5 i think) and isn't involved with Alison in anyway after club scene than in CH11 she will bait Ian "You can cry on my shoulder and I on your Dick!" She still didn't used condom instead went insane. Ian woke up in the morning and that witch was jump on his dick, guess what? "WITHOUT CONDOM!"

She just goes berserk mode. Go play this route.

This is the face she makes when he cums in her. Sorry my bad, When SHE makes him cum in her!

 

[| Vee |]

I believe other than Lena Holly can be other girl who let's Ian bring in other girls or at the very least won't be opposed to the idea if is open enough sexually speaking.

Something like:

Ian: "You are getting good!"
Holly: "Ivy teach me! Just some girls things!"
Ian:

some days later
Ian: "Holly, someone came to see you!"
Holly: "Ivy! What are you doing here?"
Ivy: "I thought, why not see live, how much you progressed?"
Holly: "..BUT-"
Ivy: "Are you objecting your teacher?"
Holly: "I... Ok!.. But Ian-"
Ian: "Oh! No, I don't mind!"
Ivy: *In a breathy tone whispering into Holly's ears*
"Don't you worry your pretty little head sugar tits, I might jump in I see you lacking!"
Holly: " *Shyly blushing while knees slightly bending* OK!"


Shout out to BlandChili for suggesting names for Holly!

Me and my dreams*sighs*!

 

[yuvce]

Ian woke up in the morning and that witch was jump on his dick, guess what? "WITHOUT CONDOM!"

No one can convince me that this specific part was just "the heat of the moment."

 

[SearingFive]

I believe other than Lena Holly can be other girl who let's Ian bring in other girls or at the very least won't be opposed to the idea if is open enough sexually speaking.

Something like:

Ian: "You are getting good!"
Holly: "Ivy teach me! Just some girls things!"
Ian:

some days later
Ian: "Holly, someone came to see you!"
Holly: "Ivy! What are you doing here?"
Ivy: "I thought, why not see live, how much to progressed?"
Holly: "..BUT-"
Ivy: "Are you objecting you teacher?"
Holly: "I... Ok!.. But Ian-"
Ian: "Oh! No, I don't mind!"
Ivy: *In a breathy tone whispering into Holly's ears*
"Don't you worry your pretty little head sugar tits, I might jump in I see you lacking!"
Holly: " *Shyly blushing while knees slightly bending* OK!"
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Shout out to BlandChili for suggesting names for Holly!

Me and my dreams*sighs*!

Meanwhile, Ivy facerides the living bejesus out of those two.

No one can convince me that this specific part was just "the heat of the moment."

The only heat was of Alison's loins. Girl needs to work hard for baby trapping.

 

[| Vee |]

Meanwhile, Ivy facerides the living bejesus out of those two.

Spoiler: *Ahem*

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Will put her down afterwards!
Gotta show teach that the principle runs this school!