- Mar 26, 2020
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The romantic path for Ian/Lena feels natural. Though EK did push us early on to pursue each other. I'd say it's just because of other subpar male characters, Ian fits like a glove. Lena/Holly for the lesbian path is another one, wholesome and fulfilling.
EK took a big step on going with two protags, so many POVs and branching. She needs more time and should stop or indulge less with the patron's narrative of the story. Stick with her guns and complete it on her terms. If she is open about it I am sure people would understand and support her more. Pandering made her lose focus and sprouted loose ends in the story.
EK took a big step on going with two protags, so many POVs and branching. She needs more time and should stop or indulge less with the patron's narrative of the story. Stick with her guns and complete it on her terms. If she is open about it I am sure people would understand and support her more. Pandering made her lose focus and sprouted loose ends in the story.