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I think she thinks about Axel and Jeremy too... Maybe dp heheheCindy & Holly ... the reasons for BlandChili's sleepless nights
I think she thinks about Axel and Jeremy too... Maybe dp heheheCindy & Holly ... the reasons for BlandChili's sleepless nights
Gilf material soon hehehe... She probably wants Axel to fuck her...
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Agnes has only made a brief appearance in the story so far, and she's not directly involved with the main plot. And that's probably a good thing. This wicked woman is only trouble. Her zodiac sign is Sagittarius.
Eh, not really. All I said was that physically they're appealing, but knowing their personalities turns me off of them.I think she thinks about Axel and Jeremy too... Maybe dp hehehe
I like you more and more. Glad to have you here!Eh, not really. All I said was that physically they're appealing, but knowing their personalities turns me off of them.
BlandChili is actually a TRUE men of culture he even has a CHYOA account at this point I actually thinks he must be a olympic and doing this full timeCindy & Holly ... the reasons for BlandChili's sleepless nights
I'm not a man at all, otherwise you're pretty close. I work in games design and want to publish writing of my own, I quite like CHYOA even though it's got way too many stories with no endings...BlandChili is actually a TRUE men of culture he even has a CHYOA account at this point I actually thinks he must be a olympic and doing this full time
Hey, that’s the same lust stat as Perry, the infamous "sitting at home masturbating to porn all day" seven. A bit surprised, Agnes, but I’m not judging.
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Agnes has only made a brief appearance in the story so far, and she's not directly involved with the main plot. And that's probably a good thing. This wicked woman is only trouble. Her zodiac sign is Sagittarius.
Give the old cougar some space, she probably sits at home masturbating quite a lot tooHey, that’s the same lust stat as Perry, the infamous "sitting at home masturbating to porn all day" seven. A bit surprised, Agnes, but I’m not judging.
granny action for who Ian of lena .seymour found his match.
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Agnes has only made a brief appearance in the story so far, and she's not directly involved with the main plot. And that's probably a good thing. This wicked woman is only trouble. Her zodiac sign is Sagittarius.
Too old to be a cougar. She'd be a sabretooth.Give the old cougar some space, she probably sits at home masturbating quite a lot too
I agree that it's not going to happen. Until the end-of-game wrap-up summary, any scenes we see where MCs aren't there in person for the start of it will either be shown through an unexpected walk-in or through text, photos and video. That's the way it's been throughout both this and GGGB and I just don't see Eva breaking that MC POV mechanic. I personally wouldn't want her to either. It's just the way narration works, where either a story jumps to multiple viewpoints throughout, sticks to one (or in this case two) viewpoints, or has a narrator throughout the story to fill in the parts the main-perspective characters don't. Changing styles up like that throughout a story is jarring to the viewer/reader and evidence of an inexperienced author, no matter the format. (Exceptions for creative geniuses who know the rules and break them successfully for an intended effect. Eva is very good at designing erotic games and creates some of the few that I don't lose interest in due to poor art or storytelling. But I don't think she, let alone any video-game writer, is close to that level).Yeah, I totally agree. Especially in a game like this, limiting yourself to just what the 2 MC can see takes away a lot. Not to mention that showing (the players) what's happening elsewhere doens't break anything, the game can be set and progress like it is now: it's just more content and more fun without the limitation above.
But it's probably too late for that, Eva should have guessed it when starting out.
I have a better idea since you are so desperate you could try this at home on your pc and do it yourselfAgnes clearly wanted to use Axel's cock during the photoshoot with Seymour... She craves young stud's cock... Maybe one of the guys gives her what she wants...Jeremy would be quite possible , he has fuck every pussy out there attitude...
Not really. There are scenes not involving the protagonist in GGGB that are shown through the narration of the other characters of said events. I'm sure this way of portrayal will also be used here. What I'm hoping is Eva to deviate a little bit with this formula on some major events, to show the events from the perspective of other characters. One way the author can do this is by having the protagonist be really worried of the current state of a particular individual and would be wondering what is happening to that individual right now. And, as if answering the protagonist, the game shows what is happening to that individual with the narrator maybe talking about the scene unfolding as well as talking about the protagonist and how this could affect them.I agree that it's not going to happen. Until the end-of-game wrap-up summary, any scenes we see where MCs aren't there in person for the start of it will either be shown through an unexpected walk-in or through text, photos and video. That's the way it's been throughout both this and GGGB and I just don't see Eva breaking that MC POV mechanic. I personally wouldn't want her to either. It's just the way narration works, where either a story jumps to multiple viewpoints throughout, sticks to one (or in this case two) viewpoints, or has a narrator throughout the story to fill in the parts the main-perspective characters don't. Changing styles up like that throughout a story is jarring to the viewer/reader and evidence of an inexperienced author, no matter the format. (Exceptions for creative geniuses who know the rules and break them successfully for an intended effect. Eva is very good at designing erotic games and creates some of the few that I don't lose interest in due to poor art or storytelling. But I don't think she, let alone any video-game writer, is close to that level).
When do those scenes happen? The only instances I remember dealing with material outside of Ashley's perspective is when people use their phones to show her videos of others without them being aware.Not really. There are scenes not involving the protagonist in GGGB that are shown through the narration of the other characters of said events. I'm sure this way of portrayal will also be used here. What I'm hoping is Eva to deviate a little bit with this formula on some major events, to show the events from the perspective of other characters. One way the author can do this is by having the protagonist be really worried of the current state of a particular individual and would be wondering what is happening to that individual right now. And, as if answering the protagonist, the game shows what is happening to that individual with the narrator maybe talking about the scene unfolding as well as talking about the protagonist and how this could affect them.
But the narrators are Ian and Lena. It's a story with two first-person narrators, and there's no external third-person narrator to talk about a scene unfolding elsewhere. So that would involve completely changing the rules of how the story's told halfway through.And, as if answering the protagonist, the game shows what is happening to that individual with the narrator maybe talking about the scene unfolding as well as talking about the protagonist and how this could affect them.
An example would be if you decide to corrupt Iris with his dad, Arthur. During sex, he tells Ashley how he slowly made Iris "open up" with him and how they are now fucking without constraints. And the scene didn't feel out of place because it connects with the current event of the game.When do those scenes happen? The only instances I remember dealing with material outside of Ashley's perspective is when people use their phones to show her videos of others without them being aware.
I don't dislike random perspective change as a concept but do when they occur in a narrative that have no history of containing them previously. Playing as, and viewing events through, only Lena and Ian for half a game but then suddenly being shown a scene between Wade and Perry, with neither protag present, would IMO feel like a really clumsy shift.
I don't remember that happening in GGGB, except for in the summary at the end, which is Kosher to writing standards in some good film, books, games, ect. If it did happen at some other points, though I don't remember any, I'd chalk it up to Eva's inexperience as a writer at that point. Now where would this ORS narrator come from who hasn't said a word from Chapter 1 to Chapter 9 so far? If they were there the whole time, fine. As is, what you're suggesting doesn't sound like quality writing standards, which is what I explained in my post.Not really. There are scenes not involving the protagonist in GGGB that are shown through the narration of the other characters of said events. I'm sure this way of portrayal will also be used here. What I'm hoping is Eva to deviate a little bit with this formula on some major events, to show the events from the perspective of other characters. One way the author can do this is by having the protagonist be really worried of the current state of a particular individual and would be wondering what is happening to that individual right now. And, as if answering the protagonist, the game shows what is happening to that individual with the narrator maybe talking about the scene unfolding as well as talking about the protagonist and how this could affect them.