VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 ALPHA] [Eva Kiss]

[Brickman]

I see, so the maestro provided the line work herself. Like I already said, the right (Lena's left) arm shouldn't disappear behind the shoulder blade. That would be extremely uncomfortable in this position. Here is how I would have made the incisions:

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If you draw it that way the arm looks weird to me, since it goes behind her hip. I understand Lena's throwing her shoulder back so her arm rests behind her hip. The way you drew it makes it seem like her arm is forwards and backwards at the same time to me, like her entire arm should go over her hip

 

[Ray1021]

Lena reminds me of her, Jennifer Connelly

 

[Sherka]

I think Stan it's a young Bernard

 

[applepie68]

Probably, but I hope not, if it is the story will be very forced. It means the MC:s are soulmates and destined to be together. Means no matter what we do in the game they'll end up together.

Wow I said it kinda off handedly cause I didn't actually expect anyone on this site to get it. Nice to see someone who gets the reference. Anyhow is the game any good?

 

[msleomac]

Probably, but I hope not, if it is the story will be very forced. It means the MC:s are soulmates and destined to be together. Means no matter what we do in the game they'll end up together.

I think thats the default version if you choose everything as it should be. But you can be sure there will be choices to deviate.

 

[yoda123]

I think thats the default version if you choose everything as it should be. But you can be sure there will be choices to deviate.

I don't feel so sure about that as destiny is unavoidable per definition, but maybe you're right.

What I do feel quite sure about is that the game will work to push them together, whether we like to or not. There likely will be points in the game we can't avoid, but with different paths to get there. If that's the case, the positive thing is that the project will be easier to manage by the dev.

This is just my thoughts, and either way it is going to be a good game, I don't doubt that. I expect this to be quite a different experience than GGGB was though.

 

[msleomac]

I don't feel so sure about that as destiny is unavoidable per definition, but maybe you're right.

What I do feel quite sure about is that the game will work to push them together, whether we like to or not. There likely will be points in the game we can't avoid, but with different paths to get there. If that's the case, the positive thing is that the project will be easier to manage by the dev.

This is just my thoughts, and either way it is going to be a good game, I don't doubt that. I expect this to be quite a different experience than GGGB was though.

I was thinking more like they might end up together but realise they are meant to be with someone else and that their relationship was only to heal themselves as they are both recovering from bad breakups. That seems to be the plot in most romance movies I've seen

 

[Djoki996]

I don't feel so sure about that as destiny is unavoidable per definition, but maybe you're right.

What I do feel quite sure about is that the game will work to push them together, whether we like to or not. There likely will be points in the game we can't avoid, but with different paths to get there. If that's the case, the positive thing is that the project will be easier to manage by the dev.

This is just my thoughts, and either way it is going to be a good game, I don't doubt that. I expect this to be quite a different experience than GGGB was though.

Wow! You people decided to go all philosophical, huh? I actually doubt you're gonna be forced to enter two main characters into a relationship. It will probably be a "default" route, but I don't think it's gonna be forced. Actually, I'm 90% sure it won't be.

 

[msleomac]

Wow! You people decided to go all philosophical, huh? I actually doubt you're gonna be forced to enter two main characters into a relationship. It will probably be a "default" route, but I don't think it's gonna be forced. Actually, I'm 90% sure it won't be.

All in good fun . I guess it just shows how much of a dedicated fan base EVAKISS has. And absolutely deserved

 

[Princess Groundhog]

The art is really professional-level and I'm hoping that means lots of cute and sexy clothing options for Lena. There were lots of outfit changes in GGGB but I'm hoping here we'll get an actual wardrobe function so we can wear what we like best.

 

[yoda123]

Wow! You people decided to go all philosophical, huh? I actually doubt you're gonna be forced to enter two main characters into a relationship. It will probably be a "default" route, but I don't think it's gonna be forced. Actually, I'm 90% sure it won't be.

We're doing advanced Red String theory.

 

[17demon]

a good start)

 

[slightchance]

I understand Lena's throwing her shoulder back so her arm rests behind her hip. The way you drew it makes it seem like her arm is forwards and backwards at the same time to me, like her entire arm should go over her hip

Throw your shoulder back at watch yourself in the mirror while doing the same pose. Look how ridiculous any of that is. Yes, it would probably more comfortable if her hand would rest on her hip but I wasn't bored enough to change that too.

I wasn't able find one picture where the arm (biceps) isn't directly connected to the breast through the armpit and resting behind the shoulder blade or rib cage as seen in her drawings. Send me a link if you do.

 

[SpikeZg]

Sooooo where is that 0.2 update?

 

[Lewdshi66]

Sooooo where is that 0.2 update?

I saw that there was a beta release yesterday, though not sure how much new content is actually in that release compared to the alpha.

 

[SpikeZg]

I saw that there was a beta release yesterday, though not sure how much new content is actually in that release compared to the alpha.

Beta is always bug fixes with no new content

 

[Lewdshi66]

Beta is always bug fixes with no new content

Ah ok, good to know!

 

[lucadiadis]

I've played Good Girl Gone Bad. While I absolutely hate the graphics, this was by far the best, most complex, most exhaustive storyline in the whole History of RPG games. On this basis I'll try that one.

 

[yihman1]

Will this game proceed with the male protagonist always doing his days out in front of the female protagonist, or will that switch up so that she gets the first move too? I think the best way it could be done is if it goes like this:

0.1 male 1st have of update female 2nd half of update
0.2 female 1st half of update male 2nd half of update.
0.3 male 1st have of update female 2nd half of update
0.4 female 1st half of update male 2nd half of update.
and so on...

So it's balanced and they are taking turns on who is the one being reactive to the actions of the other.

 

[qazxsw80]

I wonder whether Eva is going to stick to the same corruption system where girls are slowly getting covered with tattoos, piercing and so on. It would be interesting to see a bimbo version of that shy girl with glasses.