VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 ALPHA] [Eva Kiss]

[westler]

Thank you looks nice now play time

 

[Nutluck]

It was a nice start I enjoyed it. I liked the last game, I am curious just how "bad" we can go this time. I went the really bad girl path last game.

I did notice a few not spelling errors but the same kind of errors I make while working on GL. Placing the letters out of order on some words like wroked instead of worked. Not a lot of them but I noticed a few of them, just a heads up.

 

[Pizzapockets]

I always like it when the first few pages are just people licking the devs ass instead of you know talking about the game. Very valuable AND helpful when you need information about the game.

Clearly you don't know how good Evakiss is or you'd be kissing ass to instead of talking shit.

 

[gobbet]

Wow, game released this morning, and the thread is already three pages long...

 

[boulimanus]

The gameplay is improved and I like the different attributes.
The art however isn't better for me, plus there are a lot of clear cut and paste from GGGB.
But I'm looking forward to see where this goes.

 

[Brickman]

It's too early for me to make a review, but my first impressions couldn't be better. I was so hyped for this and it outlived all my expectations. A lot of content for a 0.1 version especially when compared to most 0.1 that get released these days, the graphics are top notch, not only the characters and the professional looking backgrounds (I haven't seen BGs so well done even in pro japanese VNs) but I really liked the design of the menus, it's such a big improvement from GGGB. Thus far the choices are really well implemented, with cleverly written dialogues and Eva Kiss manages to make character introductions fun and very flavorful instead of bland and boring exposition. I love Lena and I'm surprised how well the male POV is written for Ian, and all the supporting characters look very promising.
I think it's a big improvement in every aspect compared to GGGB and that game was the best, I can't wait to see how ORS developes. I'm just imagining GGGB on steroids and couldn't be happier

 

[pewpewrobot]

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Overview:
You play as both Ian and Lena as you'll be making choices affecting their storylines in many meaningful ways. As you uncover the world of ORS, you will face multiple-choice mechanics, branching story-lines and character depth and evolution.​

Thread Updated: 2020-03-28
Release Date: 2020-03-28
Developer: EvaKiss

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Censored: No
Version: 0.1 Alpha
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English

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You should add a link to their other game in the description.
https://f95zone.to/threads/good-girl-gone-bad-v1-2-jasmin-dlc-evakiss.2633/

 

[ShamanLab]

So many meaningful choices! So many action!

You can reading messages on cellphone! You can jerking off sitting by computer table! You can drink cappuccino in coffee chop!

I have only one question. Why i need Ren'Py VN for doing all this not very exciting or complicated stuff?

 

[Axel84525]

Thank you!

 

[Brickman]

It was a nice start I enjoyed it. I liked the last game, I am curious just how "bad" we can go this time. I went the really bad girl path last game.

I did notice a few not spelling errors but the same kind of errors I make while working on GL. Placing the letters out of order on some words like wroked instead of worked. Not a lot of them but I noticed a few of them, just a heads up.

The spelling errors are normal in the Alpha versions the proofreading is not done, those things tend to be solved with the Beta or final release, at least with GGGB it was like that

 

[xmilteach]

Thx

 

[theonlyondgreat]

A new game from EvaKiss. There is only one choice: Play the game!

I really hope there is some Femdom and BDSM in this game, but even if not, I am sure its great.

 

[Nutluck]

The spelling errors are normal in the Alpha versions the proofreading is not done, those things tend to be solved with the Beta or final release, at least with GGGB it was like that

I am aware, I was just letting her know. I know I prefer people to point out things like that in my work so it can be fixed as sometimes it gets missed.

 

[Brickman]

So many meaningful choices! So many action!

You can reading messages on cellphone! You can jerking off sitting by computer table! You can drink cappuccino in coffee chop!

I have only one question. Why i need Ren'Py VN for doing all this not very exciting or complicated stuff?

Well, it's not a game for you if what you're looking for is a quick fap where the main character gets dicked down 5 minutes into the game. It's called build-up and it's very necessary for a good story (DMD and a Wife and a Mother really took the slow-burn style to it's extreme) This looks like a more "mature" or "refined" version of GGGB and it's for people who want an engaging story with contest and fleshed out characters.

 

[slightchance]

A few spelling mistakes here and there but overall off to a good start. Lena's line-work (especially around the breasts) could use some overhaul though I think. Her arms are behind the shoulder blades which makes no sense. Would you agree?

 

[ShamanLab]

Well, it's not a game for you if what you're looking for is a quick fap where the main character gets dicked down 5 minutes into the game. It's called build-up and it's very necessary for a good story (DMD and a Wife and a Mother really took the slow-burn style to it's extreme) This looks like a more "mature" or "refined" version of GGGB and it's for people who want an engaging story with contest and fleshed out characters.

You still don't get the point. It's hard (for me) to fap on something what i can do in my real life almost any time without any significant effort.

 

[SpikeZg]

i didn't want it to end, it was that good, great job Eva
a lot of content for 0.1
i like the idea of two MC's and i think Ian & Lena are great, but Lena OMG, she is just stunning
The new art style is just fantastic, for me that's a 10/10
story, sounds, music

can't wait for 0.2

 

[xXlotus0]

I wish Eva had drawn in anime art style. Yes. I'm being weeb.

 

[Chottard]

No sex scene in this version ?

 

[DERAX12345]

Nice as always, too bad she wouldn't stick with fem protag only.