VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 ALPHA] [Eva Kiss]

[maliceinblunderland]

Nothing exciting so far. Bunch of bland, basic hipsters whining about how no one told them life was gonna be this way, with their dreams of being successful artists unfulfilled. Cry me a river.

The stutterer is especially annoying.

 

[Skandranon]

Didn't Evakiss have plans on doing a fantasy game next? Did she just give up on that?

 

[Firebless]

I tried it. Feels like some Mexican soap opera rip off but without mexicans which was really confusing for me.

Dont worry, you will be slurping on pink tacos pretty soon , next updates.

 

[Deleted member 1255551]

Finally, the new Eva game, with the quality art/writing/dialog we all love from her and have seen in GGGB! On one hand, I'm glad there is finally an alpha release and the game is in the process of being made, but on the other hand, it pains me to know that this is not going to be fully finished anytime soon.
Regardless, long live Eva and may this game keep the quality we love to see from her!

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Nothing exciting so far. Bunch of bland, basic hipsters whining about how no one told them life was gonna be this way, with their dreams of being successful artists unfulfilled. Cry me a river.

The stutterer is especially annoying.

Finally a helpful review.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

There's one thing I dislike though - the male protagonist. His thought process is too feminine i.e. it screams a male character written by a woman.

I actually think the writing is very well done. Just as men can write good female characters, so can women write good male characters. All it takes is being a good writer, and Eva definitely is.

 

[bauman]

I actually think the writing is very well done. Just as men can write good female characters, so can women write good male characters. All it takes is being a good writer, and Eva definitely is.

Of course. The writing is on the level of the previous game. I don't find the male protagonist believable at all though.

 

[enfuego]

Of course. The writing is on the level of the previous game. I don't find the male protagonist believable at all though.

Can you elaborate a bit?

 

[Princess Groundhog]

Agree to disagree.

On another topic, I hope we see more of Gillian later! She is absolutely adorable and I hope she comes back and becomes a character our main girl can pursue!

 

[CVDO]

gggb was an awesome pgame, if not the best. So in for this one

 

[jingkai]

No android

 

[ThunderRob]

dafuq..switched to female MC halfway through...oh well

 

[AnnaGotBlacked]

how to save? if i do right mouse click then there appears just only quit..

 

[Princess Groundhog]

..switched to female MC halfway through

Yes, finally!

Also, Lena and Holly is endgame. SO CUTE!

 

[AnnaGotBlacked]

how to save? if i do right mouse click then there appears just only quit..

ok guys i have it haha

 

[Baka!]

I very much agree with the comment that Ian's character does not end up fitting 100% as MC, I mean, in a way in this aspect is where you can better appreciate the fact that Eva Kiss is a woman. Men rarely talk as openly about their feelings with each other as women do, of course men talk about our feelings with other men but not in the way that Eva Kiss has tried to put it, men among themselves joke a lot, on many occasions men find out other men's feelings by making jokes that annoy them or coldly tell other men their impressions, but usually never so openly and never using soft expressions, even a group of nerdy friends have no problem speaking openly about sex, in general men even having romantic partners joke a lot about sex with other men

 

[Eggplant]

Do people actually believe 100% of all men are the same? Believe it or not some men are extremely open about their feeling and Ian is one of them and I have no problem with it. Plus, the guy is a "reviewer" and his job is basically sharing his opinion and emotion for a living.

 

[Ragnar]

Well, sorry Wade, you're gonna get cucked.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

And all male characters so far feel very true to their character with Jeremy being the most macho dude one of them all talking about his cock all the time. Pretty realistic, if you ask me.

 

[kekasaurus]

Another phenomenal piece of work by Eva Kiss. No sex in it but I just love the drama so much that I was immersed.