VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 BETA] [Eva Kiss]

[kolram]

How would I know that?

Personal experience?

You heard the buzz?

Maybe your mum told you?

 

[BloodyMares]

Well, Shouldn't Ed could just say that he found her insta by himself? Like we all have curiosities about our coworkers social media profile, isn't? It shouldn't be considered as stalking if Lena's profile is public.

Lena has an anonymous PG page where she goes by "bluenightsky". She never shared her real name.

 

[ffive]

Lena has an anonymous PG page where she goes by "bluenightsky". She never shared her real name.

Ed: I was just talking with this nice guy you share apartment with, and he told me. What's his name, Stan?
Lena:

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

Unfortunately Lena is railroaded into posing there anyway because Seymour made the Gallery guy stop working with her. However, it happens off-screen either in Ch 10 or Ch 11 prologue, Lena just casually says "I also started posing at the cafe", not really taking into account her attitude towards Ed being pervy. I remember in the early chapters she was very serious about keeping her modeling separate from her day job, but looks like Eva forgot about it and made Lena change her mind after the one time where he visited her at the gallery. Not to mention the plot hole where Lena could keep her modeling a total secret from both Ed and Molly, thus preventing Ed from perving on her Peoplegram. Which makes me wonder: How was Ed able to stalk Lena's Peoplegram and learn about the life drawing if she didn't tell him about being a nude model in the first place? And funnily enough, Lena never acts surprised after he says he just saw the announcement on her Peoplegram and she just shrugs it off and continues with the day instead of calling him out on being a creepy stalker and sending him away (or at least promising to have a follow-up talk at work).

Whooops.

Guess Eva's desire to streamline things is not without issues, huh? Lena still posing for the café regardless is disappointing.

 

[dolfe67]

Unfortunately Lena is railroaded into posing there anyway because Seymour made the Gallery guy stop working with her. However, it happens off-screen either in Ch 10 or Ch 11 prologue, Lena just casually says "I also started posing at the cafe", not really taking into account her attitude towards Ed being pervy. I remember in the early chapters she was very serious about keeping her modeling separate from her day job, but looks like Eva forgot about it and made Lena change her mind after the one time where he visited her at the gallery. Not to mention the plot hole where Lena could keep her modeling a total secret from both Ed and Molly, thus preventing Ed from perving on her Peoplegram. Which makes me wonder: How was Ed able to stalk Lena's Peoplegram and learn about the life drawing if she didn't tell him about being a nude model in the first place? And funnily enough, Lena never acts surprised after he says he just saw the announcement on her Peoplegram and she just shrugs it off and continues with the day instead of calling him out on being a creepy stalker and sending him away (or at least promising to have a follow-up talk at work).

Probably due to his cancelled route. There is start of something then nothing

 

[Ceesko]

Eva is taking her sweet time with this update.

 

[mommysboiii]

I cant wait for the release

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Eva is taking her sweet time with this update.

And the one before this... and the one before that one...

 

[Gicoo]

What's the issue? After you've played chapter 11 for one hour, you just wait 6-12 months for chapter 12.

 

[MF_DOOM]

Eva is taking her sweet time with this update.

Chapter 10 took like 9 months. This is fast for her.

 

[CyberL4d]

I heard that we will see 8-10 more chapters and the game will be completed. Well, assuming that a chapter takes almost 6-8 months, this means a very long time. Greetings to my future self, who will be the father of 2 children. I hope your interest in this game has not ended. And I hope ian gave ivy the cock she deserved.

 

[MF_DOOM]

I heard that we will see 8-10 more chapters and the game will be completed. Well, assuming that a chapter takes almost 6-8 months, this means a very long time. Greetings to my future self, who will be the father of 2 children. I hope your interest in this game has not ended. And I hope ian gave ivy the cock she deserved.

She is probably going to cuck him.

 

[JohnnyKiss]

What's up with the radio silence on the update?

 

[JohnnyKiss]

cuckolding fantasy or whatever.

Or whatever happened there...

 

[lipe2410]

What's up with the radio silence on the update?

She said the latest progress post would be the last before the release so she is probably in crunch time mode to finish and release it

 

[cloud77777]

What's up with the radio silence on the update?

I imagine it will be out sometime this week. Evakiss has done this before. Just be patient.

 

[| Vee |]

What do you guys think Seymour planned for Emma. Cause that kind of guy won't let go the humiliation that he faced.

 

[BigJohn99]

What do you guys think Seymour planned for Emma. Cause that kind of guy won't let go the humiliation that he faced.

he's gonna rape her hard

 

[John Doe Jr.]

I dont understand why people are so down on Seymour and call him the bad guy. He is definitely a good guy in this story.

He pays Lena very well, more than he has to, on the other hand Ed and Molly "the good people" pay her pennies like a sweatshop in China for backbreaking labor and later on make Perry work for free. Also Lena has to pose naked in their café.
Furthermore, for all the money Lena gets she can refuse some stuff on the job without being penalized for it and he lets her take some personal time without arguments when she got stuff with her mom.

He gave Lena a very generous gift as a bonus that no regular pleb could even dream of and probably worth more than a month salary and very rare.

He buys drinks for Ian and his friends at The Shine.

He supports local talent by going to music shows, art shows and taking scripts from upcoming writers despite being viciously assaulted by fat, vegan communists with hot coffee.
Also working closely and supporting a rising star of a photographer(Axel)

He supports local failed business who got ran down to the ground by incompetent owners by providing adequate offers.

He is being a dick to Robert

I support this message. #SeymourDidNothingWrong

 

[John Doe Jr.]

Dont call Emma like that. I know she is a bit unlikable for her believes, bus the has greatest ASS in the game and she loves anal. For that I can forgieve her many things. And btw hope to see Emma + Seymour action story when she hates him at first, but falling in love later (with lots of anal of course). Thats has good potential

Seymour gets his revenge and Emma becomes a sell out would be hot