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If you really want things to "go animal" it might be better to have Axel fucking Ian in front of Lena to establish his dominance over Ian, making himself more primitively attractive to Lena. Such an act is not strictly homosexuality as it is more a function of putting the competition in its place. I suppose Axel would then "finish" in Lena to give her a taste of the overall sordidness.
So far, it sounds like the creation of a small scale Hugh Hefner-like Playboy club. If yacht parties get introduced, it may ramp up....listen carefully for screams heard across the sea on a still night.
This would be difficult to address. Situations like this require the depravity to build up gradually with surprises injected that once digested leaves the reader longing for more and trying to anticipate the next step.
I like the actual interludes of Seymour with Lena, although as I have mentioned before, I was disappointed with the retooling of the mirror scene; I thought the original was more exciting. The scenes are too slow in coming; probably because they are the most difficult to construct. By comparison, in my view, all of the other arcs are quite mundane, dominated by small talk and stock porn scenes. EK needs to draw out the LSD arc much more carefully. In addition to Lena exhibiting herself to Seymour's "watch parties" I think he will at some point lend Lena to Agnes forming a side plot in which Agnes has some private sessions with Lena, exhibiting herself to Lena
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and having a joining between her bottom half with Lena's upper half
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Lena will eventually be lured to Dubai by the poshness characteristic, leading to escorted shopping trips during the day for the most expensive and revealing outfits which, at night, she will display and parade in front of a new and much more predatory audience, than the ones to which she catered back in Spain. I think the real depravity of the Dubai nights will begin with Lena sitting on the laps of the Emirs; they will probe and caress her suggestively while watching the more ferocious acts perpetuated on less exotic slaves. I also do not expect any explicit scat, but when EK breaks this arc off from ORS into a nonregulated forum, some of the Emirs' more outlandish tastes may be indulged. Lena may be instructed to drop her lingerie in front of a... well... different type of audience
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and then prepared for a new experience
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With the Emirs fully aroused, it will be time:
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. Hopefully their hunger will not lead them to a one-off
Just my two cents.
you have to wait like 7-8 chapters and all Ian gets is a shitty full of teeth blowjob
