VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 BETA] [Eva Kiss]

[Princess Groundhog]

I too don't like how the Louise path starts. I like her and I find her sexy, but I wish Lena had more chances to start that relationship. I mean after all, they live together and they sometimes sleep together for comfort. They should be shown to do that a few more times before sexy things start happening. And if Lena rejects her trying to kiss her that one time, I think it's over between them. Which isn't fair. In real life, you would explain, and be like, "Louise I really like you and really want to kiss you, but now is not the right time, I'm sure you understand."

 

[fortuna95]

I think I even recall Jeremy talking with Ian about the possibility of doing Alison together some time. It was just a short mention, but who knows?

That's right, here it is:

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But not threesome talk directly.

 

[BlandChili]

I too don't like how the Louise path starts. I like her and I find her sexy, but I wish Lena had more chances to start that relationship. I mean after all, they live together and they sometimes sleep together for comfort. They should be shown to do that a few more times before sexy things start happening. And if Lena rejects her trying to kiss her that one time, I think it's over between them. Which isn't fair. In real life, you would explain, and be like, "Louise I really like you and really want to kiss you, but now is not the right time, I'm sure you understand."

Lena generally seems have an issue with all of her partners so far (maybe except for Ian?) having to be triggered at the first sexual opportunity without a whole lot of buildup. Robert is also only an option if you don't reject his initial forcefulness. It would have been nice with a "dude, let's take it slow" option here and there.
Not sure what to make of Mike yet, he seems to behave the same way in ch. 7 regardless of wether or not I ignore him or at least talk to him at the first meeting.

 

[Leonardovisk]

Only if you give into her lustfulness. When I tried playing through that part Lena had options to both be into the work, hate it, or be neutral about it for the sake of earning an income.

My interpretation of the initial meeting between Lena and him, the dinner and first photoshoot, made me believe that Lena was really interested in him. In a brain level!

Do you guys believe Ian and Lena are really free or their path is already pre-determined and somehow stuck to the main story? Because, of course, will be a lot of roads but i like to think there is a main route for they, like a fairytale.

 

[Leonardovisk]

Jesus i cant believe that im debating scripts for a fapgame. Fucking homeoffice i need my boss whipping my back to stay in reality!

 

[popple]

i still have to wait for some interesting content... still only classical sex.
disappointed once again.

 

[BlandChili]

My interpretation of the initial meeting between Lena and him, the dinner and first photoshoot, made me believe that Lena was really interested in him. In a brain level!

Do you guys believe Ian and Lena are really free or their path is already pre-determined and somehow stuck to the main story? Because, of course, will be a lot of roads but i like to think there is a main route for they, like a fairytale.

And my interpretation was that she was scoping him out, trying to figure if working with him would be worthwhile.

I don't know if they are entirely "free," obviously the story will have some restraints and Ian and Lena will impact the state of the other characters in each others paths too. So far everything of a romantic and sexual nature between them is completely optional, so I don't see why Eva would suddenly switch up that design and force the players into something more linear.

 

[Sicansios]

i still have to wait for some interesting content... still only classical sex.
disappointed once again.

It is not only about sex. It is really entertaining, lot of choices, amazing pics and hot scenes. Will be kinkier later for sure, but dissapointed? I think for now the classical sex is really fitting with the character development

Well, im not impartial, since is on my top3 favourite games, for sure

 

[Reaurt]

Yeah, there is something. My problem is that I'm not sure if I find Louise, or just her path, all that attractive yet. I can't really put my finger on what my issue with her is. I guess one problem is that I dislike the initiation of their relationship, taking her right after a very public breakup, one that Lena was involved in triggering, but that's not necessarily an issue for all versions of Lena. I'm sort of hoping Lena wil have alternate point of entry on her relationship with Louise at some point...

Regardless I am doing a playthrough with Louise, if nothing else than to see the content for myself.

Yeah, I've been turned off by the Louise path and haven't really explored it. I'm kinda hoping that the make out session between Lena and Louise in the Ivy party, Louise's "spaced out look" when watching Ivy and Lena go at it, and Lena's suggestion of a FFM fantasy indicate that Louise may explore that part of her sexuality while still in the Jeremy route.

 

[Deleted member 2741684]

What do you think about Billy?

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[BlandChili]

What do you think about Billy?

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It does feel like Billy is a bit of an obvious setup for a porn route, but I'd like to see more before making any concrete judgements.
I'm sort of hoping that Lena can also make an independent modeling career for herself by finessing Danny, Seymour and Billy, therefore not becoming too dependent on any of them.

There is one thing about him that I was curious about: His vague source of money.
I can't help but feel like Ivy introducing hard drugs right as you meet him might be a hint that he's involved in smuggling.

 

[Chel]

What do you think about Billy?

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Oh god, I didn't even consider this. Id kill for another "pool party" type scene.

 

[Deleted member 2741684]

I'm sort of hoping that Lena can also make an independent modeling career for herself by finessing Danny, Seymour and Billy, therefore not becoming too dependent on any of them.

I'm agree with you.
Also my personal challenge for one of my playthroughs is making Lena's musician career

I can't help but feel like Ivy introducing hard drugs right as you meet him might be a hint that he's involved in smuggling.

It was the first time when Ivy & Billy met. So I think she got them by another way.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

Oh god, I didn't even consider this. Id kill for another "pool party" type scene.

What about a more classy thing like MetArt with Lena, Holly, Alison, and Ivy or Cherry, something like:

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[BlandChili]

It was the first time when Ivy & Billy met. So I think she get them by another way.

It was the first time it was used in the story. I'm not talking about Ivy's past. It just seemed a bit like some sort of hint that Ivy brings hard drugs up at the same time that Billy makes his first apperance.

 

[BlandChili]

What about a more classy thing like MetArt with Lena, Holly, Alison, and Ivy or Cherry, something like:

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Lena and Emma arranges a "girly" sleepover where they each get to invite one girl to partake!

 

[Reaurt]

What do you think about Billy?

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I'm on the fence about him, Eva did note that he's going to stir stuff up, plot wise. As a character, I don't know enough about him yet.

The porn producer implication is a bit obvious. If that's the case, I suspect he'll be used to either throw Ivy (and possibly Lena) down a porn path, or have Lena pull Ivy from the edge and strengthen their relationship that way.

He might also be used to change Jeremy. Billy might be so far down the path of objectifying women that he leads Jeremy to either fully embrace the bro-player persona or push Jeremy away from it, based on Lena or Ian's actions.

If we take him at his word that he's trying to start up a modeling agency, he could also be used to stir up drama in the modeling business. Perhaps Cindy, Ivy, and Lena all become models that represent competing modeling agencies. Lena does seem to have either modeling or musicianship as her primary career options at the moment.

 

[BlandChili]

Perhaps Cindy, Ivy, and Lena all become models that represent competing modeling agencies. Lena does seem to have either modeling or musicianship as her primary career options at the moment.

You know that would be kinda cool. Has the game hinted at any other career options for Lena so far? The early narrative seemed to suggest to me that there might be an option to purchase the café from Molly and Ed if she gets the finances to do so, I wonder if that will become an option.
Given that Lena can lose her restaurant job I doubt she'd stick with a career in the service section. The insta and onlyfans versions in the game seems to be "public" career oriented, but so far they've both been geared towards the modeling path only. I wonder if we'll get a choice with Lena to post less risqué content on insta if she chooses to focus on music.

 

[locoaceto]

Now that the topic is on Emma I'm curious if someone here would like to share their general impression for the Ian/Emma path, its progression so far and how you hope Emma will feature in Lena's path?

I've chosen to encourage Perry/Emma for my first pt. but I imagine I'll eventually do a Ian/Emma path when the game is a bit further into development.

I have a feeling that emma is gonna be the wildcard where as Ian it's may turn into 3some possiblities with Lena or jeremy. However as Lena I feel it could turn into possibilities of 3somes with Ian, Jeremy and Robert (still assuming he's the guy emma mentions that pursued her) I think because of her secretive nature she will also be that way towards Ian. if lena hook up with her. Perry will be the thorn of it all

 

[Reaurt]

You know that would be kinda cool. Has the game hinted at any other career options for Lena so far? The early narrative seemed to suggest to me that there might be an option to purchase the café from Molly and Ed if she gets the finances to do so, I wonder if that will become an option.
Given that Lena can lose her restaurant job I doubt she'd stick with a career in the service section. The insta and onlyfans versions in the game seems to be "public" career oriented, but so far they've both been geared towards the modeling path only. I wonder if we'll get a choice with Lena to post less risqué content on insta if she chooses to focus on music.

Good point, I had forgotten about the café. That option may be developed alongside the Ed storyline. Eva keeps having Ed do cameos (at least in my playthrough, he showed up during the nude art gallery scene in Ch 7.), so I assume she'll flesh out the café part of the story when she has the bandwidth to do so. Perhaps in the next update, with the musical performance. I think the next update will be more Lena focused, while Ian deals with the fallout of his choices.