VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 BETA] [Eva Kiss]

[J1215]

As for Lena's friends (for now):
1) Louise - I fully trust;
2) Stan-while can trust (I don’t know what will happen next. - I think if you are careful with taking pictures (model) in the future, then everything will be fine);
3) Ivy - while can trust. But Lena should not listen to her advice (if you want to follow the Good way).
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4) But Lena cannot be trusted with her mother.

 

[John Doe Jr.]

Unlucky Ian with friends:
1) Perry-talker who cannot be trusted with secrets;
2) Jeremy is one that cannot be trusted at all.

What about Wade? From what we've seen of him he's lazy with no ambition but he seems like a cool dude and not someone who'd stab you in the back.

 

[DashaTaran]

play as Ian...is boring
so... multiple MC? I hope this game can finish in 3 years

 

[godoff95]

Lena gives me GGGB vibes.

 

[Storm1985]

Can someone post the final version 0.2 here? Thanks.

 

[J1215]

What about Wade? From what we've seen of him he's lazy with no ambition but he seems like a cool dude and not someone who'd stab you in the back.

Yes, that seems to be the case. But he was little shown in the game. Therefore, it is still not entirely clear: 1) what is he really; 2) as if he behaved in a different situation; 3) what kind of friend is he really for Ian and how he relates to him.

 

[Ecstatic Dreamer]

Can someone post the final version 0.2 here? Thanks.

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[SpikeZg]

beta saves don't work for this

so quick CTRL playthrough , this time i didn't tell Alison that Jeremy was with a girl and still he and that good "friend" Perry threw Ian under the bus with a kissing/seeing a nude model story, well fuck you guys very much, for me they are DONE as "friends"

I hope Wade is a jerk as those two are so Ian can score with Cindy without hard feelings

will the save from this work with 0.3?

 

[Ecstatic Dreamer]

will the save from this work with 0.3?

I hope so

 

[X1nny]

beta saves don't work for this

so quick CTRL playthrough , this time i didn't tell Alison that Jeremy was with a girl and still he and that good "friend" Perry threw Ian under the bus with a kissing/seeing a nude model story, well fuck you guys very much, for me they are DONE as "friends"

I hope Wade is a jerk as those two are so Ian can score with Cindy without hard feelings

will the save from this work with 0.3?

Yes

 

[BloodyMares]

beta saves don't work for this

so quick CTRL playthrough , this time i didn't tell Alison that Jeremy was with a girl and still he and that good "friend" Perry threw Ian under the bus with a kissing/seeing a nude model story, well fuck you guys very much, for me they are DONE as "friends"

I hope Wade is a jerk as those two are so Ian can score with Cindy without hard feelings

will the save from this work with 0.3?

Fucking hell...okay, I'm done playing through Alpha / Beta releases, however interesting the experience of discovering new things might be.

I think only Jeremy has the actual intention to cockblock Ian. I don't think Perry realized that Ian wants to score with Alison, especially after he kissed Lena. Otherwise, he would say something to Ian about playing multiple games. So, Jeremy is guilty of being a jerk, Perry is guilty of being an idiot and a blabbermouth.

 

[Creeping Death]

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Character design (Stan)

Stan is another archetype I didn't include in GGGB: the nerd. Closer I had was one of Eric's versions, or maybe even Ashley's dad, but they were far from this.
While thinking about character dynamics for ORS it occurred to me that a character like Stan could provide some interesting interactions.

He's not an attractive guy able to seduce a girl, but he has his needs and fantasies too! Will they be granted to him, or will he remain unsatisfied and cringe-inducing? Maybe he'll get humiliated, helped, or even taken advantage of of. Stan is a character who probably doesn't have much agency, but the player does...

All in all he's a new archetype I wanted to try and work with. Let's see how Stan's role in the story turns out!

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O N E - S T A N - T O - F U C K - T H E M - A L L ...

 

[SpikeZg]

Fucking hell...okay, I'm done playing through Alpha / Beta releases, however interesting the experience of discovering new things might be.

yeah, i'm done also, i will just play the alfa in the future..., i didn't see any difference between alfa/beta/final
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and there is no changelog to see what has changed between versions so why bother...

 

[Dan5k74]

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Last time you wrote some polite and encouraging comments for Lena's Peoplegram. This time it's Ivy's turn, and she knows what's up! If you were one of her paying subscribers on Stalkfap, what comment would you leave in this picture of hers? Some of my favourites will appear in Chapter 3 of the game!

 

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Last time you wrote some polite and encouraging comments for Lena's Peoplegram. This time it's Ivy's turn, and she knows what's up! If you were one of her paying subscribers on Stalkfap, what comment would you leave in this picture of hers? Some of my favourites will appear in Chapter 3 of the game!

Hopefully we get some lesbian action with her and Lena in the next update or just lesbian action with any girl will do.

 

[Dan5k74]

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Last time you wrote some polite and encouraging comments for Lena's Peoplegram. This time it's Ivy's turn, and she knows what's up! If you were one of her paying subscribers on Stalkfap, what comment would you leave in this picture of hers? Some of my favourites will appear in Chapter 3 of the game!

Your ass is the best thing that could happen to a pair of leggings...

 

[BloodyMares]

yeah, i'm done also, i will just play the alfa in the future..., i didn't see any difference between alfa/beta/final
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and there is no changelog to see what has changed between versions so why bother...

The difference between Alpha and Beta was an extended scene for Ian's night out (new interaction with Alison at home which I already mentioned a few pages back) and the new requirement to trigger a kiss between Ian and Lena. In the Alpha, it was either 2 Lust or 2 Charisma + 2 Wits, making it quite hard to get if you lack either one or the other (and Lena has more opportunities to level up Charisma than Wits). In the Beta, she changed it to 2 Charisma / 2 Wits, solving the problem of not having enough, as long as you were focusing on one stat to have it on Level 2.

I did a quick search through the code of the Final version and the only change, apart from bug and typo fixes, was the change in Lena's song. She replaced "Nightmare" with "Abyss", making it the obvious choice because now it actually rhymes with the rest of the lines.

 

[Probando]

beta saves don't work for this

Saves work for me.

 

[B0SS_LADY]

I did a quick search through the code of the Final version and the only change, apart from bug and typo fixes, was the change in Lena's song. She replaced "Nightmare" with "Abyss", making it the obvious choice because now it actually rhymes with the rest of the lines.

But now she doesn't cry when you pick all the correct words (?)

 

[SpikeZg]

That Axel really fucked her up hard, poor Lena...

so what do you guys think...
what is this connection between Ian & Axel & Lena?