VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[Dsandr]

No, you can only contact her on Patreon.

She works with a writer or writes this story herself?

 

[BloodyMares]

She works with a writer or writes this story herself?

She does most of the work herself. You can go back a few pages and see the work process.

 

[fortuna95]

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Thanks, I can't wait to see one with Lena and Holly!

 

[Anzonio]

Soooo any updates? loving the game so far

 

[Reaurt]

Soooo any updates? loving the game so far

Maybe sometime next week, depending on where the dev is in her chapter progress.

 

[BellTower]

I'm not sure if feedback from here reaches the author/developer, but version 0.3 seems to have some bugs\errors that still need to be ironed out. I get fairly frequent error screens that seem to be random. I realize it's in early development, so I'm not complaining, just passing along the information.

So far I like the writing, artwork and characters. The characters seem well developed, and some of them are genuinely likable. I hope this game will allow fulfilling options to play "good" Ian and Lena playthroughs. I'm sure I'll sink to the depths of depravity in some playthroughs, but I tend to feel cheated when games force me into it. The characters are great, though. As Ian, I'm genuinely torn between Lena/Holly.

 

[Glooskabe]

As Ian, I'm genuinely torn between Lena/Holly.

Por que no los dos? I mean it's not really a given, but it seems to me that groundwork is being laid for a throuple there... Keep the dream alive!

 

[BellTower]

Por que no los dos? I mean it's not really a given, but it seems to me that groundwork is being laid for a throuple there... Keep the dream alive!

I'm betting it will be an option. GGGB almost had too many possibilities, to the point where the story lost tis focus. This seems to have a tighter narrative arc so far, but I'm betting there will be some 3some options. Lena probably needs some lesbian points though, which is a hidden stat. Watching and fantasizing about Louise probably helps to unlock it, though I'm speculating.

In any case, these are the more likeable characters tom me. I'm also intrigued by Cindy, because I think she'll be a challenge to hook up with. I like that not every character is an instant sure-thing.

 

[BloodyMares]

I'm betting it will be an option. GGGB almost had too many possibilities, to the point where the story lost tis focus. This seems to have a tighter narrative arc so far, but I'm betting there will be some 3some options. Lena probably needs some lesbian points though, which is a hidden stat. Watching and fantasizing about Louise probably helps to unlock it, though I'm speculating.

In any case, these are the more likeable characters tom me. I'm also intrigued by Cindy, because I think she'll be a challenge to hook up with. I like that not every character is an instant sure-thing.

There are no lesbian points. It's not how sexual orientations work lol. The only points that affect Lena's preferences in sex so far are BBC points.
If Lena had a date with Ian and Holly and chooses not to use a dildo when she masturbates, she can fantasize about Holly + Ian. Given that it's the only fantasy including 2 other people so early into the game, I bet a threesome with them would be a full-on romantic path and not just a series of flings. They are all so cute together.

 

[Cabot]

There are no lesbian points. It's not how sexual orientations work lol. The only points that affect Lena's preferences in sex so far are BBC points.

Hmm, not exactly. They're "bdick" points, reading the choices and dialogues they are related to I'd say that "b" stands for "big" and not for "black". More of a size queen complex than just a BBC thing, but we'll see.

 

[BloodyMares]

Hmm, not exactly. They're "bdick" points, reading the choices and dialogues they are related to I'd say that "b" stands for "big" and not for "black". More of a size queen complex than just a BBC thing, but we'll see.

So far they seem to be tied to Jeremy - you get the point for focusing on his dick and then for fantasizing about it. Considering Lena's comment that she's familiar with big (from Axel I guess), it would be strange that she starts with 0 bdick points and not with 1 point leftover from Axel, so naturally, I think they stand for "black". Kinda like how Ash could watch interracial porn to unlock some hidden variables for Tyrone (or his friends). Time will tell.

 

[scudamore]

I Hope in a more later version of this game, i could choose a path like this

1. Ian and Lena is a couple but they never had sex (hmm yeah maybe just kissing, rubbing breast or maybe a handjob, but no penetration), because Lena think that become a couple with Ian just because of pure love, she want to wait until marriage to have sex with him, so it's unnecessary right now.

2. Lena and Robert become sex buddies, If Lena want sex with him, that could immediately going to happen, same goes to Robert. Because they already had sex (twice) before Lena become a couple with Ian, so she addicted to have sex with Robert.

3. Lena with Axel... well maybe Axel had a porn company, and Lena unfortunately become a model for him because a blackmail from axel. So she has no choice and get on with it.

4. Lena with a rich man from the last update (sorry i forgot the name), Lena be a model but in the end become a personal secretary for him or maybe a pet in the office.

Actually there's some scenario that i liked to happen in the game, but this is the most that i want to happen. Yeahh that was just my opinion

 

[BellTower]

There are no lesbian points. It's not how sexual orientations work lol. The only points that affect Lena's preferences in sex so far are BBC points.
If Lena had a date with Ian and Holly and chooses not to use a dildo when she masturbates, she can fantasize about Holly + Ian. Given that it's the only fantasy including 2 other people so early into the game, I bet a threesome with them would be a full-on romantic path and not just a series of flings. They are all so cute together.

I thought I read something about a hidden lesbian stat, though it's entirely possible that I'm conflating something from another game. Thanks for the new information.

I genuinely like Ian/Lena/Holly more than I liked any of the characters in GGGB. I might actually feel bad when I inevitably make choices that ruin their lives. I'd like a poly romance option between them, but I'm sure the story will include some complications for narrative purposes. This story is already hinting at some twists. I'd bet that Minerva has a thing for Holly, and will take retribution when she finds out Ian is involved with her. The bad thing about playing this in alpha is waiting for the story to unfold. At least this isn't Eva Kiss first game. It isn't likely to be abandoned, and the updates are coming at a tolerable pace. It's rare to find decent writing in porn games. This seems to be a step up from GGGB so far. GGGB was for the kinks ORS is for the story.

 

[Lovely_Sight]

Best game!!

 

[Tserriednich'sNen]

I'ma really gun for a Ian/Holly/Lena poly relationship, those three really get along well and have such good chemistry. I'm hoping that's a potential threesome.

 

[Lndlordd]

There seems to be a new variable added during the Ian, Lena and Holly rendezvous in the first update (new coz i think it was just added when v0.3 came out) where holly finds lena pretty and if ian agrees there is " HollyChange + 1", might be something akin to lesbian points. (Disclaimer - Haven't looked at the script, drawing conclusions from the walkthrough)

 

[BloodyMares]

There seems to be a new variable added during the Ian, Lena and Holly rendezvous in the first update (new coz i think it was just added when v0.3 came out) where holly finds lena pretty and if ian agrees there is " HollyChange + 1", might be something akin to lesbian points. (Disclaimer - Haven't looked at the script, drawing conclusions from the walkthrough)

I interpreted it as a change in looks/self-image. Maybe she'll stop wearing glasses and loses the sweatshirt for something more stylish, idk. Similar to Lena's "LenaPosh" variable (if you have 1 point, Lena can choose to wear her casual clothes to Seymour's interview instead of dressing-up for him).

 

[John Doe Jr.]

I thought I read something about a hidden lesbian stat, though it's entirely possible that I'm conflating something from another game. Thanks for the new information.

I genuinely like Ian/Lena/Holly more than I liked any of the characters in GGGB. I might actually feel bad when I inevitably make choices that ruin their lives. I'd like a poly romance option between them, but I'm sure the story will include some complications for narrative purposes. This story is already hinting at some twists. I'd bet that Minerva has a thing for Holly, and will take retribution when she finds out Ian is involved with her. The bad thing about playing this in alpha is waiting for the story to unfold. At least this isn't Eva Kiss first game. It isn't likely to be abandoned, and the updates are coming at a tolerable pace. It's rare to find decent writing in porn games. This seems to be a step up from GGGB so far. GGGB was for the kinks ORS is for the story.

To some extent I agree, but GGGB was also about the self contained story of Ash's life and how she got to where she got. Story of her life pretty much. In that regard, I feel that both GGGB and ORS are similar games but that ORS is in many ways the upgraded version of that theme.

 

[John Doe Jr.]

I interpreted it as a change in looks/self-image. Maybe she'll stop wearing glasses and loses the sweatshirt for something more stylish, idk. Similar to Lena's "LenaPosh" variable (if you have 1 point, Lena can choose to wear her casual clothes to Seymour's interview instead of dressing-up for him).

That's very interesting. Inadvertently influencing Holly's decisions and self image of herself.

 

[BellTower]

To some extent I agree, but GGGB was also about the self contained story of Ash's life and how she got to where she got. Story of her life pretty much. In that regard, I feel that both GGGB and ORS are similar games but that ORS is in many ways the upgraded version of that theme.

I wasn't bashing GGGB. It just felt like the story lost focus toward the end because there were so many choices that they lost impact. In a lot of cases the text in later parts of the game contradicted earlier choices. it was a great effort, but maybe tried to do too much in its attempt to be a comprehensive kink simulator. By the time I did multiple plays to follow all of the threads, I no longer cared about the characters.

ORS has better characters that I'm already invested in. I hope I don't lose them to a muddy plot this time around. I'm okay with bad things happening to them, I just want to remain invested, if that makes sense.