VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[ffive]

- is accepting Seymour offer the only way for Lena of going in a sort of perverted/corrupted direction? I really hate the well dressed-well shaved-well in shape-old rich man stereotype and i can't force myself to accept his offer (like in GGGB with your mother's new man)

Lena's attitude (and to some extent, her backstory) depends on her generic Lust stat which can be raised simply by having sex and/or sex-related options. So, no, you don't need Seymour for anything. Note, you might be making a mistake thinking Lena is another "pure girl corrupted into a slut" tired porn game trope and repeat of GGGB, but she potentially is already very open sexually at the start of the game, due to her earlier relationship with Axel. (and previous, unnamed boyfriend)

- If I remember well in the first scenes there is the appearance of a strange hobo. Does he ever appear again?

Yes, he makes a brief appearance later in the game. No, it's not sexual.

 

[Geigi]

Note, you might be making a mistake thinking Lena is another "pure girl corrupted into slut" tired porn game trope and repeat of GGGB, but she potentially is already very open sexually at the start of the game, due to her earlier relationship with Axel.

Do send me a pm of games that have a female protagonist like Lena, if you want. I can't stand a questionable barely legal and "nuns" protagonists who turn into nymphomaniacs.

 

[ffive]

Do send me a pm of games that have a female protagonist like Lena, if you want. I can't stand barely legal and "nuns" protagonists who turn into nymphomaniacs.

Sadly i can't really think of any. Scratch that, i can think of one, perhaps: Inner Empire protagonist has none of the corruption bullshit and you can be as sexually open (or not) as you want from the start and throughout.

It's a very different game, though.

 

[Deleted member 5513179]

This episode, on the "devoted to Seymour" path at least, needs to end with Seymour creampieing Lena while she has her legs wrapped around his waist and screaming in ecstasy.

 

[amber111]

Ian's final form
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So his final form is a Bald, Gnome, Chad, Fuckboy.

 

[Nifferman]

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Quick status report:

I finally got the images from the colorist, and I've started editing and finishing them up. Once I have them all finished, I'll ensamble all the pieces of the update, playtest it and release it, hopefully at the end of next week!
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While I was waiting, I've started writing the follow up scenes for Lena in chapter 13, and I also did some progress in the artwork. I'm still figuring out which scenes to include in the chapter, since I want to try and move the story forward without wasting too much time. If you guys are interested, I can make a post commenting about the results of the

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we did, which I'm considering when coming up and planning the scenes to include.

Other than that, I'll keep focusing on pushing the next update out!

Looks like her speed is back!!

 

[fatpussy123]

Looks like her speed is back!!

I'd advise everyone to temper their expectations. The speed at which this update is coming and the fact it's been specified to be Seymour centric tells me there won't be much content, especially for people not on his route.

 

[Nifferman]

I'd advise everyone to temper their expectations. The speed at which this update is coming and the fact it's been specified to be Seymour centric tells me there won't be much content, especially for people not on his route.

Well Im sure most people here play multiple routes

 

[fatpussy123]

Well Im sure most people here play multiple routes

The amount of people complaining about a lack of content during the beach event, despite there being plenty on the Holly, Emma, and Ian x Lena routes, leads me to believe otherwise.

 

[The Krogan Dude]

Bruce Lee is shorter than Ian. Yet, he's a legend.

He died young tho.

 

[Nifferman]

The amount of people complaining about a lack of content during the beach event, despite there being plenty on the Holly, Emma, and Ian x Lena routes, leads me to believe otherwise.

I just tend to ignore em . Like, dude dont bitch about lack of content if u dont play multiple paths

 

[Xupuzulla]

The amount of people complaining about a lack of content during the beach event, despite there being plenty on the Holly, Emma, and Ian x Lena routes, leads me to believe otherwise.

Oh is going to be really bad when this Seymour central update gets released,i hope you guys are ready

 

[The Krogan Dude]

Oh is going to be really bad when this Seymour central update gets released,i hope you guys are ready

You're joking right ?

 

[Xupuzulla]

You're joking right ?

Like fatpussy said,people complained about all the chapter 12 releases even through all had content,i dont know what kind of saves some people have here,Lena-Ian pure save and thats it?

 

[TangerineTango]

When's the expected ETA of a new update for this game?

 

[Geigi]

I'd advise everyone to temper their expectations. The speed at which this update is coming and the fact it's been specified to be Seymour centric tells me there won't be much content, especially for people not on his route.

Eh, in the remaining chapters left Eva will wrap up the story with other characters.

 

[Nifferman]

Eh, the game have 15-16 chapters. Eva will wrap up the story with other characters.

No, def this game will have 18 chapters at least I personally think it should have around 21-24 chapters. Like it already ch 13 and the story feels like its just taking off, characters like Ivy, Alison, Cindy and more does even have proper label to their relation with Ian, so unless Eva is planning rush the story I think its a bit of stretch to say the game will be completed within 15-16 chapters.

 

[RobertKing]

Yeah, those have been done to death. (So has the struggling author to be fair, but at least it's not the tropiest porn trope that ever troped.)

It's only porny if it's written as porn. and with the dichotomy of choices EK has given, the character can choose to be upstanding or depraved. I would just rather those choices are interesting for the Main character. And its funny you bring them up as porn tropes... THEY ARE ALREADY IN THE GAME

 

[RobertKing]

All those are like very porn game MC ever

I would really advocate for any character that is more engaging than that of an aspiring sci fi writer. The fact these characters are already in the game is the reason I am mentioning.

 

[RobertKing]

These positions have already been taken. Mike is already the dj, billy or as I call him the race shifter is the wannabe promoter of a high caliber hooker club and the photographer is axel and the others I can't remember.

Exactly, they are all in the game. EK could have made the MC anyone she wanted, and we got a an aspiring sci fi writer...