VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.2 Alpha] [Eva Kiss]

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Erectosaurus

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So to even get the Jeremy scene Lena has to be dating him? I didn't even know he was an actual option for Lena. And where the fuck did this John dude come from? Mark already exists as "random guy a horny Lena wants to fuck" Eva's decisions continue to baffle me, but hey as long as the Stan fans are happy that's all that matters.
 
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Erectosaurus said:
So to even get the Jeremy scene Lena has to be dating him? I didn't even know he was an actual option for Lena. And where the fuck did this John dude come from? Mark already exists as "random guy a horny Lena wants to fuck" Eva's decisions continue to baffle me, but hey as long as the Stan fans are happy that's all that matters.
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If I'm not mistaken, John appears as a visitor to the club when Lena works there. I also don't understand why Lena has so many "random guys". Soon all the guys in town will be "dating" her.
 
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I understand this is alpha, but man it felt like there were a lot of unfinished scenes. Scenes would either start or stop in weird places, some conversations felt really stilted. I don't know if that's a programming error, or if EK was really rushing and just... didn't complete the scenes. The Ian Cuck route is a perfect example of what I'm talking about. Lena is thinking to herself how she has Ian wrapped around her finger, hard cut to him eating her ass, and then it just kind of skips to the next day. Like... there was some series time skips there. In fact almost all the sex scenes don't show the normal aftercare (cuddling) EK usually puts in.

Also, this is the first time since the beginning that I'm looking more forward to an Ian section than a Lena section. I didn't particularly care about the Seymour trip, I don't particularly care about Billy's event (although it may have potential), and I'm incredibly disappointed that the slutty Holly scene was done completely independent from Lena. In fact the only two scenes so far that were interesting was Jeremy's and the Throuple. Robert actually had an interesting one, but no one cares about Robert so... eh?

Meanwhile Ian has several potentially fun interactions with Allison / Cherry / Emma and even Cindy. Plus we're most likely to see the fallout of Wade and Perry drama from Ian's perspective.
 
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I understand this is alpha, but man it felt like there were a lot of unfinished scenes. Scenes would either start or stop in weird places, some conversations felt really stilted. I don't know if that's a programming error, or if EK was really rushing and just... didn't complete the scenes. The Ian Cuck route is a perfect example of what I'm talking about. Lena is thinking to herself how she has Ian wrapped around her finger, hard cut to him eating her ass, and then it just kind of skips to the next day. Like... there was some series time skips there. In fact almost all the sex scenes don't show the normal aftercare (cuddling) EK usually puts in.

Also, this is the first time since the beginning that I'm looking more forward to an Ian section than a Lena section. I didn't particularly care about the Seymour trip, I don't particularly care about Billy's event (although it may have potential), and I'm incredibly disappointed that the slutty Holly scene was done completely independent from Lena. In fact the only two scenes so far that were interesting was Jeremy's and the Throuple. Robert actually had an interesting one, but no one cares about Robert so... eh?

Meanwhile Ian has several potentially fun interactions with Allison / Cherry / Emma and even Cindy. Plus we're most likely to see the fallout of Wade and Perry drama from Ian's perspective.
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The author initially wanted to move straight to Billy's event, but then those who didn't choose Billy would get the same as those who didn't choose Seymour. Nothing
 
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The update......was kinda mid. Sex scenes here, sex scenes there, good bye ahh update. Holly's corruption was hot but too fast paced, but at least Trinity scene was decent, all other scenes sucked, not much dialogue it feels like all them ended within a min or two. Hopefully Eva can get her form back cuz its been over 2 years since we had a proper satisfying update.
 
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Lousy update tbh.

Feels like all the sex scenes (except for Stan) just come out of nowhere, like we cut to black, then maybe get 2 sentences before Lena's fucking Jeremy, Robert or one of the other randoms. Holly at the glory hole feels like a step too far, or at least we got there way too fast - sucks that Lena isn't even there for it too.

Nothing more on the Lena MFM threesome / NTR route either, come on!!!!

Also, what's with the weird as fuck faces during some of the sex scenes? Lena and Holly look horrible here, like not even the same character.

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It looks like made by AI...
 
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The update......was kinda mid. Sex scenes here, sex scenes there, good bye ahh update. Holly's corruption was hot but too fast paced, but at least Trinity scene was decent, all other scenes sucked, not much dialogue it feels like all them ended within a min or two. Hopefully Eva can get her form back cuz its been over 2 years since we had a proper satisfying update.
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If you actually subscribed to the patreon, you will see the reason why they have moved to smaller updates out at a far more regular pace. Her form is find, and the project is moving towards the end game.
Just count yourself lucky they aren't of the developers who keep doing remasters/reworks
 
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