VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Canto Forte]

All these mofos are porn tropes dialed to 11 all throughout this game:
Ian - simp stabbed in the back by the only girl he managed to impress and is heartbleeding.
Ivy - gym hoe who likes to string guys along and brag about cock blocking them - they are many IRL
Jeremy - tall BBC who grabs women and puts them on their knees, or just sobbs for not making it.
Axel - photo weinstein girl beater who bangs his models because he owns them - narcisistic idiot.
White bearded asshole - actual weinstein using money to belittle women who despise him.

Also, let's be honest...Axel has DEFINITELY boned Ivy. He ain't giving her that Wildcats tryout out of the goodness of his well manicured heart lol

Oh, Axel and Ivy fuck for sure. What do you think she was doing at his apartment? He did the same with Lena and will do the same to Cindy. It's his M.O.

In porn, all these get a bang outta girls just falling into their laps outta dumb motives:
one up another girl - pretty much most of the girls here wanna score before their rivals.

 

[lucadiadis]

Be still, my beating heart.

I want a "vying for dominance" scene. I didn't even know it until you had written it.

Also gives me something new try tonight.

I "like" only for the reference to the wonderful song by Sting, even if not intentional.

 

[bitofaperv]

Why people always have to go to the extremes... Jeremy is not exactly the dominant type like Axel, but he is also no pussy. He strings Louise along cause she is convenient to have. He lies cause he rather not lose some easy chick he can use whenever he needs to get his dick wet.
And your claim on Jeremy simping for Ivy is nonsense. He has a bit of a crush and he is trying some things that any normal confident guy would try. If you think what he is doing is enough to be considered a "simp" I have to inform you that would put almost every guy who actually manages to fuck girls in the "simp category". The exceptions being the absurdly rich or absurdly handsome guys.

I like Jeremy, but he is internally spineless, and committed to a single thing that he covets above everything else.

It's easy to throw him off base, and it happens frequently. He can't adapt to being challenged by others, be it Lena, Axel, Ivy, or even Ian. He has no mastery of his surroundings, or any sense of infallibility.

Compare him to the rapper in GGGB. That guy also fulfills the black cock fetish, but he's unflappable in his interactions. He's outcome independent, he's on a mission. When we discuss potential for sexual dominance, he fucking crushes Jeremy.

Jeremy is a much more defined, and real human being, but anyone who doesn't recognise that he is a pretty insecure guy, who manufactures bravado to trick desperate, or stupid women, isn't paying attention.

 

[TM | Twisted Games]

Proof or your assumption is false.

Oh wait... it is false, because CLEARLY Ivy couldn't make it with her looks and CLEARLY fucks everyone...

Good joke, 5/10 would consider telling again there.

I don't need proof, the girl is clearly set up as a slut (which I like, not throwing shade) and Axel has a thing for boning models. It's just a 2+2 = 4 type equation.

 

[SerHawkes]

I don't need proof, the girl is clearly set up as a slut (which I like, not throwing shade) and Axel has a thing for boning models. It's just a 2+2 = 4 type equation.

In court you need evidence to substanciate a claim, not just an assumption.

Contrary to supposed belief, Ivy isn't THAT easy. If she was, she would have been knocking boots with Small Dick Jeremy sooner than later, but that didn't happen, not to mention she would likely be telling Lena about her supposed conquests or people she "supposedly" was sleeping with.

Gonna happily wager that it will be found out that Axel and Ivy didn't sleep together, mainly on the reason that she wouldn't go that far for one, and two, she wouldn't want to ruin her relationship with Lena, because if she were to find out about it, in all likelyhood it would taint their relationship and break it. Lena's relationship with her is precious to her, despite how she acts and protrays herself.

So no, your supposed equation isn't 2+2=4 there. More like 6+9=420. But hey, I'm more than happy to be proven wrong in the upcoming chapters.

 

[TM | Twisted Games]

you're right...but this is less court and more a thread for a game with porn. So I don't mind my chances. Plus, Ivy would be a lesser character if she was a prude.

 

[SerHawkes]

you're right...but this is less court and more a thread for a game with porn. So I don't mind my chances. Plus, Ivy would be a lesser character if she was a prude.

Lesser Character if she were a prude... How laughable in assuming she doesn't have a 'code of honor' in a manner of speaking. That she just puts out every other day. Her being a bit of a prude adds some character to her, despite how she acts or portrays herself, there is some measure of restraint to her.

But like I said, we will have to wait and see if it gets mentioned or not. Likely not since it never did happen. Which I will happily be taking a victory lap in the near future.

 

[Joshy92]

All this talk about turning Ian into a dom.
My Ian is going to get cucked so much.
He will be the most cucked man in the world.
But don't worry he will like it.

Maybe Lena, Holly & Ivy could have a foursome with some dude.
And Ian just sits in a chair watching & jacking off.
Now that would be a very hot scene.

 

[SerHawkes]

All this talk about turning Ian into a dom.
My Ian is going to get cucked so much.
He will be the most cucked man in the world.
But don't worry he will like it.

Maybe Lena, Holly & Ivy could have a foursome with some dude.
And Ian just sits in a chair watching & jacking off.
Now that would be a very hot scene.

Why not just add dildos and bring Stan, Perry, and Jerermy along, make a small dick fest for ya?

-smh-

 

[TM | Twisted Games]

Lesser Character if she were a prude... How laughable in assuming she doesn't have a 'code of honor' in a manner of speaking. That she just puts out every other day. Her being a bit of a prude adds some character to her, despite how she acts or portrays herself, there is some measure of restraint to her.

But like I said, we will have to wait and see if it gets mentioned or not. Likely not since it never did happen. Which I will happily be taking a victory lap in the near future.

My cardio is so-so, so the victory lap can be all yours either way.

 

[SerHawkes]

My cardio is so-so, so the victory lap can be all yours either way.

Forewarning, no clothes will be involved.

 

[mommysboiii]

In court you need evidence to substanciate a claim, not just an assumption.

Contrary to supposed belief, Ivy isn't THAT easy. If she was, she would have been knocking boots with Small Dick Jeremy sooner than later, but that didn't happen, not to mention she would likely be telling Lena about her supposed conquests or people she "supposedly" was sleeping with.

Gonna happily wager that it will be found out that Axel and Ivy didn't sleep together, mainly on the reason that she wouldn't go that far for one, and two, she wouldn't want to ruin her relationship with Lena, because if she were to find out about it, in all likelyhood it would taint their relationship and break it. Lena's relationship with her is precious to her, despite how she acts and protrays herself.

So no, your supposed equation isn't 2+2=4 there. More like 6+9=420. But hey, I'm more than happy to be proven wrong in the upcoming chapters.

yes we get it ivy is the choose one the holly virgin that only plays twister on ians dick

and no her venom sucking skills and sex skills dont come from her tripple body count it is a gift from god ivy is basicly like maria in the bible we get it

 

[mommysboiii]

All this talk about turning Ian into a dom.
My Ian is going to get cucked so much.
He will be the most cucked man in the world.
But don't worry he will like it.

Maybe Lena, Holly & Ivy could have a foursome with some dude.
And Ian just sits in a chair watching & jacking off.
Now that would be a very hot scene.

MY MAN

but I like more loser ian that gets cindy,alison,holly,gillian stolen by competition like some masculine guy like axel and is a romantic cuddle weakling
not somebody that hides in closet and jerks off and enjoys it

 

[Nifferman]

Oh, Axel and Ivy fuck for sure. What do you think she was doing at his apartment? He did the same with Lena and will do the same to Cindy. It's his M.O.

But isnt it already proven wrong thou . Like she gets upset if lena questions her about her and alex and if lena fs him and informs ivy she is like, girl this is self destruction

 

[Joshy92]

MY MAN

but I like more loser ian that gets cindy,alison,holly,gillian stolen by competition like some masculine guy like axel and is a romantic cuddle weakling
not somebody that hides in closet and jerks off and enjoys it

Yeah, everyone has different preferences.
Although my Ian wouldn't be hiding in a closet, he would be sitting right near the action telling encouraging words
to the girls lol

 

[SerHawkes]

But isnt it already proven wrong thou . Like she got upset if lena questions her about her and alex and if lena fs him and informs ivy she is like, girl this is self destruction

Some people wanna deny informations and stick their little narratives to die on hills in that manner. Your right in that. It's kinda proven that she didn't sleep with the guy.

 

[bauman]

In court you need evidence to substanciate a claim, not just an assumption.

Contrary to supposed belief, Ivy isn't THAT easy. If she was, she would have been knocking boots with Small Dick Jeremy sooner than later, but that didn't happen, not to mention she would likely be telling Lena about her supposed conquests or people she "supposedly" was sleeping with.

Gonna happily wager that it will be found out that Axel and Ivy didn't sleep together, mainly on the reason that she wouldn't go that far for one, and two, she wouldn't want to ruin her relationship with Lena, because if she were to find out about it, in all likelyhood it would taint their relationship and break it. Lena's relationship with her is precious to her, despite how she acts and protrays herself.

So no, your supposed equation isn't 2+2=4 there. More like 6+9=420. But hey, I'm more than happy to be proven wrong in the upcoming chapters.

Ivy probably fucked Axel before the events of ORS. Lena got into a relationship with him after Ivy introduced them. And Axel is established as a typical poon hound who fucks the models he's shooting.

The story is definitely building up to some sort of revelation about Ivy. I'm guessing she could be doing escort work on the hush-hush and that Billy's offer is some kind of escort service rather than a modeling agency or whatever the pitch was. Lena even semi-calls him out on it if she doesn't take the drugs. It's unlikely that Ivy's getting that much bread from the side hustles she has.

 

[MF_DOOM]

All this talk about turning Ian into a dom.
My Ian is going to get cucked so much.
He will be the most cucked man in the world.
But don't worry he will like it.

Maybe Lena, Holly & Ivy could have a foursome with some dude.
And Ian just sits in a chair watching & jacking off.
Now that would be a very hot scene.

Cuck connoisseur

 

[| Vee |]

These recent conversations raise some serious questions:

1) Would Ivy jeopardize her relationship with Lena by fucking Ian. If yes, then she could be with Axel too.
2) As we see, Ivy is always vary on the topic that Lena SHOULD end Axel's tormenting, as she is pretty aware what type of relation Lena had with Axel you really think she would be that stupid to jump on Axel and on top of that compromise her relationship with Lena.
3) Ivy just likes to put guys on a leash, as we saw the case of Jeremy, so it would also raise the question about why she would jump on Axel at the first opportunity? Also if Axel fucks Ivy he would burn his bridges to go back to Lena. AND HE IS OBSESSED WITH Lena. He also doesn't fuck everybody (as we see with Alisson).
4) Now things get interesting as we know Jeremy and Ivy caught Ian and Cindy mouth to mouth with pants down AND EVEN THAN, IVY didn't tell Lena about this pretty BIG QUESTION MARK ON HER FRIENDSHIP

As we discover different plots in the upcoming chapters, Eva will be shoving some hard-to-swallow pills...

I'm going in hibernating mode till chapter release. See you all in some (not hopefully dreadful) discussion after chapter release.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Missed a lot of Axelposting. My five cents.

The only thing that can be said about Axel and dominant behavior is his athletic looks and confidence when he hits on girls. That's all.
How can you call a dominant alpha that guy who lost his girlfriend because he couldn't keep his dick away from a cookie jar?
How can you be considered the alpha of a guy who stalks his ex, starting ridiculous drama, and at every opportunity falls into aggression and attacks people? He act like a hysteric and a psychopath. This is behavior of a weak man.
Come on guys, Axel can lose to the much more moderate Ian.
He easily manages to hit on girls thanks to his body and ostentatious self-confidence - this is the formula for his temporary success. Why? Because it's nature. Many (if not most) girls like a well-built body and a confident demeanor. But in Axel's case, it's a mask - he's an insecure, mentally weak person who compensate his complexes in relationships by being a selfish, control-obsessed tyrant. And the girls who fell for his bait have to pay for their mistake later.

Seriously, I hope none of you in your right mind are knowingly flipping Cindy on Axel. Otherwise, hell will be the right place for the one who does so.