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Could be a "you problem", works perfectly for me..is not workin for me, he give me errors
Could be a "you problem", works perfectly for me..is not workin for me, he give me errors
We need less Holly in the game.
Just unfortunate that Lena/Emma is progressing at a snails pace too.Everyone talking about Holly why don't we talk about More Emma she got the short straw of the stick. She got more screen time in Lena route.
Ian: I'd rather have your Boobs in my hand
Don't write such magnificent things, I won't be able to get any sleep. I do hope Jeremy knocks someone up, regardless of context, but it is so long away if ever that I rather not tease myself thinking about it too early lol.Alison if she homewreckes Ians GF with a baby.
Jeremy if Ians wife delivers a black baby.
Ivy if you get on her bad side and show a weakness.
Don't write such magnificent things, I won't be able to get any sleep. I do hope Jeremy knocks someone up, regardless of context, but it is so long away if ever that I rather not tease myself thinking about it too early lol.
ah, a man of culture, I salute theeWe need more Cindy in the game View attachment 2770673
Same could be said for Holly, at least on the Ian path. Chapter 10 it was established for both Holly and Cindy that they were going to date Ian officially. With Holly it was made clear when Ian called Holly his favourite and Cindy when they discussed it. Fast forward to chapter 11 and scenes basically repeat themselves. Ian and Cindy have a scene where they reaffirm they want to be together and Holly has a scene where it is reaffirmed that Ian cares about her/is falling in love with her.Cindy was the best girl for a while, the chapter 1-9 build-up was gold. But her progress has stalled and fucking her in chapter 10 and 11 was boring.
I spot an obvious way to address both of these issues.Seymour diversifying his corruption. Emma doing something.
Emma pegs SeymourI spot an obvious way to address both of these issues.
Yep it set up some plot points that will be relevant later, but it's own content left a lot to be desired imo and it could have had more of it's own payoffs. Still enjoyed the update and a lot of the scene were really good.Chapter 11 at least introduced some drama in the Axel/Cindy rumours and the questions of whether you can trust Ivy.
And a little thruple progress for Holly.
I agree it the recent chapter only moves their stories forward by inches but I do believe those are the seedlings for larger plot points to come being watered for growth.