VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

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Does he consider it tasteless, though? He has a rather carefree attitude toward sexuality, he considers beauty to be a useful resource that a girl should use. And I don't know about the Remaster, but in the gallery at the Lust option he said that it's perfectly okay for someone to go into photography to ogle at girls.

I think he considers it pretty vulgar and tasteless. The way Stalkfap has been presented in the game, I’d say the transaction between the content creator and the customer is pretty unambiguous—the content is physical and sexual, and the customer’s use of it is implied in the name.

As we know, Seymour’s pretentious and thinks extremely highly of himself, and I suspect he considers his interest in Lena to be different to what Stalkfap offers. Lena can orgasm on a vibrator for a customer on Stalkfap because he writes “I wanna see you cum, slut” (hypothetically—I can’t remember how the different Stalkfap scenes play out); or she can do the same for Seymour because he flashes his wealth and power, spends ages mansplaining Nietzsche and female beauty and sexuality, and then gives her shitloads of money to be his “model”, pretending it’s some sort of professional business transaction. It’s basically the same, except Seymour’s method is laughingly pretentious—but for himself I think it rather proves that he’s culturally refined, that the world revolves around him, and that he’s got some divine skill to identify beauty that others don’t have.

With that being said, I suspect we’ll see a pragmatic solution to how Seymour will limit Lena’s modelling career. As it stands now, she’s pretty much screwed either way: If she accepts Seymour’s deal, she agrees to only model for him; and if she doesn’t accept it, he claims he’ll destroy all her possibilities. But I don’t think it will turn out exactly that way—Lena’s modelling career is too fundamental to the game and her character progression to have it suddenly ruined.

 

[Dracodadark]

I think he considers it pretty vulgar and tasteless. The way Stalkfap has been presented in the game, I’d say the transaction between the content creator and the customer is pretty unambiguous—the content is physical and sexual, and the customer’s use of it is implied in the name.

As we know, Seymour’s pretentious and thinks extremely highly of himself, and I suspect he considers his interest in Lena to be different to what Stalkfap offers. Lena can orgasm on a vibrator for a customer on Stalkfap because he writes “I wanna see you cum, slut” (hypothetically—I can’t remember how the different Stalkfap scenes play out); or she can do the same for Seymour because he flashes his wealth and power, spends ages mansplaining Nietzsche and female beauty and sexuality, and then gives her shitloads of money to be his “model”, pretending it’s some sort of professional business transaction. It’s basically the same, except Seymour’s method is laughingly pretentious—but for himself I think it rather proves that he’s culturally refined, that the world revolves around him, and that he’s got some divine skill to identify beauty that others don’t have.

With that being said, I suspect we’ll see a pragmatic solution to how Seymour will limit Lena’s modelling career. As it stands now, she’s pretty much screwed either way: If she accepts Seymour’s deal, she agrees to only model for him; and if she doesn’t accept it, he claims he’ll destroy all her possibilities. But I don’t think it will turn out exactly that way—Lena’s modelling career is too fundamental to the game and her character progression to have it suddenly ruined.

Seymour is one of those people you just want to avoid in life. He thinks he is all powerful and nothing can stop him. I do feel there are a few options Eva hints at in avoiding him destroying Lena. One the mayor clearly does not like him and there seems to be some history there as well so he could be a good ally through Perry and Ian, two there is Billy and stalkfap that I largely do not think Seymour could effect. Billy seems to have a lot of money as well and could easily rival Seymour., three Axel though not the greatest ally does seem to care about Lena enough that he would not just listen to Seymour unless he is an enemy. So I do feel there are several ways to avoid his threats even for Ian as he has another writing option too.

 

[N0nsens3]

No, that's basically what his path is about.

Okay. Thanks!

 

[N0nsens3]

All my homies hate Mr. Ward

 

[enfuego]

Old Billy / New Billy
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wait these are the type of changes the remaster is making? Why? There's no point to this, they didn't increase the fidelity or anything so it's just a change for the sake of change. Seems like milking imo.

 

[Brazilian Engrish]

Honestly, I dont care about Billy. Black, white, green, blue. whatever

 

[JoJoPool]

Does she look more like alison or lena ?

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[danteka]

Does she look more like alison or lena ?

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Lena

 

[atrebor68]

The politically correct in an adult game is USELESS. More is strange the man/woman or the situation, more is kinki the game. A black man is a black man, and all we know what it means. In our fantasy a blonde girlfriend banged by a dirty, mad man is more arousing than a white, young normal man.

 

[dundun]

I suspect we’ll see a pragmatic solution to how Seymour will limit Lena’s modelling career. As it stands now, she’s pretty much screwed either way: If she accepts Seymour’s deal, she agrees to only model for him; and if she doesn’t accept it, he claims he’ll destroy all her possibilities. But I don’t think it will turn out exactly that way—Lena’s modelling career is too fundamental to the game and her character progression to have it suddenly ruined.

There is the second clause: 'you can only work for me or for a photographer I have previously authorized'. I am pretty sure he will be hawking her out to Agnes and he might agree to some of her work, like with the Wildcats.

 

[Gato21]

Does she look more like alison or lena ?

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Lena. Sauce?

 

[Moryaka26]

Does she look more like alison or lena ?

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Who is this?

 

[Hongfire Survivor]

The politically correct in an adult game is USELESS. More is strange the man/woman or the situation, more is kinki the game. A black man is a black man, and all we know what it means. In our fantasy a blonde girlfriend banged by a dirty, mad man is more arousing than a white, young normal man.

Pray tell, what does it mean

Because the kink you are looking for isn't here.

 

[Night Hacker]

There is the second clause: 'you can only work for me or for a photographer I have previously authorized'. I am pretty sure he will be hawking her out to Agnes and he might agree to some of her work, like with the Wildcats.

He also worked with Axel.

 

[Zirael Q]

Old Billy / New Billy
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Yeah, that was definitely worth waiting almost a year. Totally understandable. At least she also made the effort of changing the color of the shirt too, because it'd be bad otherwise. I'm just wondering why remove the hat as well... UNLESS MAKING STAN EVEN MORE UNIQUE AND A LI FOR LENA?

 

[fortuna95]

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Chapter 10 weekly status report (4)

Here's this week status report:

This week I've been putting a lot of focus on the update and I finally started writing it. Feels good to be knocking lines out again, but writing the game with the level of detail it's expected of ORS is quite taxing mentally. Before I used to finish all the art before starting writing, but the sheer amount of images produced for each update now has forced me to combine writing and drawing, and I think it's the way to go. This allows me to switch between tasks, which makes it easy to avoid bottlenecks. Right now I've completed around 70 drawings, and I have the feeling that's only half of the final count.

On another subject, I've been talking about the Steam release for a while. Since my main focus is on developing chapter 10, it's going slow, but there's one major setback that has me hesitant and undecided: My plan was to price ORS at around 10-12€, but Steam has a very strict pricing policy, and it seems it doesn't allow the games being sold there to be acquired by a lower sum anywhere else, including Patreon. Right now, the 5€ Wingman tier gets you access to ORS' 9 chapters, so this means I can't set the price I was aiming for. Selling it below 10€ on Steam feels like undervaluing the game a lot, especially considering Steam takes 30% and another 30% aprox. goes to taxes...

I know other developers have faced this issue and come up with different solutions. I'd like to find one that's as straightforward and un-convoluted as possible, and especially one you guys feel comfortable with. I'd like to read your ideas and suggestions in the comments, so share them with me, please

That'll be it for now. Oh, and at the end of the week I will post all the Fan Art entries for the

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[JohnnyKiss]

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Chapter 10 weekly status report (4)

Here's this week status report:

This week I've been putting a lot of focus on the update and I finally started writing it. Feels good to be knocking lines out again, but writing the game with the level of detail it's expected of ORS is quite taxing mentally. Before I used to finish all the art before starting writing, but the sheer amount of images produced for each update now has forced me to combine writing and drawing, and I think it's the way to go. This allows me to switch between tasks, which makes it easy to avoid bottlenecks. Right now I've completed around 70 drawings, and I have the feeling that's only half of the final count.

On another subject, I've been talking about the Steam release for a while. Since my main focus is on developing chapter 10, it's going slow, but there's one major setback that has me hesitant and undecided: My plan was to price ORS at around 10-12€, but Steam has a very strict pricing policy, and it seems it doesn't allow the games being sold there to be acquired by a lower sum anywhere else, including Patreon. Right now, the 5€ Wingman tier gets you access to ORS' 9 chapters, so this means I can't set the price I was aiming for. Selling it below 10€ on Steam feels like undervaluing the game a lot, especially considering Steam takes 30% and another 30% aprox. goes to taxes...

I know other developers have faced this issue and come up with different solutions. I'd like to find one that's as straightforward and un-convoluted as possible, and especially one you guys feel comfortable with. I'd like to read your ideas and suggestions in the comments, so share them with me, please

That'll be it for now. Oh, and at the end of the week I will post all the Fan Art entries for the

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. If you still want to hop in, you have a couple extra days. Thank you!

So around half of the images are finished and she is in the process of writing. With programing and testing on top of that, how long do we expect before we get the next update?

 

[lipe2410]

So around half of the images are finished and she is in the process of writing. With programing and testing on top of that, how long do we expect before we get the next update?

All depends how long and smooth writing and the left drawings will be.

 

[bleachedturtle]

So around half of the images are finished and she is in the process of writing. With programing and testing on top of that, how long do we expect before we get the next update?

I think she might just be talking about the line drawing. So the colouring might take a bit longer

 

[CoalPhelps]

One the mayor clearly does not like him and there seems to be some history there as well so he could be a good ally through Perry and Ian, two there is Billy and stalkfap that I largely do not think Seymour could effect. Billy seems to have a lot of money as well and could easily rival Seymour., three Axel though not the greatest ally does seem to care about Lena enough that he would not just listen to Seymour unless he is an enemy.

By Perry you really mean his father. And yes, the mayor can help, while apparently not as much as he should, but at least he has some political connections and money.

Ian yes, he has ties to Victor White at the moment and is a bit about Seymour's dirty laundry regarding the use of publishers, so he can start investigating in that direction.

Lena will be easily cut off from Stalkfap, especially after Peoplegram is blocked, which will only make her account known through people she knows.

Billy? He has some money (his father's), maybe some connections, but obviously not enough to compete with Seymour, plus based on his personality, he's probably a coward. So there's no talk of "easily rival." But he could still try to set up his own modeling agency.

Axel? Well, given his obsession with Lena just as much as Seymour's, in some paths he can help, yes. But given his opportunistic sociopathic nature, on others he might choose not his feelings, but the possibility of promotion.