VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[Gato21]

Why are you guys making these sweeping appraisals of the game when the game is half-way in development, especially in regards to specific side character/MC story lines? Also, you could argue dual MC's adds complications to game development, but even if that is the case, and say the game has a rocky and delayed development or the writing suffers, what constitutes a failed game? Some of my favorite games have flaws and have varying degrees of commercial and critical success. What metric are we to evaluate it on? It's probably more constructive to evaluate it in narrowly defined aspects, especially at this point.

 

[tobiume08]

Don't get me wrong. I think this is one of the best games on the site. But.

This game has reached the wall. There are so many choices and pathways that it has become a nightmare to program. I hope the next update it is and Eva will start a new project.

 

[ffive]

This game has reached the wall. There are so many choices and pathways that it has become a nightmare to program.

There isn't exactly all that many paths in the game as it is currently. Maybe let's stop with the Chicken Little routine, especially when the developer doesn't appear to share such sentiment.

 

[Cervixpunch]

The dual protagonist experiment added more to her plate, and as a result, added far too much branching, inconsistency with characters and some moments, and discombobulated the story itself in parts. In short, Eva's attempt, while promising in theory, hasn't turned out as expected, with a below average story, fetishized content and interaction with most of the characters, lacking of ACTUAL content with others (cough cough Ivy cough cough). So, it somewhat disappointing, despite this game being average overall, if not a little lower.

If your mainly on visuals, sure their good, and not denying that. I'm more so talking about the story itself, how the characters are written, the content with characters, or I should say, serious lack there of. You have Geymour being the most uninteresting villain, Axel being forced down our throats and is somehow involved in everything that relates to Lena/Ian now more than ever, not to mention it took ten chapters to get an actual Ian-Ivy "moment" and even then it's a thrown bone, after the three works with the bar scene took away Ivy kissing him on the cheek/flirty moment/to just saying hey and having to be forced to bring Jeremy along and deal with him being the dumbass he already is. It's almost like Eva is forcing us to be friends with Jeremy and likely have our guy Ian suck on his cock and be bros.

But I digress.

I'm getting the impression more than anything you just really want some Ivy banging to finally fucking happen.

 

[SerHawkes]

I'm getting the impression more than anything you just really want some Ivy banging to finally fucking happen.

Ian-Ivy naturally. Anything else well...

 

[moovigym]

Poor Ed never gets a chance?

 

[SerHawkes]

Poor Ed never gets a chance?

Never had one to begin with.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

It's almost like Eva is forcing us to be friends with Jeremy and likely have our guy Ian suck on his cock and be bros.

But I digress.

If it happens, it'll just be a "no homo" fluffer thing for Lena and/or Allison. Totally not ghey or anything like that...

 

[okfairenough]

Does anybody feel this game has too much sex? Like Lena and Ian are straight up nymphos.

 

[Chemish]

Does anybody feel this game has too much sex? Like Lena and Ian are straight up nymphos.

I do not think that, but to each their own.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

Poor Ed never gets a chance?

He had; keyword "had". His route was planned but got scrapped to trim up the game.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

Does anybody feel this game has too much sex? Like Lena and Ian are straight up nymphos.

They're optional, so it's on you if they become nymphos.

 

[Ntsoomnkuabtuag]

Does anybody feel this game has too much sex? Like Lena and Ian are straight up nymphos.

We still need more

 

[Ntsoomnkuabtuag]

Poor Ed never gets a chance?

Still wait for old guy fuck Lena harder

 

[Among Us]

Any femdom?

 

[dolfe67]

Any femdom?

There is lezdom, don't think there will be classic femdom

 

[Chuck_Bass]

Does anybody feel this game has too much sex? Like Lena and Ian are straight up nymphos.

Most of it is by your choice :\

 

[Oliver Wendell Homely]

Does anybody feel this game has too much sex? Like Lena and Ian are straight up nymphos.

It is a porn game. If they were asexual it would kinda defeat the whole purpose. But as others have said, you can play the game to keep both characters minimally active on that front.

 

[Cappucinn0]

well im a big fans of GGGB, even the art isnt top like this, but the story progression is good.
well when im first playin this i feel a little bit different, coz there's two protagonist that we played, and well its too bad there's not corruption system like GGGB had. On my first playthrough I really hope there was a corruption system for Lena, but its look like Eva didnt include it here. Maybe Eva want this game had different playstyle and system so i will accept but yeah its really had to move on from GGGB. hehehe

 

[ABlackOcean]

he story is breathtaking

He had; keyword "had". His route was planned but got scrapped to trim up the game.

Such a bummer. I feel like an Ed-route could/should have been kept in. It would have added some unique spice.
meanwhile other characters/routes dont really add anything that wasnt already added by others.
like the restaurant-colleague, forgot his name, that guy was just more of the same.
In my eyes it would have made more sense to keep the Ed-thing and cut the other guy short instead...

Well... cant have everything.