VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[dontcarewhateverno]

Any femdom?

There is the beginning of what could be considered an m/F femdom-ish route, with evidence in Chapter 10. Date Lena, subscribe to her stalker-fap, act insecure (but not enough to break-up or oppose her stalker-fap. Basically, don't be a control freak). As Lena, do stalker-fap (obviously), tease Ian in Chapter 10 instead of putting out when the option comes up at the end of the chapter.

Note: Lena does not have to act like a total cunt or slut up to chapter 10 to get to this point. If that is your thing, have at it, though it's advisable not to sleep with Jeremy, for future (speculative) potential blocks in the route you're looking for. Also, as Ian, don't fuck Holly.

 

[Marley300]

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Just wanted to let you know that my plan is to publish the Chapter 11 Prologue this next Friday 10.
Summer is around the corner in ORS, and some characters will be sporting adequate new outfits for the season. In Holly's case, depending on how her personality has been evolving, she'll choose one of two looks:

Aside from work on the prologue, many other tasks have been worked on: new and updated music tracks for the game, some technical and visual enhancements, test for artists (I have found two that could work, so I've already commissioned a scene for each) and mainly a total overhaul of my software and hardware set up. This has caused all sort of problems, but I've finally managed to get the important things in working order. I had been postponing this, since I hate changes and migrating data and programs is as messy as a real house move, but now was the time to do it. Besides, I wanted to experiment with new AI technologies, to see if I can implement them somehow to speed things up in the near future. So far I managed to create some pretty decent scenarios for the game, and even though they're not perfect yet, I will try to implement some in the upcoming release. Here's as assorted mix of results I managed; some of those look really promising and almost good enough to be used in-game.

 

[Chuck_Bass]

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Just wanted to let you know that my plan is to publish the Chapter 11 Prologue this next Friday 10.
Summer is around the corner in ORS, and some characters will be sporting adequate new outfits for the season. In Holly's case, depending on how her personality has been evolving, she'll choose one of two looks:

Aside from work on the prologue, many other tasks have been worked on: new and updated music tracks for the game, some technical and visual enhancements, test for artists (I have found two that could work, so I've already commissioned a scene for each) and mainly a total overhaul of my software and hardware set up. This has caused all sort of problems, but I've finally managed to get the important things in working order. I had been postponing this, since I hate changes and migrating data and programs is as messy as a real house move, but now was the time to do it. Besides, I wanted to experiment with new AI technologies, to see if I can implement them somehow to speed things up in the near future. So far I managed to create some pretty decent scenarios for the game, and even though they're not perfect yet, I will try to implement some in the upcoming release. Here's as assorted mix of results I managed; some of those look really promising and almost good enough to be used in-game.

I wish ch.11 would come so surprisingly quick.

 

[hotNess]

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Just wanted to let you know that my plan is to publish the Chapter 11 Prologue this next Friday 10.
Summer is around the corner in ORS, and some characters will be sporting adequate new outfits for the season. In Holly's case, depending on how her personality has been evolving, she'll choose one of two looks:

Aside from work on the prologue, many other tasks have been worked on: new and updated music tracks for the game, some technical and visual enhancements, test for artists (I have found two that could work, so I've already commissioned a scene for each) and mainly a total overhaul of my software and hardware set up. This has caused all sort of problems, but I've finally managed to get the important things in working order. I had been postponing this, since I hate changes and migrating data and programs is as messy as a real house move, but now was the time to do it. Besides, I wanted to experiment with new AI technologies, to see if I can implement them somehow to speed things up in the near future. So far I managed to create some pretty decent scenarios for the game, and even though they're not perfect yet, I will try to implement some in the upcoming release. Here's as assorted mix of results I managed; some of those look really promising and almost good enough to be used in-game.

Holly looks so good <3

 

[ffive]

Holly looks so good <3

These pole dancing lessons seem to be paying off, that tummy is starting to look quite toned.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

Besides, I wanted to experiment with new AI technologies, to see if I can implement them somehow to speed things up in the near future.

Watch out for them hands.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

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Just wanted to let you know that my plan is to publish the Chapter 11 Prologue this next Friday 10.
Summer is around the corner in ORS, and some characters will be sporting adequate new outfits for the season. In Holly's case, depending on how her personality has been evolving, she'll choose one of two looks:

Aside from work on the prologue, many other tasks have been worked on: new and updated music tracks for the game, some technical and visual enhancements, test for artists (I have found two that could work, so I've already commissioned a scene for each) and mainly a total overhaul of my software and hardware set up. This has caused all sort of problems, but I've finally managed to get the important things in working order. I had been postponing this, since I hate changes and migrating data and programs is as messy as a real house move, but now was the time to do it. Besides, I wanted to experiment with new AI technologies, to see if I can implement them somehow to speed things up in the near future. So far I managed to create some pretty decent scenarios for the game, and even though they're not perfect yet, I will try to implement some in the upcoming release. Here's as assorted mix of results I managed; some of those look really promising and almost good enough to be used in-game.

Damn it would be cool to see Holly with her hair down, it really suits her.
As for the two versions of Holly, Eva is too fond of pink. Even though I have mostly corrupt Holly in most of the routes, I like the one on the left more (I hate pink).

 

[Blurpee69]

Damn it would be cool to see Holly with her hair down, it really suits her.
As for the two versions of Holly, Eva is too fond of pink. Even though I have mostly corrupt Holly in most of the routes, I like the one on the left more (I hate pink).

I see where you're coming from. Pink is an easy color code for girly and feminine, which even with Holly's "corruption," she still very much is at this point in the story. So while I like the outfit on the right better to represent Holly's growth and confidence in herself, I think a yellow or maybe light purple could still get across the same feeling as pink without it being the obvious color.

 

[Eye-switcher]

I haven't keeping myself up to date? what is this with prologue CH11? are the chapters going to be released divided now? if so when is the whole chapter 11 be released? do anyone know i wonder...?

 

[Blurpee69]

I haven't keeping myself up to date? what is this with prologue CH11? are the chapters going to be released divided now? if so when is the whole chapter 11 be released? do anyone know i wonder...?

Eva Kiss felt that the game wasn't properly concluded in chapter 10 and had a little bit more they wanted to add, but didn't due to release constraints. So Eva is doing a short little prologue chapter to 11 to help bridge the gap between the ending we got in 10 and the start of chpater 11. This sounds like a one time deal. Honestly happened at a good point too as Eva has said ORS is planned for 20 chapters, so a nice little bridge at the midway point of the game seems fine.

 

[vgbestly]

Watch out for them hands.

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Pretty sure Eva is just gonna use it for quick background pictures. Idk where else this story can take place? The newest setting so far is Alison's house but every other place is settings we been to already.

But then again....quick, someone ask ChatGPT to "make a erotica about a male book writer and an average onlyfans girl." If it comes true in later chapters, we blame the robots.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

I see where you're coming from. Pink is an easy color code for girly and feminine, which even with Holly's "corruption," she still very much is at this point in the story. So while I like the outfit on the right better to represent Holly's growth and confidence in herself, I think a yellow or maybe light purple could still get across the same feeling as pink without it being the obvious color.

I understand what you mean. Pink is a little trite, plus IRL I very rarely see girls in pink these days - it seems to be out of fashion.
Also I think that Holly's development on the route of corruption would show a loose miniskirt and no glasses.

 

[Blurpee69]

I understand what you mean. Pink is a little trite, plus IRL I very rarely see girls in pink these days - it seems to be out of fashion.
Also I think that Holly's development on the route of corruption would show a loose miniskirt and no glasses.

Personally I'm fine with the short shorts at the moment, a miniskirt can be a fine "upgrade" as it were after little more pushing once the story enters the middle part of Summer. I also like the idea of Holly keeping her glasses, really more for the uniqueness of it. It's so standard for the girl next door trope to just drop the glasses to become hot. The change in rims for her glasses just adds to the fact that her glasses can evolve with her.

 

[ffive]

I think a yellow or maybe light purple could still get across the same feeling as pink without it being the obvious color.

Yellow is already strongly associated with another character, Cindy. Despite the claim of Eva's fondness of pink, she wasn't actually making anyone dress in it until now, with single exception of Ivy who wears it as her top. So making it the color for changed Holly is fine, it gets the message clearly across and Ivy's influence on her more obvious.

 

[RoboticCatDogHybrid]

i guaran fkn tee that chapter 11 wont be released in April like she said she would release it my bros. Only a chapter 11 prologue. Lmao. Wonder what her time scale for 2023 is now. Maybe 11 in late May, or June?

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

i guaran fkn tee that chapter 11 wont be released in April like she said she would release it my bros. Only a chapter 11 prologue. Lmao. Wonder what her time scale for 2023 is now. Maybe 11 in late May, or June?
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Too much copium, probably July-August.

 

[Chuck_Bass]

i guaran fkn tee that chapter 11 wont be released in April like she said she would release it my bros. Only a chapter 11 prologue. Lmao. Wonder what her time scale for 2023 is now. Maybe 11 in late May, or June?
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April??? You are one optimistic man.
I wonder if chapter 11 will be released before Winds Of Winter by George R.R. Martin.

 

[Blurpee69]

Yellow is already strongly associated with another character, Cindy. Despite the claim of Eva's fondness of pink, she wasn't actually making anyone dress in it until now, with single exception of Ivy who wears it as her top. So making it the color for changed Holly is fine, it gets the message clearly across and Ivy's influence on her more obvious.

Dang, I knew I was missing a characters color association somehow. I was originally thinking a light green then remembered Allison, so I scratched that. But I honestly don't mind the pink on Holly, I just threw yellow and purple out there as an alternate color code for what pink represents in response to geralt.

While we're on the subject of outfits though. I've seen a couple of screenshots of Alison in her sexy[2] outfit, but with a belly button piercing. But I've never managed to see that in any of my playthroughs. Is that a change that Eva made in another update? Or is there a trigger I've just managed to dodge every time.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

Dang, I knew I was missing a characters color association somehow. I was originally thinking a light green then remembered Allison, so I scratched that. But I honestly don't mind the pink on Holly, I just threw yellow and purple out there as an alternate color code for what pink represents in response to geralt.

While we're on the subject of outfits though. I've seen a couple of screenshots of Alison in her sexy[2] outfit, but with a belly button piercing. But I've never managed to see that in any of my playthroughs. Is that a change that Eva made in another update? Or is there a trigger I've just managed to dodge every time.

Alison only wears the 2nd sexy outfit if you told her to be more like Cherry.

I personally don't like it. Alison's red top works best because it shows off her best assets; the jugs.

 

[Blurpee69]

Alison only wears the 2nd sexy outfit if you told her to be more like Cherry.

I personally don't like it. Alison's red top works best because it shows off her best assets; the jugs.

Sorry. I was asking specifically about the piercing. I've gotten Allisons sexy[2] outfit several times, I've just never seen the piercing in any of my playthroughs, but I've seen clips and screenshots of her with one. I did't know if that was a separate trigger or not.