Part II thoughts on Chapter 11 after playing a few more routes:
- The
Lena/Ian/Louise threesome was nice. Was hoping there'd be a more dominant version between
Lena and Louise where Ian can handle Louise's leash before Lena breaks out the double dong, to give Ian a show, but that would probably be way too intense for a first threesome encounter and may come later, or
maybe Stan will get the chance to handle Louise's leash in the future, which would be really satisfying, based on Louise's shitty behavior towards him.
- The more nuanced teasing/loving Lena/Ian route was really well handled now, even allowing them to switch positions of dominance, plus it was written with more care, showing it was just kinky play & experimenting between an emotionally healthy couple.
1. Lena didn't automatically turn into super-bitch after a little teasing. 2. The user isn't locked into an extreme situation and can choose just light play, or even turn the tables a bit on who has the assertive role. 3. The writing took into account the situation where Lena and Ian have been a loving couple from the start [An Ian that's not hitting every pussy in sight and a Lena that's not a cock carousel]. She shows actual appropriate concern when he feels awkward about the play, as a couple who care for each other naturally would. Impressive & believable. Ethical slut route achieved. I haven't actually ever seen another game handle it this well. Curious what
BloodyMares thoughts are on those changes.
My opinion of the chapter has gone up further the more routes I play on it. Not perfect (which isn't possible with such an expansive game with so few resources) but impressive. The Ivy exposition dump is the only glaringly awkward part so far for me, aside from the obvious bugs that will surely get fixed.