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Everyone talking about Holly why don't we talk about More Emma she got the short straw of the stick. She got more screen time in Lena route.
Just unfortunate that Lena/Emma is progressing at a snails pace too.Everyone talking about Holly why don't we talk about More Emma she got the short straw of the stick. She got more screen time in Lena route.
Ian: I'd rather have your Boobs in my hand
Don't write such magnificent things, I won't be able to get any sleep. I do hope Jeremy knocks someone up, regardless of context, but it is so long away if ever that I rather not tease myself thinking about it too early lol.Alison if she homewreckes Ians GF with a baby.
Jeremy if Ians wife delivers a black baby.
Ivy if you get on her bad side and show a weakness.
Don't write such magnificent things, I won't be able to get any sleep. I do hope Jeremy knocks someone up, regardless of context, but it is so long away if ever that I rather not tease myself thinking about it too early lol.
ah, a man of culture, I salute theeWe need more Cindy in the gameView attachment 2770673
Same could be said for Holly, at least on the Ian path. Chapter 10 it was established for both Holly and Cindy that they were going to date Ian officially. With Holly it was made clear when Ian called Holly his favourite and Cindy when they discussed it. Fast forward to chapter 11 and scenes basically repeat themselves. Ian and Cindy have a scene where they reaffirm they want to be together and Holly has a scene where it is reaffirmed that Ian cares about her/is falling in love with her.Cindy was the best girl for a while, the chapter 1-9 build-up was gold. But her progress has stalled and fucking her in chapter 10 and 11 was boring.
I spot an obvious way to address both of these issues.Seymour diversifying his corruption. Emma doing something.
Emma pegs SeymourI spot an obvious way to address both of these issues.![]()
Yep it set up some plot points that will be relevant later, but it's own content left a lot to be desired imo and it could have had more of it's own payoffs. Still enjoyed the update and a lot of the scene were really good.Chapter 11 at least introduced some drama in the Axel/Cindy rumours and the questions of whether you can trust Ivy.
And a little thruple progress for Holly.
I agree it the recent chapter only moves their stories forward by inches but I do believe those are the seedlings for larger plot points to come being watered for growth.
But Holly isn't Ian exclusive and has a large chunk of content on Lena's path. Lena, Ivy, Mark, set-up for Marcel and even Robert and Stan.Same could be said for Holly, at least on the Ian path.
I found the Alison Ch 11 scene sorta disturbing in the Ian variant where Ian never (or rarely) does things with Alison. I have a playthrough where Ian and Lena doesn't love each other, and Ian have a thing for Cherry instead.But Holly isn't Ian exclusive and has a large chunk of content on Lena's path. Lena, Ivy, Mark, set-up for Marcel and even Robert and Stan.
Ians chapters are more and more lackluster, though admittably the tournament, book contest and vacation may put him in the spotlight more. I hope he starts committing instead of being half-assed with Holly and Alison and can give Cherry and Emma more attention. And Jessica was a sidething to begin with and is disappearing quickly. I hated how we couldn't control his actions on the birthday party (and Lena couldn't even sleep with any of the boys, she is automatically directed to some meaningless Ivy sex, which feels more like a consolation prize than a reward for trying to get the man of your choice for this special night). The Lena focus in chapter 10 and 11 turned this game more in a fuckfest, the threesomes seemed more distant and out of obligation compared to the Alison threesomes which has a lot of different outcomes and aspects to it.
Ian can underperform or outperform, he can secure his soon-to-be-girlfriend or can impress a mere sexfriend, can potentially impregnate her or let her be impregnated. It can end awkward or a fun experience for all three of them. There are stakes and drama brooding. Ian/Lena/Louise was dispassionate, Ian and Louise had no development, there is no conflict with Jeremy, no potential jealousy, conquering Louise or falling for her, strengthening his bond with Lena etc.. Ian doesn't even comments if Louise is an utter sub to Lena.