You realize Lena's actions during her bartending are all up to the player, and if you make her "another mouth hole for evident losers" instead of asserting herself and shutting them down, that's purely on you?
Very realistic actually, considering that Stan is a fat ass and a top level incel.You telling me Marcel, the randomass bouncer got head before Stan could even feel a touch of a woman?
10/10 game
This scene isn't yet in the game, it'll be added in updated version. You need Lena to be flirty/receptive with Jack to set it up.
Not really, but it is easy to see why. Eva today has massive problems with making everything fit at least with some air between it since she allows her patrons to influence the stroy too much. This is extremly obvious with how much screentime absolute dishwater characters like Cindy, Emma or Marcel get, a rising number of fetish situation for fetish´s sake in the story...
Do you really think that Ed's path would be better than Cindy's or Emma's?. You already have Seymour's to cover the old guy with younger girl target. And it actually makes some sense because at least he's a handsome rich old guy instead of a fat old guy about to lose his small business.
My point is not about Ed or Seymour´s paths, it is the fact that Eva let too many mediocre cooks, but with above average donations, have a say about how the storylines should develop. And you know what too many cooks do to a stew! Iam really sure Eva regrets this now and we can see how she tries to save something in which her heart is not fully invested any longer. Too many unfitting bits and pieces the patrons forced into the story.
I don't think having it done before 20 chapters is enough to cover the whole plots and subplots without being unsatisfying. Even in this chapter alone, there are many plot points that serve as early setup for future conflicts. There are new characters who need multiple chapters to develop and affect the story with a satisfying pacing. Considering that this is an interactive fiction where our choices matter and changes the plot, the variations needed for the narrative to satisfy the player's mix of choices is a lot. Take the Seymour/objectification or the Lena's family subplots for example. It feels like we're still on the early stages of those. We are getting to know more about Seymour and his designs, as well the dynamic Lena has with her family but they haven't really developed much. Personally, it feels like we're still 1/3 or 2/5 of the story without it being rushed. Of course, how dense future chapters will be will affect this.
Are you serious? Cindy is easily the most popular character (Yes, even outside of the confines of Patreon). I don't even like the character, but this is a silly complaint. If there was less Cindy content, do you know how much complaining would occur? Again, contradictory.
it's a destiny for every female MC, but yea, game encourage you all the time to do that
You make the wrong assumption that a popular character is also a well written character! Sometimes that is so, sometimes it is not! That Cindy is so popular hinges on exactly one and only one thing, she looks good! Her charcter is one of the worst in the whole game. Selfish, childish and starts nagging once not everything goes her way.
