Said it a few times, but for the famous beach chapter, a staple in h-games, using only up to six characters is disappointing. There are many other girls we all want to see on the beach. Even Jeremy is a better character to utilize there than Perry and Wade.
- Wade getting action is the least likely, as much as some want Lena to comfort/manipulate him regarding Cindy. There is too little buildup to justify jumping on him, so at best he reacts to Perry and Ian talking about Cindy.
- Perry getting further teased by Lena could be happen, else he ought to take the next step with Emma, or he is utter waste.
- Lena and Holly are neat, but its not like they lack content. Not complaining, but its the minimum to expect.
- After a break in chapter 11 and only sparingly having content in the previous chapters, this ought to be Emmas best hour. Solidifying things with Ian, getting together with Perry, getting intimate with Lena or even Lena/Ian, since this was already teased.