VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[Massi89]

The problem for me, story wise, would be if Lena immediately threw herself upon Jeremy because she just doesn’t have the willpower to hold back once she sees a big cock. The BBC trope is usually someone fucking a big dick; a LenaxJeremy scene in the next episode would be Lena fucking a person with a big dick.

The way I see it, in the bottle game you can make her actively insist on sucking his dick (Jeremy is the one hesitating), so rather than lacking the willpower to hold back (I wouldn't particularly like that either), I think it will take the direction of her actively wanting BBC. Also because technically she is not engaged or married with anyone yet, so from her point of view the idea of having fun with multiple guys at the same time makes clearly more sense than if she were engaged.

But I also guess there will be new opportunities to make Lena take more of the molly drug, that will definitely become a significant factor in her future behaviours.

I heard that Lena is based off of an actualy pornstar. Is Holly the same? If so, what is her name?

Don't know if Holly is based on a real woman, but she gives me the vibe of a very casual type of quiet girl. If I meet a Holly IRL I might fall in love

 

[TamaMountain]

I think fight tournament will start in chapter 8 and will finish in chapter 9

What makes you think that? I think it's a bit soon for the tournament to take place in ch 8 .

If it does happen I'd expect a sparring session with mma rules where Ian fights Yuri or Jeremy using the fighting mechanic introduced in ch 7.

 

[John Doe Jr.]

I have certainly known other women that were oddly explicit about their size-preferences for cocks

This is why it's not a big deal to me. Along with it being optional anyway of course. I've come across many women irl who were "size queens" and really liked big dicks.

 

[Massi89]

While I never do Ian/Lena or Lena/Jeremycock I have played through committing to more sexual onlyfans where I felt like there was a stark change in tone. At first she was fumbling slightly, trying to figure out a good way to approach the platform, the next she's pulled Stan into her room and twerking in front of him, almost naked and surrendering completely to the screen. While I understand the eroticism in it, I did feel like the development of this story point ended up running away from me. Since then I never do anything but post the nudes from her other work.

"Almost naked"? In that scene you can make her go completely naked and twerk with her asshole and pussy in plain view, you can just remove her panties before making her twerk. I won't say that I didn't enjoy it, but when I watched that scene it made me wonder if Lena was still under the effects of the drug or what, there's even a line where she says "I was feeling very bold" or something along those lines. But the drug (provided that you made her take it) supposedly wore off the previous night after the drinking game still an arousing scene though

Aside from that, I do want to try out any lesbian route other than Lena/Louise at some point, I really enjoyed the kiss scene between Lena and Holly in Ivy's room.

This is why it's not a big deal to me. Along with it being optional anyway of course. I've come across many women irl who were "size queens" and really liked big dicks.

Absolutely, women can be perverts just like us men. They just express it in a different way.

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

I think fight tournament will start in chapter 8 and will finish in chapter 9

Now that is the story i am least looking forward to. I get the feeling it will be a bunch of " dude bros" full of unintentional innuendos (like Jeremy sending dick picks to Ian and Ian jerking off to it).

No offense intended. I just find it very funny considering the developer's stance on gay content.

 

[D00MD1CK]

I won't say that I didn't enjoy it, but when I watched that scene it made me wonder if Lena was still under the effects of the drug or what, there's even a line where she says "I was feeling very bold" or something along those lines. But the drug (provided that you made her take it) supposedly wore off the previous night after the drinking game

The effects of molly only lasts 3-4 hours my dude lol. The bold line is always there, even if you don't take the drug and don't go to Ivy's place.

 

[knightoflisbon]

Where does that scene take place? Do Ian and Robert still fight at the cafe if Lena didn't fuck Robert?

Yeah if he rejects him I'm pretty sure he comes back and is like yo gimme another chance. Perhaps there is a scenario where Robert doesn't appear at the cafe at all. Maybe it's in Mares's walkthrough.

 

[knightoflisbon]

Now that is the story i am least looking forward to. I get the feeling it will be a bunch of " dude bros" full of unintentional innuendos (like Jeremy sending dick picks to Ian and Ian jerking off to it).

No offense intended. I just find it very funny considering the developer's stance on gay content.

Maybe it'll be something where you meet a bunch of new people and one of the fighters has a super hot girlfriend and if you kick his ass and hit on her she gets the Ian special.

Like there would prob be 2 kinds of rewards for doing well in the tournament given that this is a porn game, money and pussy. And like I've said before hopefully Eva uses this as an opportunity to add an Asian female character.

 

[Hasshasshin]

why a game like this dont goes on onlyfans she would prob make huge money

If evaKiss make her onlyfans probably

 

[Massi89]

The effects of molly only lasts 3-4 hours my dude lol. The bold line is always there, even if you don't take the drug and don't go to Ivy's place.

Yeah it can last 5 or 6 hours at most, that's why I say it. In that twerking scene Lena's character kinda felt to me as if she was still in drugged mode. While it is a fun scene I don't know if it makes any sense plotwise, even more so if you avoid the drug and the drinking game.

 

[Deleted member 40068]

How different would the alpha and beta be?

 

[Petro28]

How different would the alpha and beta be?

Beta usually has bug fixes if needed and spelling mistakes fixes. Sometimes a scene slitly changed.

 

[ntrnar]

Yeah it can last 5 or 6 hours at most, that's why I say it. In that twerking scene Lena's character kinda felt to me as if she was still in drugged mode. While it is a fun scene I don't know if it makes any sense plotwise, even more so if you avoid the drug and the drinking game.

Is it really that much of a stretch? Ivy spoke to her the night before about making the most of the app and she has already posted full nudes already on there if you are doing the full strip. She needs money and thus is thinking that she needs to follow Ivy's advice.

She also has Ivy's videos of doing something very similar. The Stan stuff will only happen if you already show an interest in showing off for him so I avoided that in my run. Personally I think Lena can very much see it as a good avenue for some cash, she has already shown that she sees the human body as art so making some cash off of it isn't a huge stretch

 

[mommysboiii]

Maybe it'll be something where you meet a bunch of new people and one of the fighters has a super hot girlfriend and if you kick his ass and hit on her she gets the Ian special.

Like there would prob be 2 kinds of rewards for doing well in the tournament given that this is a porn game, money and pussy. And like I've said before hopefully Eva uses this as an opportunity to add an Asian female character.

I will def lose intentionally because i play nerdy guy ,so lets hope that the enemys will bone my girlfriend

 

[Massi89]

Is it really that much of a stretch? Ivy spoke to her the night before about making the most of the app and she has already posted full nudes already on there if you are doing the full strip. She needs money and thus is thinking that she needs to follow Ivy's advice.

She also has Ivy's videos of doing something very similar. The Stan stuff will only happen if you already show an interest in showing off for him so I avoided that in my run. Personally I think Lena can very much see it as a good avenue for some cash, she has already shown that she sees the human body as art so making some cash off of it isn't a huge stretch

I guess it isn't too much of a stretch and all in all I'm okay with it, but in my run Lena took the drug and we can see very well what changes in her when the effects start to show (blowjob in a public place). I couldn't sense as clearly the point where the effects wear off in her character though. That's why it confused me a bit in terms of character consistency, but it might just be me. But as you explain yourself, there is definitely still plot consistency to a certain extent.
Eva is trying to create plotlines in various shades, and this scene can make a lot of sense for a reader who wants to make Lena's lust points as high as possible.

 

[ParkerMets86]

If evaKiss make her onlyfans probably

Is she making an onlyfans?

 

[godoff95]

Today?

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

I think you might be misremembering or misrepresenting that scene a bit. Even a Lena who has expressed BBC being her deepest sexual fantasy (and in order to be able to choose that she either has shown interest in Jeremy’s cock before or is already a bit of a size queen) will express doubts during that scene. For example: even with the fantasy and after choosing to take his pants off Lena’s inner monologue will say “I hesitated for an instant. Jeremy was Ian's friend, not to mention Louise's boyfriend…” UNLESS she’s also under the influence of drugs.

After that the player still has the option to quit the game a couple times (and different motives are given explicitly or through inner monologue) and when reaching the handjob point Lena still has the option to don’t do it -spending one will point if she has the fantasy- and again expressing her concerns then.

So, for the scene to develop as you painted it (and yes, it can indeed happen), with Lena “happily dismissing Ian” even when having feelings for him, Lena has to have lusted for Jeremy before, and confess her BBC fantasy, and be on drugs, and go full ahead with the game till the end ignoring all the middle ground wayouts. If not, at some point or another some degrre of reluctance and doubts will be displayed. But, if after several choices the player has made clear is all in about it, what room for reluctance is left?

I mean, after taking all those steps I'd say the player can’t expect Lena to be thinking about Ian (she does it the day after), or just being clearheaded, when he has guided her actions in the opposite direction all the time. With all respect, it looks like a “you have made your bed, now lie in it” scenario to me...

Fair point. I actually only played through the drinking game a few times. Once to get the Ivy/Louise happy ending and once for Lena's, but she was on drugs with that fetish selected for the Lena-ending playthrough. What seemed off to me is that she had been, in all ways but the big dick/guilty-voyeur-streak, pretty modest, loyal and ethical throughout the play-through. I do think IRL she'd have a lot more push-back in that situation given her prior choices, but agree it could be a specific use-case that's hard to account for, given all the paths in the game. Ideally, the game could've accounted for that and used one of the more neutral/reluctant reactions rather than relying 100% on Drugs + Fetish, but you can't win em all.

(Also... not saying I've had experience with ecstasy... but if I had, I'd confirm that it doesn't do that sort of thing. Definitely makes you touchy-feely, but in a very empathetic way rather than a horndog switch).

 

[bukrekk]

Cant wait for the update. I hope there are scenes for Emma-Ian and Lena-Axel.

 

[irenthusiast]

I cant wait for the update.. EvaKiss games are the best