VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[Dilshad Klein]

Just a guess but if Eva's going to add new scene in beta or Final, there's a high chance it'll probably be LenaxJeremy considering their impending talk after Louise questioning.

It must be something with stan

 

[Deleted member 1637196]

Lena's submissiveness and scenes with Cindy were amazing!

 

[What'sNew]

But on the other Hand in my Holly Playthrough right now I can't Progress the Alison Route how I want...but as I mentioned before this could be a Bug since Alison suddenly mentioned Jeremy and Threesomes out of nowhere in this Playthrough.

Can you elaborate on this bug? I dont recall seeing it.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Agree with your here. Every new chapter makes me realise that a lot of choices in previous chapters don't actually matter in the long run, which like you said, is probably an afterthought by Eva. There seems to be a lot of streamlining in recent chapters, specifically ch 8 and 9. Ch 8 simplified the Holly Lena conundrum for Ian, this one did the same for Alison and Cindy it looks like.

It's why I think the game might be nearing its end a lot sooner than we think. I get the impression Eva is really picking up the pace and getting key events out of the way as quickly as possible. The scope she originally envisioned for the game is way too big for her, so she is making do with these simplifications.

I kind of agree. I thought the Lena/Holly/Ian fix in Chapter 8 was sloppy, though it was better than the disjointed Ch8 Alpha it intended to fix. The needs for writing fixes and the amount of disjointed text in various paths will obviously diminish as the game gets more limiting though, since Eva couldn't handle all that content as-is. There are going to be some noticeably loose threads in the process of reduction in the next chapter or two though, I'm sure.

I don't think it's ending any time soon, though. Seems Eva's just shaving it down to be more manageable since I'm sure she's realized the sprawl is too much for her current resources. The end of the book contest and the tournament likely aren't near the end of the game as some think. Considering developments in this chapter with a certain controlling character, there will be plenty of content to work through after that point.

 

[MaliPizdek]

i am all for Ian/Cindy drama, is she really going to break up with Wade? Does she also love him? Is Wade going to kick Ian's ass when he finds out? Is Jeremy going to high five Ian for being mr. steal your girl?
Where are they going to live if she breaks up with Wade? whose apartment is it? Is Perry going to be mad and kick Ian out for being a scumbag friend to Wade?

ahhh so many questions....

 

[What'sNew]

Does anyone else think Ivy intentionally left Lena alone with Axel?

I think Ivy did it in exchange for Axel guaranteeing a spot in Wildcats for her. Maybe she isn't that good of a friend after all.

 

[WatsonJohn]

You cant get the Lena x Holly lez scene if Ian is with Holly. Lena basically respects Holly's relationship with Ian.

With that being said, I too have no clue how to get the Lena x Holly scene in ch 8. Any ideas guys?

Maybe pursue wasn't the right word. What I meant was if Ian kissed or fucked Holly while he is dating Lena.

 

[qwertycoltan]

my Lena completely ignored seymour and i was surprised how obsessed he is with her. i honestly don't get why. i just really hope Evakiss gives us a route where Ian and Lena can take him down, without interacting with him. on a similar note, i don't like how Ian has to give his manuscript to seymour if i want Ian to fuck minerva. i hope in the future Evakiss won't lock the IanXMinerva there.

 

[Tizio95]

could anyone share Cherry's third scene save? Thanks

 

[demsthedems]

Post any info, please.

Here. Pls let me know if i did it correct or not. Thank you.

 

[BlandChili]

There are a lot of choices involved but kissing doesn't block off Cindy's romantic route.

Even just kissing Cindy after Wade's party - you can unlock both full relationship and cheating options with her.

Alright, neato, thanks. I went all the way on my first pt. with that route, was planning to try to stop after the kiss on the next.

Yes. But it depends on whether your Ian told Lena "I want a relationship with you" or "I'd like to keep things casual" earlier that morning.

If your Ian committed to Lena, then no you cant tell Cindy you want to be with her; you can only tell Cindy to cheat on Wade.

But if Ian tells Lena he wants to be casual, then yes, Ian can pursue Cindy (make her break up with Wade).

Ah, well, that won't be an issue for me as I don't play Ian/Lena most playthroughs.

I'd rather have a more consistent game that doesn't hit my wants than a disjointed mess that gives me every route I was hoping for, since the latter breaks the spell of the narrative and is no fun to play through IMO. Others just want their preferred bobs and vagine content no matter what, though. It's all about what you value most in the content you seek out.

Sure, and it's a part of Eva's job to decide when and how to add extra branches to her narrative structure.
I've writen CYOA stories before myself and I certainly don't envy her this task under pressure to release bi-monthly updates!

my Lena completely ignored seymour and i was surprised how obsessed he is with her. i honestly don't get why. i just really hope Evakiss gives us a route where Ian and Lena can take him down, without interacting with him. on a similar note, i don't like how Ian has to give his manuscript to seymour if i want Ian to fuck minerva. i hope in the future Evakiss won't lock the IanXMinerva there.

Yeah I wonder about the specific reasoning for his interest too. In one of my future playthroughs I'm planning to see how much I can piss him off. Respond like a dumb broad to his pretentious debates and praise Marx' philosophy and such.

 

[rainnnnnn]

what path do you go for to get the scene of Allison sending pics to ian on her vacation getting blacked?

 

[BlandChili]

what path do you go for to get the scene of Allison sending pics to ian on her vacation getting blacked?

I think you have to be on the voyeur path. Jeremy has to fuck Ali early and send pics to Ian. I don't know if you can start the route if Ian is the first to get with her.

 

[PilotLara]

New sigs. of the game, how many have I done so far? I hope you like this new batch of sigs.

Wow wow wow, thank you

 

[jduk]

I think you have to be on the voyeur path. Jeremy has to fuck Ali early and send pics to Ian. I don't know if you can start the route if Ian is the first to get with her.

Ian jerking off to Alison getting fucked by Jeremy and other guys? Fuck...

 

[jduk]

I haven't played 0.9 still, i am afraid of jerking off relentlessly if i do...

 

[kartolas]

I'm a bit disappointed with ORS.
It's kind of a mix of two styles: manwhore where the Male MC can do whatever he wants and, apparently, nothing more than a blackmail/corruption game for the Female MC. Now it feels like the players that coupled Ian and Lena, mostly because she doesn't have a decent partner to pursue, are now having Ian punished for doing it. I used to play manwhore and corruption ones, not blackmail, but after a while I started to avoid them since they never brought anything new and at the core were all the same. ORS is "just" a lot more complex. And no, I don't play blackmail. I think we have enough shit in real life for me to spend my time with that sort of entertainment and here it was just pushed to 11. So there's that, it's a personal choice though.

There is also the feeling that all the decisions we struggled with and had to make prior to this Chapter 9, were irrelevant because, no matter what, we would get to this point in the end, unless of course one went with the Seymour "corruption" early on. All those triggers and status points we had to "learn"...

Do I think there will be a path where she can avoid going down the rabbit hole? I think so, otherwise what would have been the point of giving us all the choices to avoid it?

Don't get me wrong, I love this game and I was expecting it to turn like this, but did it went overboard? I don't know. We will see. I said from the start that Lena got the short end of the stick and if we needed more confirmation...

Just some thoughts.

Thank you and good luck.

 

[BlandChili]

There is also the feeling that all the decisions we struggled with and had to make prior to this Chapter 9, were irrelevant because, no matter what, we would get to this point in the end, unless of course one went with the Seymour "corruption" early on. All those triggers and status points we had to "learn"...

Do I think there will be a path where she can avoid going down the rabbit hole? I think so, otherwise what would have been the point of giving us all the choices to avoid it?

Avoiding it is already in the chapter. I was able to refuse Seymour.

 

[rainnnnnn]

can you have Allison send you the vid and not Jermmy?

 

[Trasher2018]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/scripts/story/chapter_9b.rpy", line 3834, in <module>
NameError: name 'v6_axel_sex' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "scripts/story/chapter_9b.rpyc", line 3834, in script
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 1852, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "renpy/python.py", line 2249, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "renpy/python.py", line 2242, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/scripts/story/chapter_9b.rpy", line 3834, in <module>
NameError: name 'v6_axel_sex' is not defined

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.4.1439
Our Red String v0.9ALPHA
Tue Oct 26 13:00:49 2021

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and this error comes up when I talk to Ivy.


Edit: Ok - just saw there is already a unofficial fix for that. nvm ^^