VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

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Brickman

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RustyCooter said:
Humm after reading quite a few pages on this thread. I think I'll pass on this game. Seems like it is more of a daytime soap opera drama more then anything.
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Big mistake my friend, people talk about the plot because the story is compelling, but we are here because of the sex, which is awesome. Having good characters and story to back it up only makes it even more satisfying
 
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qwertycoltan

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Man i'm really hoping for some IanXLouise action in the future. In my playthrough Lena told her about Jeremy and rejected her advances. All she does mope around the entire rest of the game after that.
 
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dontcarewhateverno

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BloodyMares said:

I also suspect she didn't think about the Robert situation that happened in the previous chapter when writing the scene of Lena grilling Ian because Ian never brings it up or even reflects back on it in his thoughts, which makes the Holly's path seem like a completely separate event, not influenced by the player's choices in the rest of the game (except for Ian's choice to get close with Holly or not).
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That's my experience also. My first Chapter 8 playthrough was from a save where Lena had remained "faithful" to Ian throughout the story (other than some voyeuristic fantasies and girl-on-girl), but Ian had either slept with or kissed Holly. So Lena's reaction seemed plausible, if a little harsh in the regretful-kiss scenario where Ian had otherwise remained faithful. But
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I just feel like Eva was probably overwhelmed and lost in the process of creating this chapter, so neglected to write at least one alternate reaction to the Ian/Holly scenario. It's a major plot-point that absolutely needs at least two scripts, even just an all purpose reflection
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There are a lot of threads to account for, so the occasional inconsistency is expected. But this is the first major one that affects at least 50% of playthroughs, so I really hope she does something to correct it for the sake of quality control before the release of Chapter 8 Final. It knocks down the quality of the game a lot for people that care about cohesive narrative.
 
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BlandChili said:
I'm also really interested in the idea that Ivy seems to have some sort of involvement in it all, given how strongly she reacts against Cherry.
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At first I thought that she was just parroting what Lena said earlier, you know, a friend supporting her friend by automatically agreeing with her. But after reading it again, yes, she seems oddly hostile to even the idea of Lena talking to Cherry. First I thought we could lay the suspicions about Ivy and Axel to rest. Her explanation makes sense and you get a fucking willpoint for immediately believing her. But why was Axel shooting her at his home? Wouldn't he use a studio for that? To think of it, maybe Ivy sabotages all of Lena's relationships to have her for herself? Like with Louise?
BlandChili said:
Indeed, I doubt it was added just for the heck of it, so it'll be interesting to see if anything does come of it.
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But they have no connection at all. They literally just fuck. Maybe he is supposed to become her 'good' option Lena is missing so much. But for that he would have to ditch his girlfriend...... Oh, wait. :LOL:
 
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Glooskabe

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qwertycoltan said:
Man i'm really hoping for some IanXLouise action in the future. In my playthrough Lena told her about Jeremy and rejected her advances. All she does mope around the entire rest of the game after that.
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I have one playthrough where Ian concentrates on Lena, and besides Ian, the only one Lena sleeps with is Louise. Really hoping for some threesome action on that path. It would be especially spicy if Lena has been domming Louise but submissive to Ian... How does Louise react? Does she submit to her domme's dom? Or does seeing her domme submit to someone else make her question her dynamic with Lena? :love:

Ahem... :whistle::coffee:
 
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dundun said:
At first I thought that she was just parroting what Lena said earlier, you know, a friend supporting her friend by automatically agreeing with her. But after reading it again, yes, she seems oddly hostile to even the idea of Lena talking to Cherry. First I thought we could lay the suspicions about Ivy and Axel to rest. Her explanation makes sense and you get a fucking willpoint for immediately believing her. But why was Axel shooting her at his home? Wouldn't he use a studio for that? To think of it, maybe Ivy sabotages all of Lena's relationships to have her for herself? Like with Louise?
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Yes and it could account for, at least in part, how heavily she seems to latch onto the idea of making Holly "loose" after initially dismissing her entirely at their first meeting, her real interest comes when Lena insists that there is more to her. Did you per chance read the speculation by manscout? I thought there was some interesting possibilities.
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But they have no connection at all. They literally just fuck. Maybe he is supposed to become her 'good' option Lena is missing so much. But for that he would have to ditch his girlfriend...... Oh, wait. :LOL:
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Well, that's what I mean by it being interesting, if Lena can fall in love with him Eva'd have to either write in that Lena finds a deep spiritual connection with his physical prowess in bed :ROFLMAO: or he suddenly shows himself for more than a good fuck.
 
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The last version I played was 0.5. I wait for more content so I can marathon it. Now a question. Is there a 3 some route for Ian, Lena and Holly? This is only route I really want to play.
 
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astranabeat said:
The last version I played was 0.5. I wait for more content so I can marathon it. Now a question. Is there a 3 some route for Ian, Lena and Holly? This is only route I really want to play.
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Anything in that direction is still only drama, no payoff for that route yet.
 
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