VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[Samuel Hidayat]

Is that jeremy, why is he white? Rest are amazing.

I heard the AI has a habit of turning dark-skinned people white.

 

[gorloff]

Perry Gigachad

 

[Blurpee69]

Lena
Ian
Ivy
Holly
Cindy
Cherry
Allison
White Jeremy
Louise?
Perry
Emma
Axel
Minerva

 

[MadMax7]

Looks really good, but this AI needs to learn how to work with colors, especially hair. I can't recognize some characters here, who's the girl on 7th pic?

Alison, of course. But "true" alison is somewhere between 1 and 3, i think

 

[PilotLara]

PilotLara sorry to bother, but there's what seems like a minor bug/inconsistency in Chapter 7:

            "{image=icon_lust.webp}Flirty comment" if v5_cindy_nude > 1 and ian_lust > 4:
                $ renpy.block_rollback()
                $ v7_cindy_pics = 2
                i "{i}They're spectacular, Cindy. Even better than the first ones{/i}."
                "It was hard typing with just one hand."
                c "{i}Right? I like these a lot more!{/i}"
                i "{i}You look a lot more comfortable. And that black bodysuit looks great on you... Though it seems like it's coming off {image=emoji_flirt.webp}{/i}"
                if v5_cindy_nude == 2:
                    c "{i}Yeah, we did some nude shots too, like last time... {image=emoji_shy.webp}{image=emoji_shy.webp}{/i}"
                elif v5_cindy_nude == 1:
                    c "{i}Yeah, we did some nude shots too at the end... {image=emoji_shy.webp}{/i}"
                    i "{i}Completely nude? Not just topless like last time?{/i}"
                    c "{i}Yeah {image=emoji_shy.webp}{image=emoji_shy.webp}{/i}"
                else:
                    c "{i}Yeah, we did some nude shots too at the end... {image=emoji_shy.webp}{/i}"
                    i "{i}No way!{/i}"
                    c "{i}Yeah {image=emoji_shy.webp}{image=emoji_shy.webp}{/i}"

This menu option is only enabled when v5_cindy_nude equals 2, i.e. if the first photo session with Cindy ended up with completely nude shots, but the branch content is capable of handling other variants as well, so perhaps the requirement here should be relaxed/removed, leaving Ian's lust attribute as primary factor?

At the least, allowing this option if the first session ended with topless shots (v5_cindy_nude > 0) would create a nice sense of progression for Cindy/Ian (going from being topless in front of him, to sending him nudes)

Thanks, ffive! I'll pass this along to Eva.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

Hey guys, anyone know the best choices for Ian vs Jeremy sparring in Ch. 10? Also, does Wen always comment "good spar" if Ian does well?

 

[Blurpee69]

Hey guys, anyone know the best choices for Ian vs Jeremy sparring in Ch. 10? Also, does Wen always comment "good spar" if Ian does well?

I don't think you can win that spar. I tried many different times, many different ways and Jeremy always one hits Ian. If you do alright though and don't immediately get knocked out Wen will congratulate Ian.

 

[mommysboiii]

Perry Gigachad

ai probably preditcts the future here gigachad arc incoming

 

[mommysboiii]

Even the game stated that ian is better in bed but looks like you r just trolling lol

that totally depends how you play lool

When did the game say that?

nah he is right you can play ian that way but it totaly depends on your decissions my ian sucks as hell

The impression I've gotten of Louise is she isn't the best at picking romantic partners. Seems to be hinted at in the earlier parts of the game.

As for when the game covered Jeremy's stamina issue, if he has a threesome with Ian and Allison, the player basically gets to decide if Ian can outlast Jeremy or not. If Ian does it's, again, implied that Ian is the more skilled lover. I don't remember the exact line, but it's something along "I'll give her what she needs." and Allison comments in agreement.

Thinking about it though, I think that's the only situation that brings up any sort of commentary on Jeremy not being satisfactory. If Ian doesn't take interest in Allison, or if Lena takes interest in Jeremy, both seem happy with his skill. I don't remember Jeremy's different paths all that well, since I usually let Louise dump him.

do you also testet the part where jermey fucks alison brain out?

 

[ffive]

Midjourney works
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Honestly, if i didn't know what the source material was i couldn't even start to guess who these people are, aside maybe from Perry. Even if i know who they're supposed to be from, i can't tell with most of them. (i might have a mild prosopagnosia, but still)

 

[Blurpee69]

that totally depends how you play lool


nah he is right you can play ian that way but it totaly depends on your decissions my ian sucks as hell


do you also testet the part where jermey fucks alison brain out?

This reads to me as rather combative, and I'm not sure why. I answered how to get the dialogue that indicates Ian is better than Jeremy. I then immediately posit it only happens in that one situation, and I couldn't remember another situation that Jeremy's sexual ability was brought into question. So it's clearly a storyline choice.

 

[ffive]

Hey guys, anyone know the best choices for Ian vs Jeremy sparring in Ch. 10? Also, does Wen always comment "good spar" if Ian does well?

The optimal path was posted some time ago (it was something like attack/taunt, guard->counter, taunt). "Good spar" is if you get the best possible outcome, yes, otherwise it's "decent" or "you obviously suck". Ian will generally need extra gym lessons to get that "good spar" though, as otherwise the counter which is worth a crucial point won't land.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Alison, of course. But "true" alison is somewhere between 1 and 3, i think

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I like the third option more, the shape of her face and cheekbones are more suitable for the original - in the first pic they are too narrow and I thought that this was one of Lena's variations.
Btw, if you want to post it on Twitter/Reddit, you better delete Jeremy, the local "fauna" will have a heart attack when they see what happened with the black character.

 

[mommysboiii]

This reads to me as rather combative, and I'm not sure why. I answered how to get the dialogue that indicates Ian is better than Jeremy. I then immediately posit it only happens in that one situation, and I couldn't remember another situation that Jeremy's sexual ability was brought into question. So it's clearly a storyline choice.

its clrearly a optional choice it would be the same if ntr happens with axel(optional with cindy) and I would say dosent matter on which path you are it HAPPENS ALL THE TIME would be a bad argument ofc this dialoge exist I am not denying that I remember sawing it too in one playthrough but it only happens if you play ian that way probably to give you that power fantasy for guys that have no problem with sharing but only do it for the fittest survivor /vikings fantasy that your ian is the alpha dog and beat them all so again it only happens if you play ian that way if you play ian like a loser jeremy clearly completly outperformed ian by MILES

 

[Galentein]

Just finished the 10 first chapters recently and i really enjoyed this game so far, look like a better, more polished version of GGGB.
EvaKiss really step up her character story and personality, i surprised myself enjoying most of the cast.
I dunno what she plan for most of them even if we have a fair number of route already on board but i really wish some of them get more attention later on.
Specially about Emma, who was surprisingly enjoyable, i really hope EvaKiss consider some route were she get corrupted by Seymour (wich is an awesome character, far from your average creep, he's actually pretty smart and dangerous) using her affinity and friendship with Lena to get in her pants and get rid out a political enemy and making a new doll ^^, one stone, two birds.
Because of the density of the characters and their connections, this game had a lot of potential.

She did an amazing job on this one, i wish her good luck for this project.

 

[mommysboiii]

Just finished the 10 first chapters recently and i really enjoyed this game so far, look like a better, more polished version of GGGB.
EvaKiss really step up her character story and personality, i surprised myself enjoying most of the cast.
I dunno what she plan for most of them even if we have a fair number of route already on board but i really wish some of them get more attention later on.
Specially about Emma, who was surprisingly enjoyable, i really hope EvaKiss consider some route were she get corrupted by Seymour (wich is an awesome character, far from your average creep, he's actually pretty smart and dangerous) using her affinity and friendship with Lena to get in her pants and get rid out a political enemy and making a new doll ^^, one stone, two birds.
Because of the density of the characters and their connections, this game had a lot of potential.

She did an amazing job on this one, i wish her good luck for this project.

hope that cindy and alison will also joint old grandpas doll house

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

i think thats Minerva

It was Alison.
Minerva in the last pic, recognized her by her scarf and older face.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

Midjourney works
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These are great but Perry is way too hot.

 

[ffive]

but Perry is way too hot.

That's why this one is accurate.

It's no accident all these hot models get all weak in the knees for Perry.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

The optimal path was posted some time ago (it was something like attack/taunt, guard->counter, taunt). "Good spar" is if you get the best possible outcome, yes, otherwise it's "decent" or "you obviously suck". Ian will generally need extra gym lessons to get that "good spar" though, as otherwise the counter which is worth a crucial point won't land.

It's this one, right?

The best evaluation you can get is a step above that, "a good spar".

* round 1: either Provoke or Guard
* round 2: Guard, then Strike if you focused on kickboxing or Grapple if Ian is under Wen's tutelage. For grappling, to score a point you'll need to put extra effort in the gym; possibly for Strike as well, haven't tested that route.
* round 3: doesn't really matter. Tapping out will let you avoid getting punched in the face, if it bothers you to get one. But keep in mind that will cost you some athetics/friendship gains, if you did well until that point.

edit: actually, wait. The way things are coded currently, it is not possible to get more than 3 points in jiujitsu even with extra effort, and the game requires 4 points to perform good in the spar. I'd presume this is an error that the developer might want to hear about, since it doesn't seem to be intentional.

This is the problematic bit, in chapter 8:

        if v7_effort_gym:
            if jiujitsu < 3:
                $ jiujitsu += 1

It should be < 4 in order to work, or simply do away with the check altogether.

Alternatively, the skill requirement in the spar should be lowered by 1 point for jiujitsu branch. But then you could get the best result even without extra effort (and the extra effort potentially produces no benefit as your skill can already be 3 at that point) which i doubt is the intention.