VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[HunterWithEH]

Hope we can get this in future updates

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[Vurg]

The complaining in this thread always amuses me, especially when it involves completely avoidable choices in a multiple choice game.

Anyways, I think I've gone through every route in the new chapter aside from the Lena x Louise content. Want to type out some thoughts on existing relationships and interactions, as well as speculation on the groundwork that EvaKiss has laid in this chapter for future content.

Ian x Lena: Pleasantly surprised to see you can continue with this route even if Lena ends up sleeping with Jeremy. To be completely honest, I'd be fine if it led to a threesome with Ian x Jeremy x Lena. I kind of like the idea of Jeremy and Ian keeping a friendly relationship with both womanizing at the same time.

Ian x Allison: Great content IMO. Not much in the way of building up of future content aside from the obvious pregnancy scare that will probably come in the future.

Ian x Holly: This relationship seems to be building towards the idea that Holly has a fetish for having Ian finish in her mouth, which is great way to differentiate her sexually from the rest of the cast! Also, it seems like if they're an official couple, Holly and Mark can't end up hooking up. I think a threesome with Holly and Lena is still on the table though it seems? This chapter introduces a lot of potential suitors for Holly, so I guess this is the "conflict" that will challenge this couple going forward if you choose to not treat Holly right. Good idea IMO.

Ian x Cherry: Not much focus on her this chapter. Seems to be mostly setting up some content and building her relationship with Ian. Hope to see content next chapter.

Ian x Cindy: I know I'm in the minority, but this storyline bores me LOL. That being said, I am curious to see where the Axel and Wade branches potentially go.

Ian x Emma: Great content as well, and I like how it interacts with the routing where Ian is in a relationship with other women. I am curious of threesome content with Jeremy is on the table, but I wouldn't be surprised if this doesn't happen. I am interested to see if we see more content of Emma with Jeremy (or anyone else) if Ian rejects her though.

Ian x Ivy: Finally some set-up going to have them potentially connect in the gym.

Ian x Jess: Good Jess, potentially a threesome? Awesome IMO. Even better, I suspect a swingers thing with Lena x Ian + Jess x Dave/Ashley is being set-up, and I would LOVE for this to happen. Bad Jess, potentially participating in porn? Cool too.

Ian x Louise: Finally some interaction, and maybe some set-up to let Ian steal her away from Jeremy? Great, I hope to see this pay off.

Ian x Minerva: I'm assuming there will be content next chapter. I dig the new haircut.

Lena x Axel: Some set-up for more sub content in the future. Wish there was a bit more that played out here, and I'm interested in seeing how it interacts more directly with the other relationships.

Lena x Ivy: Finally, some content. Aside from that, the dynamic hasn't changed much I think. More interested in seeing Ivy x Ian content now.

Lena x Holly: The most wholesome relationship. Curious again to see if Eva's setting them up to do a threesome.

Lena x Jess: Again, with Good Jess, I suspect threesome/swingers content in the future. Bad Jess doesn't seem to like Lena, but I'd be interested in seeing Lena go into porn.

Lena x Jeremy: The threesome was a good way to move the storyline forward, though I would like to see how this unfolds in relation to Ian (maybe Ivy as well).

Lena x Robert: Missing from this chapter .... And that's fine IMO. He's already got a lot content.

Lena x Perry(!!!): A pleasant surprise of an interaction. I kind of hope this sets the table for Lena having a gangbang with Ian + all his friends.

Lena x Mark: Pleasant surprise as well, but I'm assuming this is a one off. Wouldn't mind a threesome with Holly.

Lena x Mike: Adding the music making element is a good idea actually, and surprised it wasn't brought up earlier. Still waiting for the conflict with his girlfriend.

Lena x Seymour: If Lena doesn't work for him, she still ends up being able to model, which I guess is an easy way to write and resolve the scenes, but I personally would have preferred she come up with a different source of income. I understand it's particularly hard to write your way out of this corner without making it too complicated though. I was hoping for another test if Lena does work for him too, but I am hoping there's more interesting content for this path next chapter.

Lena x Stan: Finally some escalating content, and of course, hope it keeps escalating.

Holly x Stan: A logical introduction IMO. Hope we get to see this play out with content.

Holly x Mark: The roadhead surprised me honestly, but I'm not complaining. More corruption content please.

Holly x Marcel: More set-up that I hope pays off next chapter. Really dig this pairing.

I think that covers everything. I like it when characters that don't usually interact with each other suddenly have interactions and it opens up new dimensions. Looking forward to the payoff.

 

[harsha_26]

I am, that's why I like this game and where I find the most interest in Ian's story. The game has been catered to prime like me, and not you, and that's ok.

If EvaKISS had infinite resources maybe she would add a way for you to play out your preferred fantasy, but she doesn't. She's opted to cater to the sensibilities of people like myself and others, but not for you, and as much as you might want her to cater to your preferred storyline/ characterisation, she's not obligated to and you're not entitled to demanding that.

You've made it clear what you would like, not you've gone over the line in further demanding that the world confom to your whims and dismissed/denied the preferences of others (i.e. "Everyone [playing this game]... is not looking for love"). That statement couldn't be further from the truth, I would argue that is the major selling point and authorial focus of the narrative.


But you being wrong aside, perhaps consider that things aren't all made expressly and directly for you, but rather that media is created by artist that want to express themselves and/or connect with an audience that may, or may not, be you.

Where did i demanded Eva? She can do what she want. I said what i'm into. I still want to see does Ian's character will cater to my kinks in future. But, hope is very less.

 

[sabu6]

what? You mean to just put the rpy file inside game folder?? Also it doesn't work

Youre probably using compressed version, use unren to extraxt rpa files and replace them, youll get a scripts folder where this file can be used. It works

 

[harsha_26]

God you people are so fucking weird.
Ian can:
Cuck Wade
Cuck Minerva's husband
Essentially cuck every other character by fucking Lena assuming you don't play her like a whore
Constantly ignore Alison rawdog requests (which she secretly loves)
Outperform Jeremy, again assuming you don't play like a baby bitch

Did I disagreed anywhere that Ian can cuck Wade & Minerva? No. I said the level of cucking in Ian's alpha route isn't equal to what Jeremy is doing to Ian in Ian's cuck route. Ian can cuck wade behind his back unlike jeremy who is cucking Ian with multiple girls which are all potential love instrests of Ian by sending videos to him and Ian jerking to it. This is what i'm into. I'm into maledom, kinky, hardcore, bully, netori sex where i can cuck male NPCs and have them jerked while my MC is fucking their girls. Especially to the male NPCs like Jeremy. I truly enjoyed only one route. That is Minerva's maledom route. But im sure if jeremy got eyes on minerva, he can overthrow Ian in maledom level too. (Yes by choices). Choices is not my problem. But the amount and level of content for the Ian & other males, especially for my preffered kinks is what bothering me. But, it is finally Eva's decision. Im just saying what is my preference.

 

[everythingsok]

Gallery Unlocker for v.10 alpha

Put it in game\scripts\gui\custom

Also Eva Kiss I'm so happy a woman developer as talented as you exists. Too many games with bad writing and unrealistic portrayal of sex, lust, romance. I think this is probably the only one in the Western world that has a well rounded perspective of both sexes. Keep up the good work.

it's not working

 

[saralak]

how to open stan last scene

 

[wsxer]

Can you beat Jeremy in sparring?

 

[Mister Boombastic]

what? You mean to just put the rpy file inside game folder?? Also it doesn't work

it's not working

I had some trouble as well, since there was no 'scripts' folder in my game folder. Just create the game\scripts\gui\custom folders manually and put the gallery unlocker in there. Then it should work.

 

[jojogeo]

Where do you find the points in the code? Are you opening a file via UnRen or just looking at the save file in notepad?

I opened my save with saveeditor.online and searched book_point
I tried another time with sci-fi book and got 0 point .

 

[sevensham]

what the last scene stan do?

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

so i spent 10 chapters with my boy ian trying to be a nice dude and the whore female character take drugs and bang some fucking dj? another ntr shit game.

Player: Select do drugs at party. > Player: Select don't go into bathroom with MC boyfriend. > Player: Select dance with dude who's not MC boyfriend > Player: Select go into bathroom and fuck guy who's not MC boyfriend --- [MC gf proceeds to fuck guy who's not MC boyfriend].

Player: WTF?!? I've been cucked! That fucking whore!!


Edit:

Detailed diagram of Player getting cucked:

 

[desmosome]

Here is a "what if" for yall. Eventually, Seymour gets tired of Emma's bs and tasks Lena into getting her under his influence. There is the convo at the bar already that could be used as the groundwork for this angle.

It's always pretty hot when they betray their ideals for some corruption. Ian looks through his insta feed and sees how Emma slowly changes sides. 'Huh.. why is she promoting Seymour's gentrification plans now?'

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

I opened my save with saveeditor.online and searched book_point
I tried another time with sci-fi book and got 0 point .

Thanks. I ended up just using Unren and looking at chapter 10 script text to get the answer for the selection I got wrong.

 

[Lemix]

Player: Select do drugs at party. > Player: Select don't go into bathroom with MC boyfriend. > Player: Select to dance with dude who's not MC boyfriend > Player: Select go into bathroom and fuck guy who is not MC boyfriend --- [MC gf proceeds to fuck guy who is not MC boyfriend].

Player: WTF?!? I've been cucked! That fucking whore!!


Edit:

Detailed diagram of Player getting cucked:
View attachment 2205971

This dude probably.
"oh no, i got cucked again, the game forced me" *unzips pants and starts furiously fapping* "what a whore"

 

[italianstallionxxx]

I deleted the game

 

[Skylark21]

I deleted the game

 

[mistkae]

Any idea how to make Ian like Lena being on Stalkfap? I'm making them both lustful but that option is always greyed out

 

[ArcherHades46]

The complaining in this thread always amuses me, especially when it involves completely avoidable choices in a multiple choice game.

Anyways, I think I've gone through every route in the new chapter aside from the Lena x Louise content. Want to type out some thoughts on existing relationships and interactions, as well as speculation on the groundwork that EvaKiss has laid in this chapter for future content.

Ian x Lena: Pleasantly surprised to see you can continue with this route even if Lena ends up sleeping with Jeremy. To be completely honest, I'd be fine if it led to a threesome with Ian x Jeremy x Lena. I kind of like the idea of Jeremy and Ian keeping a friendly relationship with both womanizing at the same time.

Ian x Allison: Great content IMO. Not much in the way of building up of future content aside from the obvious pregnancy scare that will probably come in the future.

Ian x Holly: This relationship seems to be building towards the idea that Holly has a fetish for having Ian finish in her mouth, which is great way to differentiate her sexually from the rest of the cast! Also, it seems like if they're an official couple, Holly and Mark can't end up hooking up. I think a threesome with Holly and Lena is still on the table though it seems? This chapter introduces a lot of potential suitors for Holly, so I guess this is the "conflict" that will challenge this couple going forward if you choose to not treat Holly right. Good idea IMO.

Ian x Cherry: Not much focus on her this chapter. Seems to be mostly setting up some content and building her relationship with Ian. Hope to see content next chapter.

Ian x Cindy: I know I'm in the minority, but this storyline bores me LOL. That being said, I am curious to see where the Axel and Wade branches potentially go.

Ian x Emma: Great content as well, and I like how it interacts with the routing where Ian is in a relationship with other women. I am curious of threesome content with Jeremy is on the table, but I wouldn't be surprised if this doesn't happen. I am interested to see if we see more content of Emma with Jeremy (or anyone else) if Ian rejects her though.

Ian x Ivy: Finally some set-up going to have them potentially connect in the gym.

Ian x Jess: Good Jess, potentially a threesome? Awesome IMO. Even better, I suspect a swingers thing with Lena x Ian + Jess x Dave/Ashley is being set-up, and I would LOVE for this to happen. Bad Jess, potentially participating in porn? Cool too.

Ian x Louise: Finally some interaction, and maybe some set-up to let Ian steal her away from Jeremy? Great, I hope to see this pay off.

Ian x Minerva: I'm assuming there will be content next chapter. I dig the new haircut.

Lena x Axel: Some set-up for more sub content in the future. Wish there was a bit more that played out here, and I'm interested in seeing how it interacts more directly with the other relationships.

Lena x Ivy: Finally, some content. Aside from that, the dynamic hasn't changed much I think. More interested in seeing Ivy x Ian content now.

Lena x Holly: The most wholesome relationship. Curious again to see if Eva's setting them up to do a threesome.

Lena x Jess: Again, with Good Jess, I suspect threesome/swingers content in the future. Bad Jess doesn't seem to like Lena, but I'd be interested in seeing Lena go into porn.

Lena x Jeremy: The threesome was a good way to move the storyline forward, though I would like to see how this unfolds in relation to Ian (maybe Ivy as well).

Lena x Robert: Missing from this chapter .... And that's fine IMO. He's already got a lot content.

Lena x Perry(!!!): A pleasant surprise of an interaction. I kind of hope this sets the table for Lena having a gangbang with Ian + all his friends.

Lena x Mark: Pleasant surprise as well, but I'm assuming this is a one off. Wouldn't mind a threesome with Holly.

Lena x Mike: Adding the music making element is a good idea actually, and surprised it wasn't brought up earlier. Still waiting for the conflict with his girlfriend.

Lena x Seymour: If Lena doesn't work for him, she still ends up being able to model, which I guess is an easy way to write and resolve the scenes, but I personally would have preferred she come up with a different source of income. I understand it's particularly hard to write your way out of this corner without making it too complicated though. I was hoping for another test if Lena does work for him too, but I am hoping there's more interesting content for this path next chapter.

Lena x Stan: Finally some escalating content, and of course, hope it keeps escalating.

Holly x Stan: A logical introduction IMO. Hope we get to see this play out with content.

Holly x Mark: The roadhead surprised me honestly, but I'm not complaining. More corruption content please.

Holly x Marcel: More set-up that I hope pays off next chapter. Really dig this pairing.

I think that covers everything. I like it when characters that don't usually interact with each other suddenly have interactions and it opens up new dimensions. Looking forward to the payoff.

Save pls?)))

 

[_Zebra_]

Any idea how to make Ian like Lena being on Stalkfap? I'm making them both lustful but that option is always greyed out

• Option A: Ian subscribed to Lena's Stalkfap account before Chapter 10. If you did, you'll open the "It turns me on" choice.
• Option B: You pick "It makes me feel insecure" and "Good idea" when she ask you to take a picture of her. The "Good idea" choice is locked behind a ian_lust > 5 condition.