Ok, let's assume you are right, although I would still contend you on multiple points, you are still holding Eva at a higher standard than most writers on this site. Her not meeting this standard doesn't make her game average or below, it's still better writing than the majority of the games on this site, making it de-facto above average.
Entirely debateable, given the flood of shit/fetish games and no writing talent, sure.
Agreed. Eva's no poet and no award-winning writer by a long shot. But we're talking games here. Not just games. Porn games. My butt poops out better dialogue and more stimulating narrative than 95% of games on this site. Eva's writing: Good enough, considering the competition. (TBF, my butt has won a Poohlitzer).
So, if we won't agree on the finer points, will you at least concede that ORS technically has above average writing? Further, when the time comes that Eva graces us with Ian's dick in Ivy, and the characters are more fleshed out, I wouldn't keep seeing you get in a tizzy about Ivy? I just think there are more valid things you could criticize her for.
If and when, we shall see. For now, truce.
you can use some software where make control buttons as you type on keyboard
Stopped reading at "The story is average"
The fact that you had to quote me says others wise. Have a lovely day.
I agree Eva's games fall into the trap of following a strict "release cycle" development plan that often loses track of what would work best in terms of a full-fledged product. But that's pretty much the only thing I agree with, everything else reads like an extremely shallow read of most characters and mismatched expectations of what you think the story should be and what it is actually trying to be.
SerHawkes has some weird obsession/hate for Jeremy, it's not even funny to see it anymore.
And an equally weird obsession with Ivy. Who, by the way, is every bit as one-note as Jeremy, but apparently that's okay in her case because she's his type or something. I don't know, man.
One genuine criticism I have for ORS and GGGB is that the dialogues can be pretty stiff and bland at times. There are moments when I play them and keep thinking "EK could've paraphrase this," "Character X wouldn't talk like that," "Word X would've fitted this situation better than Word F," etc.
I like my porn to be on the high-brow side, too, dude, but it's too early to make the judgements you're making. I imagine if your in-game choices put Ian and Lena together on a "pure love" path and then have Lena fuck Jeremy and others, there will be "punishment," or what I prefer to call consequences. Same for Ian and Cindy, etc. But if those consequences come too early in the story, their effects are weakened.
You might be missing the point here my friend.
Agree that. Dialouge could be better in spots, among other things naturally. But apparently criticing that is frowned on a porn thread, so I've learned from certain simpletons here. Funny that.
