VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[RobertKing]

So you're fine with cutting out the Cindy, Holly, Emma, Alisson, Cherry content. Potential Gillian and Bad Jess. Yes, of course. The game would have been sooooo much better focusing just on Lena. I'd rather say that Ian's part, NOW, is more interesting than Lena's.

Honestly, yes.

Ian's life is a total other game. We are playing two different story lines that are making both drag, rather than each individually shine.

I've harped on this before that Ian's game play could be wildly more engaging, but the drip feeding of releases is made worse by the fact there are two story lines that have updates at a glacial pace.

Lena's game play is languishing bc it's one path, with some minority different personality traits. By this time in the game In GGGB, you were on wildly different paths that might intersect but maybe didn't intersect at all. With this game, it just feels like one path that everyone is stuck on.

 

[SearingFive]

Nice try Robert, Lena is not going to be yours. Maybe Ian should visit you often and remind you of the ass whooping.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Ladies and Gents! The real, one and only sugar daddy is back!

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Why he is not in jail, not canon

 

[RobertKing]

Nice try Robert, Lena is not going to be yours. Maybe Ian should visit you often and remind you of the ass whooping.

Oh big scary Ian? A sci fi writer whose biggest decision in the game is, to cuck or not to cuck?

I don't hate Ian. I just find him boring. The structure of the game is languishing and you can see people feeling that in real time within this thread.

 

[zoomzoomzoom]

Did Arthur really told his new buddies that his wealth came from hard work? He is drunk in his own Kool-Aid.

I really don't care about GGGB cameos but if this is what EK wants then I kinda want to see bimbo Ashley in Seymour/Arthur's path. Really though, these cameos just take screen time from ORS characters.

 

[amber111]

Weird how Seymour was one of the possible conditions to get being dominated kink for Lena. Now with the update I didn't feel much domination coming from him. Lena even has the option to take control during the photoshoot, which has its own flag for that. Maybe there will be Lena femdom over Seymour? The only thing approaching maledom with this was Lena's internal monologue about giving in to Seymour when she has low disposition. I guess telling Lena to masturbate is being in control, but he's been doing that for the past 3 scenes he's had, I feel like his domination should be ratcheting up, not stagnating.

Yep, I was more disappointed in how Seymour was written in this update than in the update itself. The update had some nice-looking new art but the story and characterization were totally meh.

ps- just like the beach walk choice for Ian. it dont matter what you chose do when u have free time.

 

[dolfe67]

Disappointed that Seymour is all lovey-dovey with Lena... I was expecting prostitution. Maybe later, hope so. Presence of Arthur is hopeful for more kinky content

 

[LoneWaker59]

Damn, ORS already has a lot of interesting characters to work with and develop, but for some reason, EvaKiss is introducing characters from GGGB to make a cameo in the episodes. Lena can flirt with Arthur, but Ed, who is an original character from the game, was cut because it would be "too much work" to develop that path... Well, my friends, with each update, I'm more convinced of one thing: creating two protagonists was 'biting off more than they could chew'. The storyline is in a steep decline, and the updates are so slow it takes 3-4 months of waiting for just 15 minutes of story.

 

[SerHawkes]

Theres disappointment all around. Those who just want Lena while shafting all the others girls and content. (Keep crying.) Geymour stans expecting more kinkdom. (And to think EK loves the guy sooo much she would have actually put in the effort here. Guess not.) Stan stans hoping to hook up with Lena. (While lasting 5 seconds at most.)

And then there are Ian-Ivy fans...

 

[Shadowndev99]

Disappointed that Seymour is all lovey-dovey with Lena... I was expecting prostitution. Maybe later, hope so. Presence of Arthur is hopeful for more kinky content

Yes I hoping more kink but I think there different route and what we saw just one of them or maybe it's just way of his plan make Lena fall for him to bind her deep in the rabbit hole or maybe as story going the man just looking for love behind that armor and that's why we will have our previous daddy back to have Lena next ash and his daughter in his harem hhhh

 

[Xupuzulla]

Damn, ORS already has a lot of interesting characters to work with and develop, but for some reason, EvaKiss is introducing characters from GGGB to make a cameo in the episodes. Lena can flirt with Arthur, but Ed, who is an original character from the game, was cut because it would be "too much work" to develop that path... Well, my friends, with each update, I'm more convinced of one thing: creating two protagonists was 'biting off more than they could chew'. The storyline is in a steep decline, and the updates are so slow it takes 3-4 months of waiting for just 15 minutes of story.

Only one old man is getting a love path and that is Seymour,Ed never had a chance.

 

[Bishop Robert]

Damn, ORS already has a lot of interesting characters to work with and develop, but for some reason, EvaKiss is introducing characters from GGGB to make a cameo in the episodes. Lena can flirt with Arthur, but Ed, who is an original character from the game, was cut because it would be "too much work" to develop that path... Well, my friends, with each update, I'm more convinced of one thing: creating two protagonists was 'biting off more than they could chew'. The storyline is in a steep decline, and the updates are so slow it takes 3-4 months of waiting for just 15 minutes of story.

Wait Ed got cut? Wtf

 

[Deleted member 5513179]

Well, that was underwhelming...

 

[123yhs]

Update was wildly disappointing. One scene that was very vanilla considering the lead up to this path. Eva is always complaining that the branching is slowing things down but this one is fairly straight forward. The development has slowed to a crawl, unfortunately everyone on the Patreon is overly positive and most calling this update 'perfect'. We didnt even get any of Lena's perspective at the beach house. Not sure if it is a perfectionist thing (she has been blaming an issue with a colorist for like 6 months) or just milking patrons or writers block but it sucks that this is what we are getting now.

 

[RobertKing]

Damn, ORS already has a lot of interesting characters to work with and develop, but for some reason, EvaKiss is introducing characters from GGGB to make a cameo in the episodes. Lena can flirt with Arthur, but Ed, who is an original character from the game, was cut because it would be "too much work" to develop that path... Well, my friends, with each update, I'm more convinced of one thing: creating two protagonists was 'biting off more than they could chew'. The storyline is in a steep decline, and the updates are so slow it takes 3-4 months of waiting for just 15 minutes of story.

100%

 

[Xupuzulla]

Update was wildly disappointing. One scene that was very vanilla considering the lead up to this path. Eva is always complaining that the branching is slowing things down but this one is fairly straight forward. The development has slowed to a crawl, unfortunately everyone on the Patreon is overly positive and most calling this update 'perfect'. We didnt even get any of Lena's perspective at the beach house. Not sure if it is a perfectionist thing (she has been blaming an issue with a colorist for like 6 months) or just milking patrons or writers block but it sucks that this is what we are getting now.

The patreons being bootlickers is predictable,EK can release a update where Lena gets shit on in her chest and they are going to happy about it.

 

[Shadowndev99]

Wait Ed got cut? Wtf

I believe some characters they will be dlc after the game is finished

 

[RobertKing]

The patreons being bootlickers is predictable,EK can release a update where Lena gets shit on in her chest and they are going to happy about it.

There are some VERY dedicated fans on the Patreon. And while I hope we don't see Lena in any scat play, there does seem to be an absence of critiquing within that body.

 

[Saerwen]

Three new ones are WIP.

1. Lena/Seymour photoshoot.
2. Lena plays in front of the mirror with her new lingerie set, and Seymour walks in and asks her to continue.
3. Lena fucks Seymor. Vanilla and toy play.

Sugar daddy Seymour is falling hard in

 

[Xupuzulla]

There are some VERY dedicated fans on the Patreon. And while I hope we don't see Lena in any scat play, there does seem to be an absence of critiquing within that body.

I mean is obvious the most hardcore fans are the ones who are going to give money to EK but holy shit,this paid patreons went from voting for more BBC to praise this soap opera