VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Saerwen]

the man loves to seek conflict with everyone.

Like Chihuahuas. They sure know how to stirr up the conflict in the pack of dogs and soon as they start fighting, Chihuahuas run away.

 

[RaveDev]

Does anyone else feel the story after the beach vacation is becoming somewhat disjointed, with scenes jumping between each other? It felt more smoothly connected before, but perhaps the increasing number of choices and paths is making it difficult to maintain that flow.

 

[chinesewarrior]

I am curious about one thing, Ivy acts like she is a master slut but we haven't even seen 1 boy girl sex scene with her. And Lena also acts like she is super slut but she just fucks people one by one, even Alison did 2 bbg threesomes. But suddenly Holy, a shy girl became a super slut, sluttier than Ivy and Lena if we consider the gloryhole is the slutiest thing in the game, she did bj to 7 guys. Something Lena didn't and possibly Ivy also didn't. Lena mentions one time she blew 2 guys at the same time to Ian but Ivy does not mention anything like this at all.

Does Dev want to include slut path for these characters like he did in Good Girl Gone Bad or he saves this to a later stage of the game ? I can understand that maybe he does not want to turn Ivy and Lena into a pornstar level slut immediately, but its chapter 13 already and making Holy like this but not Lena and Ivy (who both acts like teachers of Holy) looks nonsense.

 

[SearingFive]

Does anyone else feel the story after the beach vacation is becoming somewhat disjointed, with scenes jumping between each other? It felt more smoothly connected before, but perhaps the increasing number of choices and paths is making it difficult to maintain that flow.

It's pretty much a transitional period before the main event (Billy's arc).

 

[Saerwen]

I am curious about one thing, Ivy acts like she is a master slut but we haven't even seen 1 boy girl sex scene with her. And Lena also acts like she is super slut but she just fucks people one by one, even Alison did 2 bbg threesomes. But suddenly Holy, a shy girl became a super slut, sluttier than Ivy and Lena if we consider the gloryhole is the slutiest thing in the game, she did bj to 7 guys. Something Lena didn't and possibly Ivy also didn't. Lena mentions one time she blew 2 guys at the same time to Ian but Ivy does not mention anything like this at all.

Does Dev want to include slut path for these characters like he did in Good Girl Gone Bad or he saves this to a later stage of the game ? I can understand that maybe he does not want to turn Ivy and Lena into a pornstar level slut immediately, but its chapter 13 already and making Holy like this but not Lena and Ivy (who both acts like teachers of Holy) looks nonsense.

Well, I look at it like this. Let's say Ivy and Lena have regular sex, meanwhile Holly don't. She's somewhat sexually repressed and it needs a little push for sex to happen. You know, when you are starving for food and you eat a lot and fast until you puke. It's about a good self control.

 

[SearingFive]

I am curious about one thing, Ivy acts like she is a master slut but we haven't even seen 1 boy girl sex scene with her. And Lena also acts like she is super slut but she just fucks people one by one, even Alison did 2 bbg threesomes. But suddenly Holy, a shy girl became a super slut, sluttier than Ivy and Lena if we consider the gloryhole is the slutiest thing in the game, she did bj to 7 guys. Something Lena didn't and possibly Ivy also didn't. Lena mentions one time she blew 2 guys at the same time to Ian but Ivy does not mention anything like this at all.

Does Dev want to include slut path for these characters like he did in Good Girl Gone Bad or he saves this to a later stage of the game ? I can understand that maybe he does not want to turn Ivy and Lena into a pornstar level slut immediately, but its chapter 13 already and making Holy like this but not Lena and Ivy (who both acts like teachers of Holy) looks nonsense.

Holly was definitely high asf during the glory hole scene. Ain't no way she had the courage to do that. I also think that before leaving with Mark, Ivy again spiked her drinks because she told Holly to get some drinks. Lena is dependent on player choices, and the thing she told Ian is exclusive to the cuck path. Ivy knowing everything about Lena seems too convenient.

 

[ffive]

if we consider the gloryhole is the slutiest thing in the game

Why would you consider a few blowjobs while remaining anonymous "the sluttiest things in the game" but actually fucking multiple partners face-to-face (including threesomes) less than that, simply because there's slightly longer time between the acts?

 

[GokutheG]

Why would you consider a few blowjobs while remaining anonymous "the sluttiest things in the game" but actually fucking multiple partners face-to-face (including threesomes) less than that, simply because there's slightly longer time between the acts?

Having sex with multiple people you don't even know is sluttier then having sex with multiple people that you've formed some type of connection with.

Personally sex without some type of emotional attachment just doesn't sound appealing.

 

[ffive]

Having sex with multiple people you don't even know is sluttier then having sex with multiple people that you've formed some type of connection with.

That's with all else being equal, but i'd argue that blowjobs aren't exactly the same sort of sex that (dual)(anal)pentration is, e.g. Or even getting actually throat-fucked, Lena style. Doing it anonymously vs having your identity out in the open also makes quite the difference, or masks wouldn't be such a hit with all sorts of deviants.

 

[GokutheG]

That's with all else being equal, but i'd argue that blowjobs aren't exactly the same sort of sex that (dual)(anal)pentration is, e.g. Or even getting actually throat-fucked, Lena style.

Yeah I think that's just the different opinions of what "sex" is. Like the game can say Lena/Ian never had sex even tho they had oral sex after their third date(the one where they automatically kiss).

 

[2016er]

oh boy, it's that time of year again.
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Anylist where Cindy isn't in "S" tier, should be discarded.

Like, we should call a council of nicaea & declare every other tier where Cindy were placed below S are heretic in nature.

 

[Stilbruch]

Anylist where Cindy isn't in "S" tier, should be discarded.

Cindy has more hoemaxing to do before she earns the S-Tier spot.

 

[2016er]

Although I am bit late in the party but this is my honest unbiased tierlist

 

[MF_DOOM]

Chapter 13.3 status report (9)
New
Just now
Chapter 13.3 is now complete and available to all patrons at €5 and up, but there's still a bit of work to be done.
I've just released an update (

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) that includes a few bugfixes, mainly addressing some rare narrative inconsistencies involving Ian, Cindy, Wade, and Lena. I also added Gillian’s office outfit (which I had forgotten to include in the code). Thanks to Lara, the gallery is now fully updated with all the scenes from this chapter!
Speaking of scenes, I’m planning to add two more at the end of this chapter to give it a more satisfying closure. These past few days I’ve been working on the artwork for them so I can send it to the colorist, and I’ll be developing those scenes this week and next, while also starting prep for Chapter 14 in parallel.

 

[2016er]

The game updates go from Alpha, Beta and Final. New stories and plots are added in Alpha, then it's just a polishing phase until the final version.

Why it's designated as 13.3.3?
Like when or how will it become 14?
Will there be 13.4 ?
Like how the naming works exactly?

 

[ffive]

Why wouldn't he? "Honey, first thing first, today I went into a porn theater where people trade with each other various STDs like they're Pokemon cards and just kinda hang out there for a bit and blew a bunch of guys, but don't get mad, I was wearing a Guy Fawkes mask the entire time so it evens out."

And you really think this is more slutty than "Honey, so you know, i just went and fucked a few of our friends around town. Clark says hi btw, and Perry wants you to pay for those beers you drank at his place last week."

 

[Mystogans_Wrath]

Anylist where Cindy isn't in "S" tier, should be discarded.

Like, we should call a council of nicaea & declare every other tier where Cindy were placed below S are heretic in nature.

Nein your statement is blasphemy any list where Cindy is placed below S tier indicates trash taste & their opinion is invalid

 

[Mystogans_Wrath]

Although I am bit late in the party but this is my honest unbiased tierlist
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I agree on Cindy but Emma & Alison???

 

[Stilbruch]

Why wouldn't he? "Honey, first thing first, today I went into a porn theater where people trade with each other various STDs like they're Pokemon cards and just kinda hang out there for a bit and blew a bunch of guys, but don't get mad, I was wearing a Guy Fawkes mask the entire time so it evens out."

And you really think this is more slutty than "Honey, so you know, i just went and fucked a few of our friends around town. Clark says hi btw, and Perry wants you to pay for those beers you drank at his place last week."

Jesus. Now I can't tell who is the bigger slut anymore.

 

[Ray_D]

Like Chihuahuas. They sure know how to stirr up the conflict in the pack of dogs and soon as they start fighting, Chihuahuas run away. View attachment 4702021

I wouldn't call Axel a Chihuahua, but he's definitely used to fighting people weaker than him.