VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Vengeance_11]

I like Jeremy as a bro character, but he really can't take a fucking hint.

Despite Ian telling him it's a lost cause, Lena telling him multiple times that Ivy isn't interested and even Ivy herself calling him delusional for still trying to pursue her, he still insists that he has a chance with her, despite seeing for himself that Ivy is more concerned with flirting with the big shots who will get her what she wants than a nobody like him.

Even Jack, an actual fuckboi, backed off when Lena wasn't interested, despite clearly having his ego bruised by her rejection.

My hope for the upcoming party is that Ivy finally shuts him down big time and he has to settle for fucking Sonia.

 

[ffive]

My hope for the upcoming party is that Ivy finally shuts him down big time and he has to settle for fucking Sonia.

If Jeremy has any brains, he'll hit on Zarina to make Ivy mark "her territory" by fucking him first.

(cue screeching from half of the player base completely captured by the newest pair of big tits)

 

[Vengeance_11]

If Jeremy has any brains, he'll hit on Zarina to make Ivy mark "her territory" by fucking him first.

(cue screeching from half of the player base completely captured by the newest pair of big tits)

Like I said, by this point I don't think Ivy even remotely cares about a small fish like Jeremy anymore (after all, he was only invited along as an "assistant" for the event) so I would fully expect him to do something dumb like that to try and divert her attention away from Billy.
His jealousy is almost comical and him denying it just makes it even better.

 

[mehGusta]

I mean, Riley Reid did have a rap song.

i miss 1 minute ago when i didn't know this existed.

thanks... sztrb

 

[bfc233]

If Jeremy has any brains

Well, I see a problems in the fundamentals here.

i miss 1 minute ago when i didn't know this existed.

Despite reading this I followed the link since the video wouldn't load here.
Now I can only second this



With that out of the way, what's the ETA on chapter 15?

 

[Birdnman993]

You do understand the exact same thing can be said about Lena, right? Seymour can be ignored (or leveraged), Axel can be mostly ignored, the café modeling/drawing gig as well as Stalkfap are narrative hardships but ultimately just game decisions that can be controlled, similarly to Ian's MMA tourney/corporate job (or lack thereof)/book. You can only fuck Lena's life up if you actively choose to, but I'm sure you get the idea.

Seriously? Let's see, Seymour uses his contacts to ruin any form of work in the entire city, so the options were to sell her life or have no chance of ever working again, which means Lena has to look for anything she can to make ends meet, and let's not forget that all the money she sent to her parents went down the drain because of her brother, and now she needs a lot more for his medical expenses, And to top it off, the rent where she lives is even more expensive. These are things that make her life difficult.

Now Ian lives with Perry, barely paying rent, he has the option of his father helping him financially, and even if he loses the fighting tournament, it's purely anecdotal, no one's life will be in danger or he won't lose his house for losing it. And it's a book. If you get along with Holly, she helps you a lot to make it look good, and even more so if it's fantasy, and even more so if you go to the book festival, so what's the fucking problem? And losing your job? Frankly, if they hadn't told me, I would never have known that was a fucking possibility, so if you're ruining it, it's not my problem. Bitch.

 

[yuvce]

If Jeremy has any brains, he'll hit on Zarina to make Ivy mark "her territory" by fucking him first.

That only solidifies her initial suspicions about him being a moron rather make her inherently jealous.

 

[IlikebeingaDIK]

Seriously? Let's see, Seymour uses his contacts to ruin any form of work in the entire city, so the options were to sell her life or have no chance of ever working again, which means Lena has to look for anything she can to make ends meet, and let's not forget that all the money she sent to her parents went down the drain because of her brother, and now she needs a lot more for his medical expenses, And to top it off, the rent where she lives is even more expensive. These are things that make her life difficult.

Now Ian lives with Perry, barely paying rent, he has the option of his father helping him financially, and even if he loses the fighting tournament, it's purely anecdotal, no one's life will be in danger or he won't lose his house for losing it. And it's a book. If you get along with Holly, she helps you a lot to make it look good, and even more so if it's fantasy, and even more so if you go to the book festival, so what's the fucking problem? And losing your job? Frankly, if they hadn't told me, I would never have known that was a fucking possibility, so if you're ruining it, it's not my problem. Bitch.

Lena can skip sending money to her parents as there's no negative outcome for not sending them any. So in your own words, it's purely anecdotal.

The café stays running (so live drawing and/or music still is still running, she still has Danny or Stan for photoshoots, Lena also has considerably higher earning potential with Stalkfap, extorting Stan, finessing Danny or using Stan again instead.

If you get along with Holly, she helps you a lot to make it look good, and even more so if it's fantasy, and even more so if you go to the book festival, so what's the fucking problem?

If you get along with Seymour, he helps you a lot with money, and even more so if it's a relationship, so what's the fucking problem?

What I'm trying to tell you is that you're emphasizing one's hardships over another narratively, focusing on Lena's worst case scenarios and Ian's best ones. In terms of game mechanics, neither are treated differently. In both cases, you can navigate the game pretty much unscathed and coast with good decisions. And Lena having financial problems? Frankly if you hadn't told me, I would never have known that was a fucking possibility, so if you're messing up, it's not my problem. Bitch.

 

[stuffygames]

i miss 1 minute ago when i didn't know this existed.

thanks... sztrb

Ha, no reloading an earlier save. I will let this be a mystery for myself thank you.

 

[DaLuke2]

Yep, great scene, I had it in the love Ian path and with some good choiches.
How much I love Lena exciting other men without being drilled !

This was probably the strongest point of this update. My pure, faithful, Wits Lena, eventually starting to flirt around. One of the nice surprises of this update.

 

[DaLuke2]

When Lena and Ian discussed the third threesome partner, the game even gave clear options: Robert, Mark, Jeremy, Mike, John and Wade. Naturally, the options are only possible if Lena hooked up with them and Ian must also agree with it, so not be on bad terms with them.

So it can easily expected that a threesome with these will be realized later on (probably copy paste though). Else, they wouldn't be brought up that properly.

Why "naturally" ? On the contrary, I found this condition to be absurd.

You should be able to suggest a candidate you are attracted to for a threesome, without having slept with that person before.

There was the same problem in GGGB, when Ash could not suggest anyone for the MFM to Dave if she had not slept with that candidate already. Totally stupid.

Fortunately, it is now rectified,and that is one of the strong point of this update; people who were not an option once, are back to be one.

Even if Lena has not slept with any of them, you can now have four MFM threesomes planned with John, Jeremy, Mike and Anthony. This is unexpected and I am pleasantly surprised.

Still, the fact that it has not happened yet after five fucking years, and above all the fact that Lena's first MFM wil have been without Ian, makes EK absolutely unforgivable.

 

[La Dani]

This was probably the strongest point of this update. My pure, faithful, Wits Lena, eventually starting to flirt around. One of the nice surprises of this update.

Yep, for me is the funniest game in a couple, IRL too. She goes around to tease, but at the end she's drilled by her fiancee.

 

[disaster007]

how do i get Jeremy + ivy and lena + billy scene

 

[Socrambus]

How to not have this option greyed out? Thanks
View attachment 5300817

You need ian_chad value to be high (4 or higher) and to pick "Make love to Louise" before it greys out.

 

[Yukio]

You need ian_chad value to be high (4 or higher) and to pick "Make love to Louise" before it greys out.

Thanks but how can I instantly get the option not greyed out? I had a save like that but I lost it

 

[Meiri]

Thanks but how can I instantly get the option not greyed out? I had a save like that but I lost it

Use URM, search for that variable and increase it.

 

[Gicoo]

You should be able to suggest a candidate you are attracted to for a threesome, without having slept with that person before.

But then you don't know if the person is even interested in you and if they are a good lay. Hence Lena suggests only guys she slept with and had a good time. Plus Wade, who she talked about it off-screen during the beach trip -_-

 

[ffive]

You should be able to suggest a candidate you are attracted to for a threesome, without having slept with that person before.

There was the same problem in GGGB, when Ash could not suggest anyone for the MFM to Dave if she had not slept with that candidate already. Totally stupid.

Normally i would agree, but in these games --given their mostly binary logic-- it is not out of question for the game to make a presumption that if your MC hasn't slept or at least strongly flirted with a person in any of the 12+ chapters so far, then they are not, in fact, attracted to that person. Because otherwise they'd have made some move on them already.

 

[sztrb]

I like Jeremy as a bro character, but he really can't take a fucking hint.

Despite Ian telling him it's a lost cause, Lena telling him multiple times that Ivy isn't interested and even Ivy herself calling him delusional for still trying to pursue her, he still insists that he has a chance with her, despite seeing for himself that Ivy is more concerned with flirting with the big shots who will get her what she wants than a nobody like him.

Even Jack, an actual fuckboi, backed off when Lena wasn't interested, despite clearly having his ego bruised by her rejection.

My hope for the upcoming party is that Ivy finally shuts him down big time and he has to settle for fucking Sonia.

Big dick, 2 pump chump can't take a hint?

I am shocked. Its almost as if dudes like him don't exist in real life.

Lena can skip sending money to her parents as there's no negative outcome for not sending them any. So in your own words, it's purely anecdotal.

The café stays running (so live drawing and/or music still is still running, she still has Danny or Stan for photoshoots, Lena also has considerably higher earning potential with Stalkfap, extorting Stan, finessing Danny or using Stan again instead.


If you get along with Seymour, he helps you a lot with money, and even more so if it's a relationship, so what's the fucking problem?

What I'm trying to tell you is that you're emphasizing one's hardships over another narratively, focusing on Lena's worst case scenarios and Ian's best ones. In terms of game mechanics, neither are treated differently. In both cases, you can navigate the game pretty much unscathed and coast with good decisions. And Lena having financial problems? Frankly if you hadn't told me, I would never have known that was a fucking possibility, so if you're messing up, it's not my problem. Bitch.

Tbh, given that her mum ends up giving the money to her loser brother instead of spending it on treatment. I'd suggest not sending them the money at all.

 

[Lord Bradley]

You know what would be really funny, if Lena invites Stan to the pool party and then Ivy recognizes Stan as her biggest StalkFap simp and publicly announces all the degenerate shit he ordered as custom from her.