VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[TheCandyman]

I know that the corruption oriented content is not like GGGB, but I have some questions:

- is accepting Seymour offer the only way for Lena of going in a sort of perverted/corrupted direction? I really hate the well dressed-well shaved-well in shape-old rich man stereotype and i can't force myself to accept his offer (like in GGGB with your mother's new man)

- are there other chapters or contents planned?

- No Ed story? Really? Can't you see how sad he is for not having a child? Isn't there perchance a some kind of way to help him?

- If I remember well in the first scenes there is the appearance of a strange hobo. Does he ever appear again?

Thanks!

 

[Xupuzulla]

Nah axel better I will be first send you screenshot of him stealing his gf nerf holly,alison, cindy....

And ian crying with terrible book ....

Hes already stealing Cindy from him,lil bro Ian cant catch a break

 

[Prince of Depression]

someone fantastically more interesting, an aspiring dj, an aspiring club promoter, an aspiring photographer, someone starting a modeling agency.

How this is “fantastically more interesting”? It's just your shitty normie cliche from cheap erotica, bruh.
Hurr Hurr WhY DoN'T We PlaY As PrEsiDenT oR Pimp or MiLliOnAiRe.
Ian is a perfect MC. You just have absolutely no taste, and your primitive kitsch is what really boring as hell.

 

[Nifferman]

Hes already stealing Cindy from him,lil bro Ian cant catch a break

Shut up!! u hater. No one stealing Cindy from Love path Ian and chad Ian doesn't care

 

[Nifferman]

Poor guy haven't been properly raised on exclusive diet of roids, human fetuses and bull testicles, like Axel and Jack, so, as a result, he doesn't resemble a Genetically Perfect Pig. So it naturally makes some people inclined to point out the error of his ways.

Only thing Ian lacking is a bit of height, even then he is considered average in most part of the world. Dude has a decent physique, is smart and witty, can fight and if you are playing the dbag/chad path dude's basically goal driven, manipulative and self centered.

 

[Saerwen]

Only thing Ian lacking is a bit of height, even then he is considered average in most part of the world. Dude has a decent physique, is smart and witty, can fight and if you are playing the dbag/chad path dude's basically goal driven, manipulative and self centered.

Bruce Lee is shorter than Ian. Yet, he's a legend.

 

[Xupuzulla]

Shut up!! u hater. No one stealing Cindy from Love path Ian and chad Ian doesn't care

Cindy belongs to Axel,im sorry

 

[Marley300]

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Quick status report:

I finally got the images from the colorist, and I've started editing and finishing them up. Once I have them all finished, I'll ensamble all the pieces of the update, playtest it and release it, hopefully at the end of next week!

While I was waiting, I've started writing the follow up scenes for Lena in chapter 13, and I also did some progress in the artwork. I'm still figuring out which scenes to include in the chapter, since I want to try and move the story forward without wasting too much time. If you guys are interested, I can make a post commenting about the results of the

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we did, which I'm considering when coming up and planning the scenes to include.

Other than that, I'll keep focusing on pushing the next update out!

 

[Jplays512]

Only thing Ian lacking is a bit of height, even then he is considered average in most part of the world. Dude has a decent physique, is smart and witty, can fight and if you are playing the dbag/chad path dude's basically goal driven, manipulative and self centered.

Ian is actually taller than average if you go by the world as a whole. He is average for America and would only be short in Scandinavian countries and a few other select countries.

 

[wolfling11]

poll result ?

 

[Xupuzulla]

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Quick status report:

I finally got the images from the colorist, and I've started editing and finishing them up. Once I have them all finished, I'll ensamble all the pieces of the update, playtest it and release it, hopefully at the end of next week!
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While I was waiting, I've started writing the follow up scenes for Lena in chapter 13, and I also did some progress in the artwork. I'm still figuring out which scenes to include in the chapter, since I want to try and move the story forward without wasting too much time. If you guys are interested, I can make a post commenting about the results of the

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we did, which I'm considering when coming up and planning the scenes to include.

Other than that, I'll keep focusing on pushing the next update out!

End of the next week!?
Lets go,time for that trip with Seymour,i wonder what the old man has planned for our main girl

 

[Zulsmashing@ss]

End of the next week!?
Lets go,time for that trip with Seymour,i wonder what the old man has planned for our main girl

Maybe a dick? Hahahaha

 

[Lord Bradley]

I think I did a playthrough recently to include Seymour finally just so I can see for myself what will likely be most of the update. I am sceptical and a hater of that man and I intend to be very judgy and rude to any content involving him, ESPECIALLY if without this route update will be quite dry on other paths. However... Eva Kiss in a great developer and just because there is a character that I hate doesn't mean it's bad content and can't be well written. A good story needs both the things you like and things you hate as long as it's all immersive. Looking forward to upcoming holiday season, winter is gonna be lit with all the big games releasing updates!

 

[Xupuzulla]

Maybe a dick? Hahahaha

Not his dick through,i think he finally going to start pimping Lena to other men.

 

[ffive]

- is accepting Seymour offer the only way for Lena of going in a sort of perverted/corrupted direction? I really hate the well dressed-well shaved-well in shape-old rich man stereotype and i can't force myself to accept his offer (like in GGGB with your mother's new man)

Lena's attitude (and to some extent, her backstory) depends on her generic Lust stat which can be raised simply by having sex and/or sex-related options. So, no, you don't need Seymour for anything. Note, you might be making a mistake thinking Lena is another "pure girl corrupted into a slut" tired porn game trope and repeat of GGGB, but she potentially is already very open sexually at the start of the game, due to her earlier relationship with Axel. (and previous, unnamed boyfriend)

- If I remember well in the first scenes there is the appearance of a strange hobo. Does he ever appear again?

Yes, he makes a brief appearance later in the game. No, it's not sexual.

 

[Saerwen]

Note, you might be making a mistake thinking Lena is another "pure girl corrupted into slut" tired porn game trope and repeat of GGGB, but she potentially is already very open sexually at the start of the game, due to her earlier relationship with Axel.

Do send me a pm of games that have a female protagonist like Lena, if you want. I can't stand a questionable barely legal and "nuns" protagonists who turn into nymphomaniacs.

 

[ffive]

Do send me a pm of games that have a female protagonist like Lena, if you want. I can't stand barely legal and "nuns" protagonists who turn into nymphomaniacs.

Sadly i can't really think of any. Scratch that, i can think of one, perhaps: Inner Empire protagonist has none of the corruption bullshit and you can be as sexually open (or not) as you want from the start and throughout.

It's a very different game, though.

 

[Deleted member 5513179]

This episode, on the "devoted to Seymour" path at least, needs to end with Seymour creampieing Lena while she has her legs wrapped around his waist and screaming in ecstasy.

 

[amber111]

Ian's final form
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So his final form is a Bald, Gnome, Chad, Fuckboy.

 

[Nifferman]

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Quick status report:

I finally got the images from the colorist, and I've started editing and finishing them up. Once I have them all finished, I'll ensamble all the pieces of the update, playtest it and release it, hopefully at the end of next week!
View attachment 4141399
While I was waiting, I've started writing the follow up scenes for Lena in chapter 13, and I also did some progress in the artwork. I'm still figuring out which scenes to include in the chapter, since I want to try and move the story forward without wasting too much time. If you guys are interested, I can make a post commenting about the results of the

You must be registered to see the links

we did, which I'm considering when coming up and planning the scenes to include.

Other than that, I'll keep focusing on pushing the next update out!

Looks like her speed is back!!