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prpa said:
Personally, I didn't like Holly's corruption. It doesn't feel gradual—it seems like it happens too fast IMO. Maybe that's why it feels so sad; it seems more like she's being taken advantage of, mostly by Ivy.

I don't know, maybe if we could see it from Holly's POV, it would feel different (more natural). But, i have to say, scene of Lena masturbating to gloryhole video was hot.
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Yeah i agree with that it should of been been way slower progression wise felt lena should've been apart of it more instead of it being pushed by ivy alone.
 
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Markel100 said:
Yeah i agree with that it should of been been way slower progression wise felt lena should've been apart of it more instead of it being pushed by ivy alone.
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I feel letting Holly be corrupted by Ivy is just a recipe for disaster for both of them, she is just speedrunning everything she has missed in her life but in a way that it's gonna end ruining her life and everything she has accomplished.

At least in Lena's path it feels like we are helping Holly be more open and comfortable with sexuality while still being true to herself.
 
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Meiri said:
I feel letting Holly be corrupted by Ivy is just a recipe for disaster for both of them, she is just speedrunning everything she has missed in her life but in a way that it's gonna end ruining her life and everything she has accomplished.

At least in Lena's path it feels like we are helping Holly be more open and comfortable with sexuality while still being true to herself.
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Yeah i feel slutty Holly is going to have an awful ending all the good work she did as a rising author is going to be flushed down the drain when she gets real eyes on her watching her movements.
 
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Apologies for the lack of updates last week. Right now, I'm in the middle of moving to another country, and between all the paperwork, finding a place to live, and countless other tasks, it's been a pretty chaotic time.

As for the upcoming and final update for Chapter 13.3, I had hoped to release it this week, but the colorist has been delayed and I still haven’t received the finished artwork.

I finished writing the additional scenes last week, and as soon as I get the new art, I’ll edit, export, and test the script so I can launch the update.

In the meantime, I’ve already started working on Chapter 14, designing sprites for new outfits, as well as new NPCs, and the new backgrounds I commissioned some time ago have also started arriving.
The plan to release ORS on Steam is also moving forward. I'm managing it with the help of TinyHat Studio, and we’re already working on setting up the store page so you’ll be able to add it to your wishlists, which, from what I hear, is really important to help the game gain visibility on the platform. I'll be making a dedicated post about it soon to ask for your support!
For now, I’m starting to write Chapter 14 while I continue waiting for the new illustrations to arrive. As soon as the final update for 13.3 is ready, I’ll let you know. It should be very soon!
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Looks like a pile of matchboxes
 
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There's this thing called Google, if you're interested. Here's a hint: she's a bestselling author.
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I thought it was funny.

But from wikipedia it just seems her book series turned into erotica. I didn't see anything about sex tapes leaking, especially glory hole scenes, so I don't know why someone would compare her to slutty Holly.
 
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Hungover00 said:
I thought it was funny.

But from wikipedia it just seems her book series turned into erotica. I didn't see anything about sex tapes leaking, especially glory hole scenes, so I don't know why someone would compare her to slutty Holly.
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Her books became more erotic as she herself began exploring her sexuality, got into Polyamory and swinging, etc.. Her necromancer main character in the vampire series is very much based on herself. That series became more grounded eventually, returning to the procedural action mystery roots. It remains very good. The Fey series is also good, but is purely erotica.

I assume, without a grain of evidence, that Holly is likely based on LKH, as she also came from a restrictive religious background and hit instant fame with her first book, and got into some really kinky shit as she explored her sexuality more. Could be wrong, but there are definitely parallels.
 
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