VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[BraziLisk]

As long as they say no homo then it's not gay to fuck other dudes especially if it's your bro.

It's only gay if you are a bottom.

Perry needs to be sent to an Abu Ghraib style feminization camp where he will undergo extensive Red Sparrow training by being subjected to waterboarding in a bathtub full of estrogen on the daily basis before his ass can be considered eligible for tapping.

 

[varpep]

In Ian and Jeremy's case they are slowly working up to it with bicurious high-fives..

Spoiler: No homo

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[SerHawkes]

If there's going to be any pregnancy it would be Alison she clearly wants kids she just looking for the stability to take that plunge.

Normally, as someone who is into breeding, I'd be all about Alison.

However... Given her likelyhood of wanting to baby trap Ian and likely yanderism, I CHOOSE LIFE!

 

[IlikebeingaDIK]

I agree, at least how their relationship has been written thus far, there hasn't been enough ground lain for the choice, for Lena to like him (in the context of an EvaKiss VN).

Unlike most games, the most important feature of EK's writing, I think, is not leaving the emotional reasoning behind the MC's actions for your imagination. Instead your choices are used to develop the MC's feelings, then those are codified in clear monologues and conversations. There's some exceptions when we get radically aberrant choices, usually for the over the top routes and the superslut h-scenes with little LI development. (The polar opposite, where contradicting the personal development is necessary for the eventful plot, is Village Slut...)

I can very much see a way to make the Stan route reasonable if he's developed as the opposite of Axel AND Ian either does not pursue her or turns up the toxicity, he can be a safe haven for a hurt Lena who, based on our choices, has lost interest in "Chads" or finds them threatening. He'd be similar to what Ashley was for Good Jess (or like

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?). Of course a manipulative Lena also can have a Stan route, either as a training experiment for her camgirl or sugar baby routes (but the latter is wobbly enough as it is and she porbably should drop Stan once she hooks the big fish).

The issue with Stan as a LI is that he doesn't "develop" at all to the point where he's within the vicinity of being a good LI for Lena. Stan remains consistently shy/awkward, he stays a slodge physically, never gets any initiative or loses the 'creepy'/unkept look. The character stays stationary.

It makes Lena falling for him pretty out of character. In Lena's POV, she's often vocal/complimentary of behavioral/physical features she likes.

It feels less like Stan drops the incel-y vibe and thus gets a shot with Lena and more like YOU (as a player) are always navigating toward a positive outcomes for him.

It's the same reason I hate Perry as a character. He never develops no matter how often you try to be a bro with him. He stays a man-child who's likely to throw fits.

Meanwhile Wade, who's chill from the get-go, you can actually give him a 'good' outcome which positively impacts his behavior. It's rewarding to ensure that character's well-being.

Also something about tribal tattoos, a moustache and caving Axel's skull in, but that's a fight for another day.

 

[Markel100]

The issue with Stan as a LI is that he doesn't "develop" at all to the point where he's within the vicinity of being a good LI for Lena. Stan remains consistently shy/awkward, he stays a slodge physically, never gets any initiative or loses the 'creepy'/unkept look. The character stays stationary.

It makes Lena falling for him pretty out of character. In Lena's POV, she's often vocal/complimentary of behavioral/physical features she likes.

It feels less like Stan drops the incel-y vibe and thus gets a shot with Lena and more like YOU (as a player) are always navigating toward a positive outcomes for him.

It's the same reason I hate Perry as a character. He never develops no matter how often you try to be a bro with him. He stays a man-child who's likely to throw fits.

Meanwhile Wade, who's chill from the get-go, you can actually give him a 'good' outcome which positively impacts his behavior. It's rewarding to ensure that character's well-being.

Also something about tribal tattoos, a moustache and caving Axel's skull in, but that's a fight for another day.

I 100 percent agree it's why I said in my other post Stan being the opposite of perry would give him a way stronger player base since he would improve on his own we wouldn't have to nudge him to improve.

 

[Prince St Studio]

This game looks really good, I'm excited to try it!

 

[Markel100]

This game looks really good, I'm excited to try it!

It is get ready to make a lot of saves due to all the different paths

 

[Kiki_Broadchester]

I will say that will all the different paths, I do feel a little lost at times. Maybe it's just me, but this feels a little 'messier' compared to Eva's earlier work.

 

[Mystogans_Wrath]

I will say that will all the different paths, I do feel a little lost at times. Maybe it's just me, but this feels a little 'messier' compared to Eva's earlier work.

Don't see how?

 

[Alex_12]

Who draws the images, scenes, etc? Evakiss herself or has she hired some artist??

 

[varpep]

PilotLara I came across a bug in the latest version. When Ian is cheating on Lena and goes to see Alison in chapter 13, he says he and Lena have opened the relationship which is false.

 

[dolfe67]

Who draws the images, scenes, etc? Evakiss herself or has she hired some artist??

She traces from real porn images then commissions an artist to color them

 

[Maccabbee]

She traces from real porn images then commissions an artist to color them

It's sort of like a still version of rotoscoping, like the original Lord of the Rings (by Ralph Bakshi, not Peter Jackson). Love the way it comes out.

 

[OneShotLarry]

Given the incest route in GGGB, and all the ridiculous contrived coincidences in this game, Seymour is going to be revealed as Lena's biological father, isn't he?

Or the homeless guy who was Seymour's business partner is Lena's father.

"My stomach dropped, and I felt like I wanted to vomit. The man I had taken as my lover, whom I had allowed to photograph me in the most intimate of positions, was my...FATHER!!!


As this realization fully dawned on me, I began to heave uncontrollably on the floor in disgust and horror. In the corner of my eye, I saw Seymour, equally distraught, reach for the gun he kept in his desk drawer.

As he cocked the hammer and slid the barrel into his mouth, I made no effort to stop him..."

 

[OneShotLarry]

On the Billy path, I assume it'll turn out he's a Fyre Festival type con artist who doesn't have any actual money and Lena/Holly/Ivy debase themselves based on a mountain of lies, but I could also see a path where, if you sign Seymour's contract and then go ahead and let Billy's 'friends' photograph you without Seymour's permission, I could see Lena arriving at Seymour's office and Billy is dead, a bullet hole in his head and Seymour's goons wrapping him up in plastic.

"I'm very disappointed in you, Lena. We had a deal, and you broke that deal.

Well, now I'm going to break you. Consider yourself 'blackballed' from the modeling industry, and I've already used my considerable influence to make sure no one will hire you at all, not even to work as a janitor at KFC.

And as for your mother, my lawyers have already had her removed from the clinic I placed her in. The nurses literally unplugged her IV lines and wheeled her out onto the sidewalk and left her there, begging for help as they locked the doors.

You're going to end up like my old business partner, living on the streets and begging for scraps. A year from now, you're going to WISH I'd put a bullet in your head like I just did to your 'friend' Billy!"

 

[OneShotLarry]

She traces from real porn images then commissions an artist to color them

Many, many, many comic book and webcomic artists trace from real life photos.

 

[robs1234]

she can still put the game up on steam if she do incest ? i think she will keep the game a bit tame for that but i might be wrong.

 

[GibboBtw]

she can still put the game up on steam if she do incest ? i think she will keep the game a bit tame for that but i might be wrong.

Pretty sure steam does not allow direct incest?, would have to go the "landlord" "roommate" route if you wanna get stuff like that on Steam I think.

 

[ffive]

On the Billy path, I assume it'll turn out he's a Fyre Festival type con artist who doesn't have any actual money

I don't think it's going to be the case, since Billy is established early as Jeremy's rich friend. He's more of an unrestrained "let's have fun" type.

 

[OneShotLarry]

I don't think it's going to be the case, since Billy is established early as Jeremy's rich friend. He's more of an unrestrained "let's have fun" type.

Jeremy says he "thinks" Billy's dad owned a theme park, b/c they got into a theme park for free. It'll turn out Billy was just really good at jumping the turnstyles.