VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[varpep]

PilotLara I came across a bug in the latest version. When Ian is cheating on Lena and goes to see Alison in chapter 13, he says he and Lena have opened the relationship which is false.

 

[dolfe67]

Who draws the images, scenes, etc? Evakiss herself or has she hired some artist??

She traces from real porn images then commissions an artist to color them

 

[Maccabbee]

She traces from real porn images then commissions an artist to color them

It's sort of like a still version of rotoscoping, like the original Lord of the Rings (by Ralph Bakshi, not Peter Jackson). Love the way it comes out.

 

[OneShotLarry]

Given the incest route in GGGB, and all the ridiculous contrived coincidences in this game, Seymour is going to be revealed as Lena's biological father, isn't he?

Or the homeless guy who was Seymour's business partner is Lena's father.

"My stomach dropped, and I felt like I wanted to vomit. The man I had taken as my lover, whom I had allowed to photograph me in the most intimate of positions, was my...FATHER!!!


As this realization fully dawned on me, I began to heave uncontrollably on the floor in disgust and horror. In the corner of my eye, I saw Seymour, equally distraught, reach for the gun he kept in his desk drawer.

As he cocked the hammer and slid the barrel into his mouth, I made no effort to stop him..."

 

[OneShotLarry]

On the Billy path, I assume it'll turn out he's a Fyre Festival type con artist who doesn't have any actual money and Lena/Holly/Ivy debase themselves based on a mountain of lies, but I could also see a path where, if you sign Seymour's contract and then go ahead and let Billy's 'friends' photograph you without Seymour's permission, I could see Lena arriving at Seymour's office and Billy is dead, a bullet hole in his head and Seymour's goons wrapping him up in plastic.

"I'm very disappointed in you, Lena. We had a deal, and you broke that deal.

Well, now I'm going to break you. Consider yourself 'blackballed' from the modeling industry, and I've already used my considerable influence to make sure no one will hire you at all, not even to work as a janitor at KFC.

And as for your mother, my lawyers have already had her removed from the clinic I placed her in. The nurses literally unplugged her IV lines and wheeled her out onto the sidewalk and left her there, begging for help as they locked the doors.

You're going to end up like my old business partner, living on the streets and begging for scraps. A year from now, you're going to WISH I'd put a bullet in your head like I just did to your 'friend' Billy!"

 

[OneShotLarry]

She traces from real porn images then commissions an artist to color them

Many, many, many comic book and webcomic artists trace from real life photos.

 

[robs1234]

she can still put the game up on steam if she do incest ? i think she will keep the game a bit tame for that but i might be wrong.

 

[GibboBtw]

she can still put the game up on steam if she do incest ? i think she will keep the game a bit tame for that but i might be wrong.

Pretty sure steam does not allow direct incest?, would have to go the "landlord" "roommate" route if you wanna get stuff like that on Steam I think.

 

[ffive]

On the Billy path, I assume it'll turn out he's a Fyre Festival type con artist who doesn't have any actual money

I don't think it's going to be the case, since Billy is established early as Jeremy's rich friend. He's more of an unrestrained "let's have fun" type.

 

[OneShotLarry]

I don't think it's going to be the case, since Billy is established early as Jeremy's rich friend. He's more of an unrestrained "let's have fun" type.

Jeremy says he "thinks" Billy's dad owned a theme park, b/c they got into a theme park for free. It'll turn out Billy was just really good at jumping the turnstyles.

 

[Elduriel]

Pretty sure steam does not allow direct incest?, would have to go the "landlord" "roommate" route if you wanna get stuff like that on Steam I think.

steam doesn't really care about incest as much as patreon does for example, lot of them incest games are on there. They are more concerned with stuff like no highschool themes and so on.

 

[GibboBtw]

steam doesn't really care about incest as much as patreon does for example, lot of them incest games are on there. They are more concerned with stuff like no highschool themes and so on.

Oh I know nothing is as bad as Patreon, still though, I thought Steam still didn't allow direct incest? or am I trolling...

EDIT!

(nvm I just found a game literally called "Incest" on steam where you fuck your "blood aunt" and your mother...)

WE'RE GOOD

 

[motomommy]

This Game is amazing

 

[robs1234]

Pretty sure steam does not allow direct incest?, would have to go the "landlord" "roommate" route if you wanna get stuff like that on Steam I think.

yep, but in a game like ORS what is the point of that...

 

[BlandChili]

Pretty sure steam does not allow direct incest?, would have to go the "landlord" "roommate" route if you wanna get stuff like that on Steam I think.

Even is steam does allow it, I don't think Eva would spring incest content on the player part-way through a route. In GGGB all incest routes were very obvious in their intended type of content.

 

[OneShotLarry]

Everybody keeps praising Holly's writing, it would be funny if there was a revelation where the gang meets a "big city" literary critic who reveals that outside of Holly's fantasy lit fanbase, she's viewed as being a cliched writer with treacly dialogue and something of a joke.

 

[BlandChili]

Everybody keeps praising Holly's writing, it would be funny if there was a revelation where the gang meets a "big city" literary critic who reveals that outside of Holly's fantasy lit fanbase, she's viewed as being a cliched writer with treacly dialogue and something of a joke.

I've been wondering if Ian could perhaps get his book published and sell well even if the player makes choices so it's trash, just through some Seymour shenanigans. Fake reviews and all that, complete corruption.

 

[GibboBtw]

Even is steam does allow it, I don't think Eva would spring incest content on the player part-way through a route. In GGGB all incest routes were very obvious in their intended type of content.

Oh I know, I was just genuinely wondering if steam allowed incest, not if it makes sense for ORS to add it.

 

[OneShotLarry]

Finished the playthru I've been doing the last few days.

I tried to do a "realistic" path where Ian and Lena were both "nice" people but Lena wasn't attracted to Ian and never kissed him and decided the earliest she is able to that she isn't attracted to him.

I avoided most "fire" choices to keep their lusts low.

I ended up with Ian not getting to have any sex until Minerva jumps him in her office, and then he falls for Holly because he would never betray his friend Wade and cheat with Cindy.

Poor Lena, meanwhile, didn't get to have any sex at all until Axel seduces her during their photo shoot. Lena hates Seymour but signs his contract when she's left with no other choice after Robert fires her and she doesn't do StalkFap.

She scolded Stan so that path was closed, and during her "private sessions" with Seymour she refuses to use the vibrators.

Lena having sex with Axel sends her down a spiral, causing her to have sex with Ivy after the birthday party. Because Lena is so nice and has low lust, she gently rejects Holly when she kisses Lena, but then spirals more and has sex with Axel at the train station meet up and then has sex with Emma at the end of the current chapter.

 

[JenkinsMcCarb]

The issue with Stan as a LI is that he doesn't "develop" at all to the point where he's within the vicinity of being a good LI for Lena. Stan remains consistently shy/awkward, he stays a slodge physically, never gets any initiative or loses the 'creepy'/unkept look. The character stays stationary.

It makes Lena falling for him pretty out of character. In Lena's POV, she's often vocal/complimentary of behavioral/physical features she likes.

It feels less like Stan drops the incel-y vibe and thus gets a shot with Lena and more like YOU (as a player) are always navigating toward a positive outcomes for him.

It's the same reason I hate Perry as a character. He never develops no matter how often you try to be a bro with him. He stays a man-child who's likely to throw fits.

Meanwhile Wade, who's chill from the get-go, you can actually give him a 'good' outcome which positively impacts his behavior. It's rewarding to ensure that character's well-being.

Also something about tribal tattoos, a moustache and caving Axel's skull in, but that's a fight for another day.

Which Path is the one to improve wade?