VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[ffive]

I think Minerva already took that position.
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I'm sure they could share. If girls can have their DAP scenes, why not our boi Ian serving both his mistresses.

 

[IlikebeingaDIK]

There are many things that Eva hasn't made happen. For example, the supposed dinner with Ian's parents.

Lol I feel like considering what's happening to Jordan Peterson rn it'd be in poor taste. Somehow I'd still like it to happen

The fight against Axel will eventually happen

Didn't she remove the Axel_hurt variable from the game?

Of course you dommed Minerva and not called her Mommy.

A man after my own heart

 

[Ray_D]

Of course you dommed Minerva and not called her Mommy.

I think Ian already has enough unresolved mommy issues.

I'm sure they could share. If girls can have their DAP scenes, why not our boi Ian serving both his mistresses.

I guess it depends on how Agnes looks under that dress..

Ian is going to need a lot of alcohol for that.

 

[Saerwen]

I guess it depends on how Agnes looks under that dress..
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Ian is going to need a lot of alcohol for that.

It doesn't matter how she looks like, the most important thing is that she's wet and tight.

 

[Ray_D]

Lol I feel like considering what's happening to Jordan Peterson rn it'd be in poor taste. Somehow I'd still like it to happen

That's basically the best time for Ian to introduce Lena or one of the girls to his parents.

Didn't she remove the Axel_hurt variable from the game?

She removed several variables, but they are still functional within the game.

 

[Ray_D]

It doesn't matter how she looks like, the most important thing is that she's wet and tight.

Well, that apartment isn't going to buy itself. Sometimes you have to make sacrifices..

 

[falsapersona]

I guess it depends on how Agnes looks under that dress..
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Ian is going to need a lot of alcohol for that.

If Adonis Axel can, so my boi Ian too

 

[Ray_D]

If Adonis Axel can, so my boi Ian too

Well, I always suspected that Axel was Agnes's protégé and sugar baby. But Eva hasn't confirmed it yet.

 

[sztrb]

I would love it if that were the case. How sweet it would be if Seymour were only a big pretender, neck deep* of debts, and with no real power to mess up the lives of the rest of the characters, but unfortunately, it looks like he does hold a lot of influence and power, shutting every door in Lena's path except for his and making his heart desire with the town, at least for now


That would be the one, guess that also canonize being Ashley's sugardaddy too

Given that green necklace was a loaner, you may be onto something.

 

[DaLuke2]

That's to be expected lol

They want a GGGB repeat That's something we agreed upon.

Eva was delaying the inevitable by bleaching Billy.

Holly turning into a DickGobbler3000 two weeks into learning poll dance gave it away.

Absolutely.
My problem with that game is that the slut path on GGGB worked, for two reasons:1. It was written as a parody, and it was hilarious 2. the labyrinth of choices and options was incredibly wider and more complex, so you kept interest.
In ORS the slut path is not written as a parody, and without the same degree of complexity. It also sounds completely off, given the personality of both Lena and Holly in the early chapters of the game.
The Lena that used to wrap herself in arts, books and music, all of a sudden, in a club's bathroom, screams "gimme ur alpha cock" or has inner monologues like "another seed I had conquered". It's just not credible.
Similarly Holly ending up at a gloryhole just because Lena convinced her to stick to pole dancing is not just ridiculous, it is pretty embarrassing. EK is better than this.
That's why I stick to Ian/Lena romance, still hoping for the swinging coming up after five years, however EK keeps on developing the poorest branches of her work instead of that one. And that upcoming update will just confirm this.

 

[Deleted member 9232069]

Absolutely.
My problem with that game is that the slut path on GGGB worked, for two reasons:1. It was written as a parody, and it was hilarious 2. the labyrinth of choices and options was incredibly wider and more complex, so you kept interest.
In ORS the slut path is not written as a parody, and without the same degree of complexity. It also sounds completely off, given the personality of both Lena and Holly in the early chapters of the game.
The Lena that used to wrap herself in arts, books and music, all of a sudden, in a club's bathroom, screams "gimme ur alpha cock" or has inner monologues like "another seed I had conquered". It's just not credible.
Similarly Holly ending up at a gloryhole just because Lena convinced her to stick to pole dancing is not just ridiculous, it is pretty embarrassing. EK is better than this.
That's why I stick to Ian/Lena romance, still hoping for the swinging coming up after five years, however EK keeps on developing the poorest branches of her work instead of that one. And that upcoming update will just confirm this.

We dont really know much about Lena's backstory, plus her backstory, her abilities, mindset is influenced by our choices throughout the game, nothings set in stone. We dont know if Lena used to wrap herself in arts and music too much, until we confirm this through our choices. She could've had a massive body count for all we know, and I guess Holly's slut path should be criticized because she did become a slut way too easily I guess. Its not bad per se, but yeah we can say without any doubt that it could've gone better.

 

[ffive]

Given that green necklace was a loaner, you may be onto something.

Do you mean the necklace given to Lena? It's not a loan, when Lena is in Rome she is asked by Agnes to return it for a short while so she can fit it with a diamond instead, at Seymour's request.

 

[Socrambus]

There are many things that Eva hasn't made happen. For example, the supposed dinner with Ian's parents.

It would be interesting to watch their family dynamics and how they would react to the possible different Ians. Specially his mother that we know very little about. Thing is that it would contribute little to nothing to the game's plot. From a sentimental point of view, their relationship doesn't seem to justify Ian wanting them to meet his girlfriend. And introducing them as an alternative financial support for getting a house or helping with Ian's career would undercut Ian's plot providing a cop out instead of him being forced to deal with Seymour possibly compromising his morals.

 

[robs1234]

how exactly can you tell the level of chadness of Ian ? i was replaying some scenes and it was asking. Or you need some 3rd party

 

[falsapersona]

In ORS the slut path is not written as a parody, and without the same degree of complexity. It also sounds completely off, given the personality of both Lena and Holly in the early chapters of the game.

I don't share the sentiment that GGGB slut path was written as parody, maybe simplistic in how some decisions escalate and kept impacting Ashley, but the morality system is impressively effective considering how damn small the game is and the amount of paths you could follow

It would be interesting to watch their family dynamics and how they would react to the possible different Ians. Specially his mother that we know very little about. Thing is that it would contribute little to nothing to the game's plot. From a sentimental point of view, their relationship doesn't seem to justify Ian wanting them to meet his girlfriend.

She does have a good relationship with her step-dad. Her mom is more of a pain in the ass, but I don't think she acts out of malice. She is just a mom being a mom, and unfortunately, when you are the responsible child it sometimes feels like they favor the troublemakers in the family too often.

But meeting the parents is looking more like a natural escalation of Ian/Lena as a couple, it's not like her mom would invite her daughter's ex, whom she repeatedly has said she doesn't want to have a social relationship with to their house the same day that they have arranged to meet their new possible son-in-law, that would be... really fun to see

how exactly can you tell the level of chadness of Ian ? i was replaying some scenes and it was asking. Or you need some 3rd party

Only with a mod. You can manually follow the decisions that adds to the ian_chad counter with URM for renpy, but I only know of that method, maybe the JDMOD, which gets updated quite frequently, shows those stats

 

[Lord Bradley]

I have never tried to go after Cherry, how is the relationship dynamic? Do I have to stay away from Alison/Emma? Can you corrupt Cherry and have her be sexual or is she more for romantic purposes? Will Lena hate you if you pursue Cherry? Are there any threesomes involving Cherry? Thanks in advance for any info.

 

[Gicoo]

I have never tried to go after Cherry, how is the relationship dynamic? Do I have to stay away from Alison/Emma? Can you corrupt Cherry and have her be sexual or is she more for romantic purposes? Will Lena hate you if you pursue Cherry? Are there any threesomes involving Cherry? Thanks in advance for any info.

Cherry is fairly secluded from other girls. Aside from Alison and later on Lena and Holly, Ian can date other girls at the side.
The relationship is mostly a slow burn, both recovering from their past relationships and starting a wholesome new one. The beginning is tricky, but then its a very straightforward dating to the point of it being one of the less exciting romances. There is hardly any drama or conflict after the first impressions.

You can go after her and Emma at the same time, there is no casual approach to her. Lena doesn't like if and if Ians dates both, he will have to decide. Not threesomes.

 

[Socrambus]

She does have a good relationship with her step-dad. Her mom is more of a pain in the ass, but I don't think she acts out of malice. She is just a mom being a mom, and unfortunately, when you are the responsible child it sometimes feels like they favor the troublemakers in the family too often.

But meeting the parents is looking more like a natural escalation of Ian/Lena as a couple, it's not like her mom would invite her daughter's ex, whom she repeatedly has said she doesn't want to have a social relationship with to their house the same day that they have arranged to meet their new possible son-in-law, that would be... really fun to see

I meant Ian's parents, not Lena's. I think the op was talking about Ian's dad suggesting to have lunch with him and his mother next Sunday (during chapter 10). That lunch happened off-screen and has not been referenced again as far as I can remember.

But I disagree with your take on Lena's mom because they are not using their own money to "help" Lena's brother, they are using the money Lena sends them specifically to help them. That would not be cool in any case, but it's even less cool as Lena is not rich at all and has to make an effort to provide for them. That and the thing with Axel shows a total disrespect for her daughter and a "I know better than you" attitude. Which is pretty rich coming from parents shameless enough to rely on their daughter for supporting them.

 

[falsapersona]

I meant Ian's parents, not Lena's. I think the op was talking about Ian's dad suggesting to have lunch with him and his mother next Sunday (during chapter 10). That lunch happened off-screen and has not been referenced again as far as I can remember.

After the 2nd conversation with Ian's Dad, got it

But I disagree with your take on Lena's mom because they are not using their own money to "help" Lena's brother, they are using the money Lena sends them specifically to help them. That would not be cool in any case, but it's even less cool as Lena is not rich at all and has to make an effort to provide for them. That and the thing with Axel shows a total disrespect for her daughter and a "I know better than you" attitude. Which is pretty rich coming from parents shameless enough to rely on their daughter for supporting them.

I agree with you; giving the money away not matter the reason it was not cool at all, especially when your daughter is making an extraordinary effort to give you a helping hand even when she is *in a tough spot herself. But for me, she acted like a mother would, and maybe is one of those cases in which it is noticeable that the author is not from the States, because as much as I don't think the right thing to do, it wouldn't surprise me either

 

[Deleted member 9531151]

There's absolutely no way a girl like Cindy would ever let a guy like Ian hit . Did evakiss choose Ian as the main guy herself or was it a poll decision?