VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[IlikebeingaDIK]

The "baby trapping" plot line is only there if Ian doesn't respect her requests for a condom.

Pretty sure there's drama surrounding condoms for that relationship regardless. If Ian accepts all the "put this condom real quick" from Alison, he'll complain or have a negative reaction about it at some point cuz it dont feel good. If he nuts in her early, the baby trap is set. If he goes raw and pulls out she still puts him on a rubber diet and you get same negative dialogues about it.

Pretty sure Alison was written to be an annoying character like Louise, she just had more screen time to simmer so ppl are used to her corny ass behavior while Louise came in so late that EK had to get her acting crazy obsessive right after the hook up.

 

[DaLuke2]

what if this will be the chance for Lena to have a MFM threesome before Ian if they in a relationship

That's exactly my fear, and I will never forgive EK to have taken this direction. This is literally screwing up her own game.

 

[BlandChili]

That's exactly my fear, and I will never forgive EK to have taken this direction. This is literally screwing up her own game.

Having optional fmm without one of the MC's?

 

[Socrambus]

Pretty sure there's drama surrounding condoms for that relationship regardless. If Ian accepts all the "put this condom real quick" from Alison, he'll complain or have a negative reaction about it at some point cuz it dont feel good. If he nuts in her early, the baby trap is set. If he goes raw and pulls out she still puts him on a rubber diet and you get same negative dialogues about it.

Alison's pill issue is one of the most unnecessary forced drama plots in the game. There are plenty of contraceptive alternatives that somehow doesn't seem to exist in the game's universe. The breeding kink and the baby trapping if Ian doesn't show interest/commitment are cool but all the arguments about her issues with the pill become repetitive too fast and are bullshit.

Pretty sure Alison was written to be an annoying character like Louise, she just had more screen time to simmer so ppl are used to her corny ass behavior while Louise came in so late that EK had to get her acting crazy obsessive right after the hook up.

The background of the characters is also different, Alison is one of Ian's best friends since at least high school and that makes more believable/less crazy her obsession with him than Louise getting hooked up after a "I like your style" comment.

 

[JKING92]

The background of the characters is also different, Alison is one of Ian's best friends since at least high school and that makes more believable/less crazy her obsession with him than Louise getting hooked up after a "I like your style" comment.

I'd beg to differ on Louise's part. I think her fast-driven infatuation with Ian lines up quite nicely with her clingy personality. Add to that the messy breakup from Jeremy, and you have your typical needy one.

 

[Socrambus]

I'd beg to differ on Louise's part. I think her fast-driven infatuation with Ian lines up quite nicely with her clingy personality. Add to that the messy breakup from Jeremy, and you have your typical needy one.

I was not saying otherwise, even if it happens a little too much, too fast IMO. My point was her and Alison are different cases.

 

[dolfe67]

I was not saying otherwise, even if it happens a little too much, too fast IMO. My point was her and Alison are different cases.

Everything happens too much too fast in porn stories in general (even in non-porn stories) otherwise it would be boring. Not many slow burn lewd games are successful, the ones that are have good erotic tension.

 

[Saerwen]

Everything happens too much too fast in porn stories in general (even in non-porn stories) otherwise it would be boring. Not many slow burn lewd games are successful, the ones that are have good erotic tension.

Yes. You know it's a good writing when erotica is keeping your interest.

 

[BlandChili]

Everything happens too much too fast in porn stories in general (even in non-porn stories) otherwise it would be boring.

Just see how people whine about no Ian/Ivy yet.

 

[mehGusta]

Alison's pill issue is one of the most unnecessary forced drama plots in the game. There are plenty of contraceptive alternatives that somehow doesn't seem to exist in the game's universe. The breeding kink and the baby trapping if Ian doesn't show interest/commitment are cool but all the arguments about her issues with the pill become repetitive too fast and are bullshit.



The background of the characters is also different, Alison is one of Ian's best friends since at least high school and that makes more believable/less crazy her obsession with him than Louise getting hooked up after a "I like your style" comment.

i always thought that allison's guilt is making her demand from ian to wear a condom and that she instead secretly desires to get pregnant so that her throwing tantrums about contraceptives is just an excuse to slowly work up the courage to not take any contraceptives. and i don't mean that in a sinister way how she wants to manipulate ian into agreeing becoming a father, i think she is conflicted with herself and that's why she does one thing but desires another.

 

[IlikebeingaDIK]

all the arguments about her issues with the pill become repetitive too fast and are bullshit.

Agree with it becoming kinda repetitive, that being said, Alison being annoying and the whole relationship becoming frustrating does make sense. It fits the character.

i think she is conflicted with herself and that's why she does one thing but desires another.

Ngl I dont think it's that deep.

 

[pantypriv]

Why not both?

 

[ExtremeLips]

Dear Eva, stop forsing lesbian stuff and start making hardcore bondage shit.

This. I find lesbian scenes very boring

 

[harsha_26]

Whats with the Slut Holly Butt Tattoo? an anyone explain?

 

[Ray_D]

Whats with the Slut Holly Butt Tattoo? an anyone explain?

It's a slut tattoo, you know, to symbolize her change. Google slut tattoos and you'll see different examples.

 

[ExtremeLips]

Whats with the Slut Holly Butt Tattoo? an anyone explain?

It's a slut tattoo, you know, to symbolize her change. Google slut tattoos and you'll see different examples.

I hope they don't give her more. Ruining Holly with ugly tattoos

 

[Erectosaurus]

Just see how people whine about no Ian/Ivy yet.

Don’t bully them too much, Eva has been blue balling them for a while now to the point where I feel bad.

 

[Saerwen]

It's a slut tattoo, you know, to symbolize her change. Google slut tattoos and you'll see different examples.

That's crap. Ian should brand all women as his bitches.

 

[Ray_D]

I hope they don't give her more. Ruining Holly with ugly tattoos

Don't worry, next on Eva's list will be to give Holly a piercing in her nose or nipples to symbolize her final downfall.

That's crap. Ian should brand all his bitches.

Nice.

 

[varpep]

I hope they don't give her more. Ruining Holly with ugly tattoos

I think the tattoo is cute. I like it. It's lowkey and easily concealable. Plus you only get to see it if you bed her or fell her