VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

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Saerwen

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BlandChili said:
It is true that she is somewhat lacking in the romance department, so I get why some users would prefer to see additions there over just purely sexual options. I think we are supposed to count Stan in this category too, though part of the appeal with him to many players is the degradation aspect I think, "Lena getting with the fatty," to be blunt so therefore his route lends itself less well to romance.

The only real issue there is that any romances introduced at this point would probably end up feeling rushed, with the assumption that we are in the game's final stretch now. Unless Eva decided to rework them into the story with retroactive content. Fuckboys can always be introduced randomly, no one expects them to have emotional impact on Lena.

Sure, he is sort of on the extreme end where almost all his routes have optional romantic themes you can pick. I'm guessing that's why quite a few people are so eager to get him with Ivy too, that she seems uncomplicated when it comes to romantic potential.


Yes, I think in general Eva tends to not allow us to just be super casual. Even a cameo like Jack who could have been entirely a one-off option gets the "relationship" treatment where you can optionally keep open the possibility of seeing him again or even dating him potentially in the future. It'd be nice with some sexually nonchalant characters too who don't need a whole wind-down section after battering up Lena's insides, discussing the future with her. Lets us meet some people who just leaves Lena mind-blown and well-fucked in the bathroom stall without all the chit-chat! :LOL:

We see it with John too where we're told Lena is going on a date with him, but then we don't see the date and go on to just have a generic sex scene with him. I feel like he's designed the wrong way, when Lena tells us she considers some fool a "dating option" we should see the date and get to decide if he's interesting enough to bang then. Otherwise just let us be wholly casual and call him up just because Lena's holes are full of slutty need and she needs someone to scrape them clean...:eek:

I don't even recall if John is added to the agenda for Lena. I would like Eva to feature a few characters with Lena and Ian both that don't get pages there and are just clear sexual options.
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Axel can be that guy. Since he's Lena's ex romantic boyfriend, he can be her casual hook up body. One last sex with the ex!
 
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BraziLisk said:
I was going to write an essay about why Alison is the worst LI for Ian but she is so boring that i gave up. So i will leave you guys with "subtittles"

Alison :sleep:
Cherry :oops:
Cindy :love:
Emma :p
Gillian :rolleyes:
Holly :geek:
Ivy :devilish:
Jessica :cool:
Lena :giggle:
Louise o_O
Minerva :sneaky:
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I will not have you dis Holly by only having one kind of emoji. As such, I shall now punish you by using three different Hollies.

Nerdy Shy Holly: :geek:
Confident Holly: :giggle:
Slut Holly: :BootyTime:
 
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Yellowie The Goldie said:
Tbf, she is pretty hot. But she can't compare to other girls like Lena, Cindy, Ivy. She's on the lower spectrum of hotness, but she's on it.

At the end of the day, it's all a personal preference. Some people like a girl like her, some people don't.
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Yes i agree Louise is like Aubrey Plaza i think, some people find her hot as fuck and others dont.
 
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Saerwen

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dolfe67 said:
Women can't have "harem", it's called being the town bicycle :Kappa:

Unless it's a lesbian harem :BootyTime:
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If Lena have just 5 guys being devoted only to her then that's enough for me to be a harem. :love: Anyway, the search showed me only 6 games tagged with harem but that's why there are books for women with reverse harem/polyamory tag.
 
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Xupuzulla said:
We are one day and one discussion away from"the problem with Robert is that...":rolleyes::LOL:
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The problem with Robert is that he is a horrible piece of shit garbage human who doesn't want to settle for a relationship but will blatantly manipulate and treat a woman like trash if he gets rejected. Absolute reject. You know it's bad when (potential) cheater Mike is somehow more considerate than Robert.

Is this what you wanted? :D
 
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Yellowie The Goldie said:
The problem with Robert is that he is a horrible piece of shit garbage human who doesn't want to settle for a relationship but will blatantly manipulate and treat a woman like trash if he gets rejected. Absolute reject. You know it's bad when (potential) cheater Mike is somehow more considerate than Robert.

Is this what you wanted? :D
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Stop before someone quotes you and starts arguing about Robert for the million time:KEK:
 
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Yellowie The Goldie said:
The problem with Robert is that he is a horrible piece of shit garbage human who doesn't want to settle for a relationship but will blatantly manipulate and treat a woman like trash if he gets rejected. Absolute reject. You know it's bad when (potential) cheater Mike is somehow more considerate than Robert.

Is this what you wanted? :D
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No one likes Robert. I think that only user RobertKing or something ikes him as far as I remember.
 
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IlikebeingaDIK said:
Lena is fetish catalyzer. It's considerably easier to squeeze fetish scenes using her as the central point (black guys, gang bangs, big jacked dudes, rich old dudes, women, sex work, adult content creation, D/s dynamics, etc.) than it is to do it with Ian without losing coherence with the 'universe'.

Ian is more narratively constrained. You can't give him endless one-off partners without having him approach these potential partners which would effectively fuck up his grounded character design. He'd become a Jeremy without the dick size. Ian ends up hooking up with characters he has proximity/history with which will, logically, spark a relationship.
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"You can't give him endless one-off partners"
yeah well who said anything about endless? I would be happy with just a few.
sztrb said:
Which to me shows that the Ian/Lena relationship is the worst one in the game. Sans for Stan and Perry getting to fuck.



The funny part is that Jeremy is a two pump chump. So, even if Ian doesn't have a massive dong, he at least doesn't cum from a girl just putting her lips on his dick.



Between, Allison, Emma and Holly; its clear that Ian has a lot of girls who have genuinely been in love with him for quite a while.

I'd argue that Cindy could be thrown into that mix too.

Although, Emma is clearly the hottest option.



Pretty sure she can. In ultimate slut Lena, she can fuck Ian, Jeremy, Mike, that guy who gets his ass fucking curb stomped, Mark, the patreon guy who paid like $500 to be a one off character, Axel, old wrinkey balls Seymour and disgustingly enough small peen Stan.

Most of those are not just one offs either.



Some advice for you...

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Brah, you don't fuck, do you?

Hot girls are a different breed. Besides, most girls/women aren't just going to let you stick your dick in their pussy and ass on an off chance that its a one time thing; not without a likely discussion beforehand.



I mean, after Ian hooke up with her... she definitely has a pain in her...

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Ass.

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"Between, Allison, Emma and Holly; its clear that Ian has a lot of girls who have genuinely been in love with him for quite a while."
and here is the flip side, IlikebeingaDIK. doesn't that fuck up his character design as well? everyone falling in love with the above average dude? i dunno but if you ask me i think for a believable grounded character design, a few random hookups are less detrimental, than the amount of love relationships he already has.
 
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Saerwen

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sztrb said:
Which to me shows that the Ian/Lena relationship is the worst one in the game.
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We agree to disagree. Not only their relationship is the best written when you go love route, they may be a cannon. Eva did a golden thing here, not many games have multiple protagonist(completed), I can't remember what other games have protagonists who can date each other if they exist. I agree that Ian's part is better written than Lena's since her route lack of good male romantic options.
 
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