VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[LaVinotinto]

So this update is just Lena Slut path?

We work in the dark to serve the light

Fuckn Hero.

 

[sztrb]

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Lena: "Dunno, the two of you can tell me."

Reminds me of the Back To The Future parody from College Humour:


Also, holy fuck, Jess looks so good:

 

[ffive]

Daamn



of all possible things to happen at this party, playing a matchmaker for Danny and Billy wasn't on my bingo card.

 

[Gundamu0079]

lmao i see ek still loves cucking her male mc....
reminds of her previous game

 

[sztrb]

Move over Grandpa, who takes pictures with their phone like this? lol



I genuinely can't take this guy seriously. He's such a fucking loser even though he just fucked.



He looks like some attempt at what K-pop dudes look like, but is actually just lame.

 

[whamma]

My only problem with Lena getting a QoS tattoo is that there aren't any characters that can take advantage of it besides Marcel and Jeremy. Obviously, some more can be introduced. By the time that Ashley could have conceivably received a QoS tattoo she would have already been introduced to Jason, Tyrones, and Tyrone's posse, plus watched interracial porn.

Also, missed opportunity for Lena to ask about Jeremy and Allison. Perhaps on day three, but that Jeremy mentioned regularly having sex with Allison in front of Lena and she didn't respond at all was disappointing. Especially, with Lena then going on to receive a QoS tattoo. Like where is her sense of sisterhood with her fellow Queens

Doesn't matter if there won't be any new black characters or not. The fact that you'll see the tattoo peeking out in every sex scene Lena will be in is hot. That, and her fucking non-black guys and seeing their reaction would be really good.

 

[sztrb]

Hopefully Zarina makes it into more chapters in the future.



lol... is this Stan's dad? Cause the dick size is about the same.

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[Lord Bradley]

These specific place isolated updates feel bad already, but this time it didn't even wrap up. And unlike beach event which was also split up, it at least had better cast and different perspectives. It wasn't bad update in a sense that what was presented was well done, but it just leaves a bad taste in my mouth if there is so much stuff I am looking forward to and only 1 tiny part see action. I just miss whole cast having irl encounter, working, having a dance in a club or drink at a pub, then going back home to whoever and having some nice sex, next morning check out social media posts from last night adventures and chat about it through text messages with people involved. Do 2 perspectives of this 1 day and a half and there you go, sounds fucking awesome update that feels like haven't happened for eternity. Without Ian perspective game always feels stuck in time, most of the other cast just stops existing. Why can't Lena perspectie check in on how other people are doing, Lena perspective is only girl drama and random cock sucking, and I say that as someone who enjoys perverted kinky action, it just feels so fucking bland and repetitive with only Lena.

 

[Jacowboy]

so dumbn questrion maybe, but it says "alpha", so does that mean it's still not the proper update release?

 

[sztrb]

Having done one playthrough, I feel like this is just a set up for Lena to go into porn.

The old man and Billy are both fucking skeevy. Given that Ivy has sent Holly's photos to Billy, and is seemingly attempting to ply Lena with drugs at every opportunity, if you didn't think Ivy was a garbage person and a terrible friend before... sure seems like it now.

The whole chapter seems like its all some ploy to actually do more skeevy shit at the end of the day. I still think its all some pervy thing that Seymour has cooked up. With the way things are going though, Lena may end up becoming a Dubai Porta-Pottie before long.

far better off than i feared!
pool party isn't tyrone's pool party 2.0 . seemingly ian is coming for the 3rd day. none of the party people are faceless nobodies (well still. we don't know what will happen on 3rd day). catfights were surprisingly not as annoying as expected.
and i agree, zarina was all around a nice addition to the cast!

I disagree wholeheartedly, it seems like the set up is the exact same; minus more details and more debauchery.

With the branded swimwear, it definitely gives off porno shoot vibes.

These specific place isolated updates feel bad already, but this time it didn't even wrap up. And unlike beach event which was also split up, it at least had better cast and different perspectives. It wasn't bad update in a sense that what was presented was well done, but it just leaves a bad taste in my mouth if there is so much stuff I am looking forward to and only 1 tiny part see action. I just miss whole cast having irl encounter, working, having a dance in a club or drink at a pub, then going back home to whoever and having some nice sex, next morning check out social media posts from last night adventures and chat about it through text messages with people involved. Do 2 perspectives of this 1 day and a half and there you go, sounds fucking awesome update that feels like haven't happened for eternity. Without Ian perspective game always feels stuck in time, most of the other cast just stops existing. Why can't Lena perspectie check in on how other people are doing, Lena perspective is only girl drama and random cock sucking, and I say that as someone who enjoys perverted kinky action, it just feels so fucking bland and repetitive with only Lena.

May I remind you that the beach one was broken into 2 updates, both of which were janky and jagged until the most recent one kind of fixed most of the issues.

 

[rolinga69]

so dumbn questrion maybe, but it says "alpha", so does that mean it's still not the proper update release?

Yup we have to wait bc those new images you saw are the patreon version of the update and we have to wait i dunno how many days for that version to appear here c:

 

[manticore124]

Meanwhile Good Jess is worried about her relationship and Lena can suggest her to break up AND Ivy may plan to drug her.

Gods, Ivy is such a horrible person. I love her.

 

[sztrb]

I think between all the shit she's done with Axel, and now this pool party. It seems like Ivy is not the friend that Lena thought she was.

Is she trying to traffic her? I don't know, but pushing drugs is certainly something. It does seem like Ivy is a piece of shit though. Perhaps she's the actual big bad.

 

[bamachine]

I played this some time back but held off for awhile for the routes to develop. Question for those who played it, is there an ending yet for the two main characters to be together with maybe another of the girls in a throuple or even harem for my dude Ian? I know it has the harem tag but it did not seem to be headed that way, the last time I played.

 

[ffive]

lol... is this Stan's dad? Cause the dick size is about the same.

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People and their porn brain rot. It's this size when he's soft. When he's erect Lena notes that he would give Axel run for his money in this department.

(Lena can't even take him fully up in the ass without excessive earlier training)

 

[sztrb]

People and their porn brain rot. It's this size when he's soft. When he's erect Lena notes that he would give Axel run for his money in this department.

(Lena can't even take him fully up in the ass without excessive earlier training)

Brah. It was a joke.

Also; pretty sure her willingly fucking the dude for money means that she's going to stroke his ego about his dick size.

 

[Ray_D]

Daamn

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of all possible things to happen at this party, playing a matchmaker for Danny and Billy wasn't on my bingo card.

Danny and Billy after an unknown amount of beer and drugs.

 

[tak51]

Don't want to offend but isn't the Nymph swimsuit design actually tasteless? I wonder what's people opinion about it.

 

[ffive]

Hmm, PilotLara there're some inconsistences in the update, not really odd for an alpha i guess.

* If Lena chooses to go topless, the game marks it as

            $ v14_topless = 1

and if she then puts the top back on for the photoshoot with Danny, the game "downgrades" the variable to

                        $ v14_topless = 0.5

But subsequent checks after the photoshoot all tests simply
if v14_topless:

So they are also passed with value of 0.5, and the game is acting as if Lena is still going around topless. These tests should be for
if v14_topless == 1
instead.

* not sure if intentional, but Lena can either accept Danny's photoshop or reject it "because she doesn't feel like it", but there's no option/mention that she isn't allowed to do any work, in scenario where she's working for Seymour.

* Ivy's disguise as a human being briefly fails at this point:



(the game shows ivy1 object which it shouldn't)

* the checks here are in wrong order:

                if ian_lena_open:
                    v "But you're not ruling it out, huh? You've got an open relationship for a reason!"
                elif ian_lena_couple and lena_cheating == 2:
                    v "But you're not ruling it out, huh? When has having a boyfriend stopped you? You and Mike are birds of a feather in that sense..."
                elif v12_ian_lena_breakup:
                    v "But you're not ruling it out, huh? You're single now, after all!"

It should be checking for breakup first, otherwise (since variables like _cheating and _open are preserved when breakup happens) it causes Ivy to speak as if Lena is still in relationship with Ian and either cheating on him or in open relationship.

* after Billy's presentation, Jess gets removed from the scene along with everyone but Zarina, but she still gets some lines while invisible:

    hide jessg
    hide jessb
//...
    if jess_bad:
        js "Pretty much what I expected. But I've been filmed wearing worse, so..."
    else:
        $ fjess = "sad"
        js "Ugh, not the styling I would've chosen at all..."
    if seymour_desire:
        js "Lucky for you, you don't have to wear it."

* charisma requirement for this line seems to be reversed:

            menu:
                "{image=icon_charisma.webp}I'm not shy" if lena_charisma < 5 or v14_zarina:
//...
                    l "Oh, don't worry, I'm not shy. Just curious what you've got planned for me."

Pretty sure it makes more sense for actually charismatic Lena to act bold.

* a typo in variable name causes a crash here:

While running game code:
  File "game/scripts/story/chapter14b.rpy", line 12014, in <module>
NameError: name 'v14_anthiny_massage' is not defined

* this check ignores possibility Lena has used will point to avoid creampie:

            elif v14_pill == False:
                "I ran my fingers across my pussy, dripping with cum."

* Lena finally gets her MMF:

 

[ffive]

Don't want to offend but isn't the Nymph swimsuit design actually tasteless? I wonder what's people opinion about it.

Yes, and a number of people including Lena can tell just as much about it.